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Posted: 12 years ago




PART 20





After the party got over everyone retired to their room''.

Maan was sitting all alone on the terrace''' Geet was not feeling sleepy so she went to terrace for a walk and was shocked to see Maan sitting there'''

Maan who was lost in some deep thought and had some tear drop in his eyes'' This was not gone unnoticed by Geet'.. Geet got worried and went to him and sat next to him'''

Geet: Maan what are you doing here????

Maan immediately wiped his tears so that Geet could not see that and brought a smile on his face''.. But least he knew that Geet had already noticed that'''..

Maan: Tum soyi nahi abhi tak'''.

Geet: Nahi... I was not feeling sleepy but what is the matter Maan... What are you doing here''.. and where are you lost''.. Today for the first time I have noticed tears in your eyes''.. Is there any problem'..

Maan: Who nothing''. And tears no no that was because'''

Geet: Some dust must have gone in your eyes right''.. Why are you lying''' Please bolo na Maan baat kya hai????

Maan: I said nothing'''.

Geet: Theek hai'.. Anyways why will you tell me Mai lagti kaun hu aapki'''.

Geet was about to get up but Maan pulled her and she landed up near him''..

Maan: Never say that again Geet'' You don't know what you mean to me'..

Geet: Maan'''.

Maan leaves her: I am sorry''''

Geet: Why are you so emotional today Maan''''. Please tell me''.. By sharing you will feel better

Maan: I want to thank you for all you have done for me'''.. Despite all my mistake you still gave me such a beautiful party and I have just hurted you always''''

Geet: Maan'''.

Maan: Geet Please let me speak today''.. I was not able to give you any happiness and upar se I had even forced myself on you''.that is the reason you were always scared of me and I know you are still scared''' I don't even know whether I am able to develop trust fully in your heart''' and you have done so much for me'.. yesterday also you planned a surprise party for me and I spoilt it by coming home drunk''.. But believe me maine jan bujkar nahi piya'' who friends mil gaye the to they forced me'''

Geet could not take it anymore'.. she finally said: I am not angry on you Maan''.. and I have no problem if you enjoy with your friends''..

Maan just kept on looking at her''' : Geet I know I am not worth you'.

Maan was about to get up Geet stopped him and Maan was about to start again''.. This angered Geet'''.

Geet: Maan chup chap baitye'' and listen to me understood''' aap kab se bole ja rahe hai''. I am telling you I am not at all angry on you... this all I did only to give you a surprise''.. and ha I was really scared of you when I got married to you but now believe me I can say I have got a wonderful friend in you and I trust you like anything'''. Maan I know that we are husband and wife and I should give you I mean''.. (she was gathering her words to say)

Maan: You don't have to say anything Geet''.. I know what you are trying to say''' I really love you a lot and I will wait till eternity for you''.

Geet just hugs him: Thank you Maan Thank you''..

Maan hugged her in return''''. They remain in each other arms'' The simple touch was making them crazy'.. Maan's hand started unknowingly moving on her back and her cheeks was pressing at his broad chest'''. He placed a kiss on her shoulder and she holded him tight'' They were lost in each other'''. The desire to be with each other was developing in them'.

Maan simple touch was making Geet crazy'''. The moan escaped from her mouth'''.

Geet: ahaaa''..

Maan broke himself from the trance and they separated from the hug'..

Geet was all shy and was looking down''

Maan: Geet please aise mat karo'' I will not able to control myself''

Geet just walked away but Maan hold her hand'''Geet just turned herself'''.

Maan: Geet if I ask you something will you give me''..

Geet just nods her head''..

Maan: Why don't you shift in our room'''. Please'''.

Geet just gives a smile and goes away from there''..

Maan moves his hand on his hair: This girl is making me crazy'.. With my love I will make you mine'''..

On the other hand Geet went to collect all the necessary things and went to their room'''

Geet (self talk): Kya ho jata hai mujhe jab who mujhe chute hai'' What type of desire is developing in me''' I want to accept him and I will try my level best'''

When Maan had entered the room Geet had just changed herself in her night suit and was making their bed to sleep'''

Maan was happy to see her ''' He went to get freshen up and came out wearing his vest and track''.. When Maan came out Geet mouth drop to see him''.. She was just lost in him completely'''.. Maan noticed that and had a smirk smile on his face... She was so lost in seeing him that she did not notice him smiling...

Maan went near her and whispered: I know Geet I look handsome but you can see me later now sleep... You look very tired...

Geet immediately put her lashes down and lied on the bed hiding herself... Maan came on his side and started taking pillow... Geet was looking from corner of her eyes... Seeing him taking pillow she got up...

Geet: Where are you going?????

Maan: You sleep here aram se I will sleep on the couch...

Geet: Why???? The bed is big enough for 2 of us...

Maan: You sleep comfortable...

Geet: ohhh... I think that is more comfortable so you want to sleep their... I think when someone was not well gave me a lecture of...

Maan kept the pillows and slept on bed: ok meri maa... Now sleep...

Maan puts off the light and both go to sleep...

Geet had almost siffted to Maan side and was sleeping taking his arm in hers... She opened her eyes lazily and found herself on Maan... With her movement Maan also opened his eyes and looked at Geet...

Maan gave a light Peck on her forehead... : Good morning Geet...

Geet smiled: Good morning...

Geet: sorry who pata Nahi kaise Mai yaha agayi...

Maan: You don't have to be sorry... You have full right on me... now go and get fresh I will drop you to college...

They both get up from bed before going from

Before going to get fresh Geet turned to Maan

Maan raised his eyebrow asking : what happen???

Geet: I will try Maan in all sense to take our relation ahead...

Maan: and I will support you for that...

They got fresh and came for breakfast... Maan thanked his mom and Yash and said he will try his level best to be a good son good brother and a good husband...

Yash: you are a best bro...

Savitri : and a very good son...

Maan hugs yash and Savitri...

Everyone have tears in their eyes...

To lighten the moment Yash said...

Yash: bro you know if this two of this start crying shayad it will start raining... And you know bro if Geet start her crying session then I am sure all the lake and river will be full...

Geet: Yash...

Yash: Kya yash... And you know what she can be given a title of crying baby...

Geet: yash now you are gone wait

Yash run and Geet runs behind him...

Savitri and Maan were standing and looking and laughing at both of then...

Seeing Maan laughing whole heartedly Savitri looked at him and then to Geet...

Maan: mom what happen???

Savitri: Today I am very happy to see everyone laughing ...

This smile always remains on everyone face... And Geet be always happy...

Maan: I promise you mom the happiness will always remain on Geet's face... I will give her all the happiness of the world... Jitna who mere wajay se royi hai usse jyada pyaar dunga...

Savitri: Always take care of her''. She is all alone''.. She does not have anyone apart from us''''. The way you have proved a good businessman, a good son and a good brother be a good husband and she will give everything to you without even you asking from her'''..

Maan: Ji'''. I will do everything for her'''.

Savitri: Their fight is going to be non stop now'''. I have to go'''..

Yash was running and Geet was running behind him to hit him and Maan came between them''''

Yash: Thank god Bro you came in between otherwise pata nahi aur kitna bhagati yeh mujhe'.. humesha marne pe tuli hui rehti hai''

Geet: Maan you get aside''. I am not going to leave him today''''.

Maan: Geet jane do'''

Geet: Ha ha you will also support him only know''' aapka bhai jo hai''. But Yash I am not going to leave you today then bhale mujhe aaj college hi kyu na miss karna pade and tumhe office''' Tum Maan ke piche se bahar niklo'..

Yash: Mad or what'''.

Maan: Geet leave him sham ko mar lena''' Now chalo we are getting late''. Waise Yash ne kuch galat to nahi bola''..

Yash: See See Bro is also supporting me''..

Geet: No this Yash always tease me and always escape''' and now you also started''.. Just because I don't have anyone aap dono mujhe aise baat karte ho hai na'''.. I am all alone ( She almost had tears in her eyes)''' If my Parents would have been alive I would have not been alone''.

Maan and Yash both: Geet don't ever say that'''..

Yash: Humare hote hue how can you even say that'''. We were just teasing you''.. stupid''. Kaha se kaha baat le gayi'''..

Maan: Geet aaj bol diya to bol diya aage se yeh kabhi nahi kehna ke you are all alone'''.. samji''

Yash and Maan both hug her tight''''.

Precap: Geet: Yeh Chudail kaun hai''''.












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Edited by ana1411 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow ... They shared their feelings ... nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet shift back to their room..Maan try his best..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome lovely update.
loved maaneet momment and family moment.
Precep is intresting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
geet is atleast trying to figure out
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the last emotional scene very much
and precap ...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
ab geet jealous bhee feel kar rahee hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏wow very nice just loved it dear !!!!!!!!!! hopefully they will come more close to eachother very soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lolz...amazing precap!

cant wait for the chudail ka bharta by Geet! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update..loved it..finally both shared dee feelings..nd maan repenting his deeds...finally everything sorted out between dem...nd dry r moving dere relationship to next level..nd mom nd yash also happy cute update nd especialy last part.loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear!!!!!
Loved Yash nd Geets fighting... Loved Geets surprise nd Gift 4 Maan..!!!
Loved deir convo too... hmm so Geet shifted in deir room
Precap is nyc... plllzzz cont soon

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