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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... loved it 👏
I was a little bothered a tiny winy bit that what would the new changes in this new version be for the Hot Chocolate... but you honestly did complete justice to it even more I feel...
Firstly there was so much clarity in what the convo between the 2 was about, as the earlier parts were clearer ( the parts of him working tilll late with her, not partying on aweekend till the day with Meera-Yash...) Earlier when you started rewriting NYT I was wondering how something so beautifully put forward can have things left out, but i guess you did know that there was still things needed in...
Hot Chocolate is what I felt all over again on reading the part again... The tingling feeling left behind that makes you feel cozy after enjoying the small joys life brings with it.
Loved the casual convo between the two... also how they put behind the akwardness of yesternight behind them.
Also the friendship bond they have silently acknowledged ...
What's the gift this time around... last time was the white dream catcher, lets see what you have in mind now.
Loved the song selection .. very apt for the feelings among the two... for the occasional eyelocks, the mild touches, the slip of tongues, the conflicts...
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Ahh the wait was most definitely worth it! I just love how you incorporate the romance with the gradual build up of the characters & their developing understanding of each other - they steal glances here & there, yet still feel compelled to know as much as they can about the other. This feels a lot deeper than attraction between the two...


Oh Geet, how naive she is - her charm has already had an effect on Maan; albeit he may not call the sensations hot chocolate like she does but he definitely can understand what she's talking about ;)

Agreed loved the romance & at the same time the understanding ... also that there is a lot deeper bond between the two which just can't be just named attraction, the subtle intimate feeling. She discussed the whole Hot chocolate thing which she termed as something that is very her own thing with him & never shared it with others, also the way he was behind her to let it out to him not giving up on her alongwith the occasional leg pulling...
He did feel something as he himself couldn't believe that he was having such a kind of talk with her... but nevertheless never let her down...
I believe he will soon feel that HOT CHOCOLATE feeling
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi

Happy friendship day
And
Happy Hot chocolate day too,
this update was fabulous, Maan here is really very forthcoming, constantly teasing, mocking or as she said "pulling her leg"
And I alsoalso liked that all through the convo he never agreed to her nor to the fact that there is a need of change in his own life...
R & N update made me cry, for such an act from a soulmate can really destroy everything which was good before.
She left her home, her bro, her grandparents at that age only for him, it is justified that she should be angry at him but at the cost of her own self destruction, thats sad. (Part of me is happy that they both got together at the end )
keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Maan has damn good collection of cars... actually I am total car freak so couldn't control myself from saying this...
meera and yash are worst than tom and jerry...
Aww Geet so naive and sweet...
What did Geet give Maan???
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

"Umm!", she took a deep breath imagining a warm sensation spread through her, "Its like this good intense tingle you feel in your belly..."Unconsciously, she put both her palms on the flat of her stomach and his gaze dropped to her hands while his smile shifted to a full blown laughter, with a 'Are you for real?' look on his face.

... he came to stand directly in front of her, "You mean Cozy?"

"Umm! You can say that...", she sounded reluctant in that assent, "That is what I felt seeing them fighting their way into each other's lives...", and she couldn't look him in the eye anymore, "Like having a mug of hot chocolate on a cold winter evening..."
... "With your feet up on the couch and huddled inside a blanket too...and when the warm liquid puddles in your belly you can't help, but wiggle and then curl your toes..."

"I'm sure I would...", he nodded, sounding every bit mocking, however, having the good sense not to laugh at her again.

"Oh! please... There must be someone or something you might might have seen and felt like they are just meant to be...", she said and without her knowing her hands got animated with the memories that came flooding into her head.

"Or even if your best friend surprises you when you least expect it. A tiring day and you go home to a hot meal of rajma chawal. Or a rainy evening, you are wet to the bone and the first sight of shelter happens to be a chai shop and you warm yourself to a short glass size of adrak chai...One long hug from anyone, or your Daadima is all it takes for those sensations to be born inside you..."

"I will sure remember this talk of ours if that ever happens to me...", he said and she faced him then, "this hot chocolate of yours..."

"Its real, Maan...", she spoke low, "Its my thing...My own little thing", leaning back on a display table, she said, almost disappointed that he would not believe her.

"So...you are telling me..."

She cut him off before he could insinuate anything outrageous beyond what she'd suggested. "I'm just telling you, that if it isn't something you have already paid attention to, then it means you just haven't yearned long enough for it...Like really really want it bad; those simple pleasures of life. Not happening if you are going to hide in a high-rise on the 63rd floor..."

I was reading it again... and I'm so in love with the whole convo... loved it...👏
Hot Chocolate... all over again... you seriously made my sunday today...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Should post Pensieve III in a bit. Almost done.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy Friendship Day. This is a treat
for all of us.

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing
Yuppie Hot chocolate... My favorite, the most
Awaited part is finally dere.

Geet once again awed by Maan's status,
The car made everyone speeches.

Geet n Maan's interaction. They both
Don't understand that there is an unknown
Pull between the two that they click upon
Each other,,,, share frequent eyelocks.

Their convo is always intriguing n intresting.
How Geet tries to explain things to him. N
The topic wud always be abt him, his personality.
I think that's becoz he attracts her.

While she was explaining Hot Chocolate
To him, I cud actually feel it in my stomach.
U create such sensation by writing the update
While I was reading it. That part was THE BEST.

Ahh they becum frnds... Pulling leg.
I wonder wat Geet has gifted him that
Will make him actually feel Hot Chocolate.
Even I wanna try it if its in my reach.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 21: Pensieve III

There was no telling why the paper bag had found its way onto the window seat. He'd left everything on the coffee table upon his return and gone to take an office call. But, before he could clear the place of his articles, Nakul had taken everything to his room and left the bag alone on the blue silk cushions. It was seldom that he used this alcove - though it had been him who had asked for a window seating in both his rooms: his penthouse and the room back at the mansion - when there was an eerie aloofness that came upon him every time he was there.

Unfolding the careful folds of the bag, he sat down as he peered down into the bag. A folded white note blocked its contents and he got to it with more curiosity than those that shuffled inside it.

At first look what had appeared as a note, was really a letter; her writing fluid without any strikes or additions told him that she hadn't had time to go over it for changes. Even as he read the 'Ok' with an exclamation mark, for that is how she'd started her memo, there was the pressure of eagerness that was bursting through his veins. Lord! When was the last time anyone had given him a hand written letter?

He rubbed his forehead as he continued reading, an exulting calm on his face.

"Ok!

What did you expect? A hot chocolate packet? I want you to feel it, not drink it.

I hope the Tide packet covers for your shirt. :)

The salt water taffy was nothing, really. I just bought one for myself and thought it wouldn't hurt to get one for you too. Hey! don't look for motive behind my every doing. You won't find one. But...I think people should sometimes give into things beyond their agendas (Yes, if you didn't already figure out that that bit was directed at you, it was... LOL)

(Oh! don't curse at me, when it sticks to your teeth)

And lastly, the dream catcher...

Again, don't ask me why. Because, I don't have an answer.

I hope that one day you will wake up to that hot chocolate feeling...

-Geet"

He sieved through the contents and laid them over the cushion, examining each one as he felt the wholeness of the item in his hand. The blue color taffy wrapped in butter paper was one that made no sense to him, but yet he was aware of the message she wanted to impart from that gesture. A sachet of detergent powder! He smiled shaking his head and looked out the window, keeping his eyes at the tiny lights that blinked incessant outlining the city.

The note, in reality she'd only meant for it to explain her random act and it had unknowingly turned out to be the most priceless to him. Running his fingers over the soft white feathers of the dream catcher, he went back to the note again.

Again, don't ask me why. Because, I don't have an answer.

The one sentence stood out again, as the first time he'd read the letter, not quite fitting in with the previous or the sentences that followed in her letter, as though it was her justification to all those other occurrences that neither bore strength to attach any significance.

When it should have struck him weird as she referred to the 'bad dreams' that he must have lived with - from having met him a week ago which practically made him a stranger to her - it only seemed natural that she would know; not in its details, but from an instinctive knowing. And he didn't even believe in the theories that considered such knowing a possibility.

It had been a while since his smile had faded. All that was clear until then, seemed hazy at best.

Albeit, when he returned to the living room he was smiling again.

"Daadima, didn't you want to see the fall colors? How about a trip to Central Park tomorrow?"

Daadima looked up at her grandson and blinked a few times before she answered him. "Are you ok, Maan beta? Because you don't go around making such proposals for a family outing, unless it had something to do with your work..."

He folded his arms, but a second later he pulled her up to her feet, "Is that a yes or a no?", he asked with a single brow raised high into his forehead.

"Of course...But...", was all she managed before he pulled her into a sudden hug...

"One long hug from anyone, or your Daadima is all it takes..."

Closing his eyes, he held her for a long minute and then just as abruptly he'd taken her into his hold, left her alone and speechless there before he made his way back to his room.

However, there was still something to be said of those accompanying them tomorrow and he paused in the hallway turning to face her.

"May be you should call your friends...We could have a picnic..."

"But they are all busy. They have already made plans...", she said, her voice still amazed from that earlier time he'd hugged her.

"Fine...", the mischief played out in his smile, partly content too that her response had been precisely that which he'd thought it to be, "I will just invite mine..."

He'd waited to ascertain his Daadi wasn't going to faint and then come to back to bed. Her gifts were still scattered by the window seat and after having gazed at them unseeingly for a while, he sensed that that corner of his room wasn't so lifeless after all.

It was midnight before he fell into a dreamless sleep for the first time in many nights; a night that welcomed the mindlessness of it all.
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Next update will be Part 22: Prelude to a dream

Note to the old-timers: I had never justified why the window sitting was such an important part in the latter scenes. Hopefully, this explains it all.
Edited by 6th.Element - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooot wooot sometime late night stalking pays offf!

Thanks for the wonder ful update!

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