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Posted: 13 years ago

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H, this update was so intricate & beautiful that I've actually read it over & over numerous times, the foundations of something deeper within them are being built here.

I could almost imagine Maan, faintly smiling as he reads Geet's adorable letter and sees a little bit of her in each gift she's given. I love the deep connection they've developed - e.g. with her gifting him the dream catcher, and how he acknowledges that connection. And how that inevitably led him to experience the hot chocolate feeling!

I could go on forever about this update but I adore how Maan is slowly changing due to Geet's presence in his life. This love story is too beautiful for me to word it; it's beyond attraction, they've truly found their soul mates in each other.

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@ Fozia: The last time around, there was only the dream catcher in the brown bag.

Thanks for your kind words ;) I'm excited the update is coming across to you...

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My fav window seating; always had one in india and here. I am glad you kept the dreamcatcher. I was hoping u wouldn't change that. Loved the dadi hug which was new as well as the picnicsuggestion coming from him. short msg due to phone. More once it is TGIM. (monday mynew fav day 😕

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@ Avi: Yeah! Ditching the dream catcher wouldn't have scored with you all. So, I kept it.

Last time it was Daadi who suggests that he bring along his friends, but this time it was necessary that he suggested it...like it was an affirmation to himself that he had a friend now...

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Hasini- really liked the update, and with each update I look forward to the new plots/scenes that were not there in the prior version. With the essence remaining the same, I am loving this narration.

NYTs never fails to impress me.

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Ah! S...

It quite rare that you make an appearance here. So good to hear from you...

Thanks! And good that the important updates are faring well.

I'm once again shaking with the Central Park update. I have thought through it all morning and still can't put anything to paper yet (The scenes are there, but too apprehensive to shape them this way...)

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Originally posted by: 6th.Element
Ah! S...

It quite rare that you make an appearance here. So good to hear from you...

Thanks! And good that the important updates are faring well.

I'm once again shaking with the Central Park update. I have thought through it all morning and still can't put anything to paper yet (The scenes are there, but too apprehensive to shape them this way...)

🤗 🤗 Waiting eagerly

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As always this update needs no introduction either...

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Originally posted by: 6th.Element
As always this update needs no introduction either...

I love this part

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That picture is absolutely stunning! Which can only lead me to guess that it will be a wonderful update - and if it's a part that Avi loves, I'm sure I will too (as we have similar tastes, apart from our stances of Maan in PDS 😆)