ff:rabba ve... tere ishq mein..EPI:1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok people I know the response for my trailer is zero.. but still cant stop myself from doing this.. here I give you the first episode of my ff "rabba ve.. tere ishq mein"

The house looks like a mini palace .. but decorated for a shaadi it looks nothing less than a palace.. as it is shaadi ka ghaar .. it is filled with many people and happiness..

Badhe papa..(bp)father of the bride: busy in welcoming the guests

Badhe maa..(bm):is very busy too..

Obviously there is a marriage that is being held

Dadi:ordering works : STOP ACTING.. and start working!!

Kushi's maa:kushi's father is dead long back..

with the bride : looking very beautiful beta.. why are you so afraid.. don't worry everything will be fine.. as per leaving us all.. ur in laws are our family friends right? Emm.. take care

Anjali :bride: kushi .. where is kushi?

Km: kushi! Some where around here.. I will send her to you.. ok

Km leaves the room

Some random person(srp): aunty where is kushi?

Km:😊

Bm: have you seen kushi? To srp

Dadi:kushi! Where is she? Iam sure she is up to some mischeif!!

About to sit in the near by diwan.. a group of kids suddenly surround her not letting to sit..

Kid1:dadi you cant sit here..

Dadi:why?

Kid 2: because is this for the bride groom family..

Dadi: well there are many other empty seats..

Kid3: but dadi..

Ignoring them she takes the seat..

Kid3:kushi didi said to make sure the bridegroom seats here..

Well .. the pappad shutters making sounds..

Dadi: kushi!!!!!

Every one laughs..

The deep pink lehanga.. was held up to the angle to run easily.. her legs are covered with mehendhi.. heavy payal ' she makes way between the people.. comes in to the garden.. they are large crowds.. making her hiding easy.. her slim figure.. very much perfect.. she suddenly hides behind a person wearing a black suit.. tightly grabs his coat with her long slim fingers.. they too are covered with mehendhi..

The man: what the..

Kushi:sshhh..

She says placing her index finger on her bow shaped lips..

She peaks .. viewing .. her eyes.. just above his shoulder..

Beautiful eyes.. dove shaped.. deep honey in colour.. showing full exictment now..

Kushi: keep moving..

She says pulling him from the back.. bending low to hide herself

He reculantly moves a bit'

She peaks again.. her beautiful face.. smiling..

She moves a bit more.. and losses control as she reaches the edge of the pool

Kushi:Ooo..

The man turns back.. and catches her hand pulls her towards him.. all with a perfect gesture..

They look at each other.. she a bit shocked..

He a bit annoyed..

She in his arms..

dressed for marriage.. she looks like the bride and nothing less..
(i cant come up with any words to describe barun.. as he is very well.. imprinted is ur memories.. you can just imagine him.. the perfect HIM)
The time stops there to allow some close up shots

One of her many bangles.. having junkas hanging strucks to is coat..

She observes as she tries to move away..

Kushi: carefully.. they are my fav..

too late he is gone.. she lost the junka..

Cursing the man under her breath

Dadi:kushi!!

Kushi:oh no.. what happened dadi?

Dadi:STOP ACTING!!!

Kushi: what..? I have done nothing..

Dadi: pappad..!!!

K: you want pappad? Now it self? Wait I will'

Dadi: YOU!!!

Kushi hugs her and runs from there..

Km:kushi where are you? Didi is asking for you..

Kushi: ok maa..

Srp:kushi !!! so where is ur groom.. you like just perfect for marriage.. found any one from the crowd downstairs..

K:no.. but I lost

Srp:what ?

K: my junka..

She says raising her hand.. to show the bangles..

Bm:kushi!! Here u are.. anjali is asking for you..

K: I know.. iam just going to her..

She goes to the room

Opens the closed doors.. and closing them back again

K: didi.. u r so lucky.. ur marriage seems to be happening on kj sets.. everthing so.. perfect..!!

She soon reliases that she is talking to a empty room..

K: di..

No one is there..

All she could find in reply is a letter on the dressing table..

She slowly moves there.. hoping not to see what she is thinking ..

Once she got the letter in to her hands..

Her expression changing.. because the world around her just crashed.. shattered..

Some one knocks the door.. she is no where near to answer that..

Km: kushi.. open the door.. every one is waiting!!

Well that's the first episode.. just hit a like if u want me to continue..

please people took me hours.. to give u this.. say something..
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mayukatta thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HYE THIS IS NOT FAIR!!! i attached four more pics.. searched google for hours.. to get the suitable pic.. but i see only one pic now.. how? please help..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow this story is awesome!! Oh lord it was crazy!! Khushi and her crazy antics! Please update soon and do pm me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSG_luv

Wow this story is awesome!! Oh lord it was crazy!! Khushi and her crazy antics! Please update soon and do pm me..

oh god.. thank you.. have been waiting to hear a comment this for you🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry.i am not sure about the pictures...but nice concept do pm me!!thanks!!

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