FF:MERI ADHURI KAHAANI last part pg-62& nt -64 - Page 41

Lets have a look what damage miss (what to do, don't have a heart to address her Mrs..i know you dont have the heart to do that but then the truth won't change darling she is NAKUSHA DUTTA PATIL .) nakusha has done to my love life when I wasn't present ! *tries to put a brave face*..yes you can do it ... Uff! It's not at all easy loving sweetu, he's so bhola bhaala, this naku😡 always succeeds in fooling my gadha! This cunning lady😡 first of all quickly left the place as soon as it got rushed and reached to a safe place then…..then kya? Thoda sa ketchup lagaya and sweetu got fooled! now i dont think its her fault your sweetu is naive Does she seriously want me to believe that badly cooked story of hers about the mangalsutra? She herself threw the mangalsutra, coz she wanted a new costly mangalsutra.omg what an insult to my well thought story No body believes me😭, but I've faith…………a "sach ka saamna" day will surely come!😳

Hey rosie!🤗 Hugz kisses!😛finally ..nakku bashing is over and we can hug n kiss ..so good to have you back 🤗

Now, mera humsaaya……….hayee dam romantic!..i thought of so many titles before deciding on this one ..glad u liked it😍 The opening para……too good!👏 No doubt dutta respects women (a lot) but with naku on his side he's being attentive towards WOMENHOOD and respecting it, for the first time in his life he's not merely just thinking about the fair sex but trying to explore them...and you are loving this aspect of your sweetu isn't it ?? i hope your real life sweetu also respects womanhood otherwise the consequences will be dire..lol..Before naku women to him was a loving mother or a sister or may be a decked up doll who could play his wife, but once naku happened slowly he's realizing what difference actually a woman can make to a man's life. Loved the fact that while watching the wife feeding her husband, he had a mixed feeling a sense of contentment that even he has someone and a sense of void too at the same time!..thanks so much for appreciating this part.. Phir se his head is paining?..poor guy didnt have anything since morning so he is bound to have headache..How much more headache you have planned for sweetu?😆 Aww……..the couch scene, you won't believe but I've always imagined a scene on similar lines at various points during various shows, coz I genuinely believe it's one of the best way to show how badly one is missing other, but finally it's you who have fulfilled my fantasy!..thank god i did it ..btw how many more fantasies you have which i have to fulfill ..lol..a song comes into my mind .." hazaaron khwaishein aisi ..ki har khwaish pe dam nikle ..bahut nikle mere armaan ..lekin phirbhi kam nikle "Thank you. LOL………..mostly it's the wife who dreams about his hubby stuck in a problem!..now is it a compliment or a taunt or both But it was a nice way to show how deeply dutta is connected to naku! Aah! She goes missing,⭐️ but later is found!..🤣 The whole searching sequence where dutta realizes the consequences of bloodshot, was no doubt brilliant, when you put on someone else's shoe only then you realize! But are you planning a redemption and reformation for dutta?..not at all ..i love dutta the gangster ..it was only to make him realize what it feels to lose a loved one and more importantly his actual feelings for nakku If yes, kindly don't make it completely just a little bit of reformation, plz I love my bad boy!😳 Loved it when during his search he hoped to see her in every clinic/hospital he went and at the same time he didn't!

And when he found her, the tear drop…now it's a li'l tricky, DSP crying? But then I could very well imagine the single tear drop and how brilliantly Mishal used to hold it!.yeah he used to hold it really well but sometimes it did slip down Wah! Maza aa gaya imagine kar ke! And tada the hug, soo romantic, I mean a hug is romantic..i dont know why but i find a hug the most romantic gesture , but this one had the tasha element more than the previous one!...agree with u , the earlier one was not a real one ..It feels so correct to see that slowly and gradually(not at once) tasha element is getting relevant in their gestures!last time whenshe wasn't well there was a hug and this time also there a hug that's why I keep saying she purposefully gets ill.😆No matter how I find it hard to swallow but MS is equal to life for Indian women..and dont forget you are an indian woman.., will I too someday feel like this ..i am sure if dutta ties it then you will too feel the same and poor dutta he's getting so confused with what now a days naku says😆, but am glad that she expressed what she feels about the MS. You know when he was about to take out themangalsutra and the old lady knocked I was like ek aur KMH! but later when he tied it at the mandir, in front of shiv jii…..i was like right time pe right kaam karna koi rose se seekhe*proud muh* thank u ! The whole mandir scene………..perfect esp. coz he tied the MS again with right emotions, and also that a sense of faith in HIM is overpowering dutta. I hope he gets what he wished..stop lying ..lol.., and with you around I know he will, the end note was perfect exactly the way I like!

Spl, mention.

The flashbacks which dutta kept having, I don't know how to describe it, it was melancholic yet romantic,..baby my updates have subtle romance which is believable and probably that's what touches you ..thanks again even when he remembered the dupatta in the car, something clicked, not only in this update but whenever in the whole story comes a FB something clicks!

And now a spl spl mention: the whole twist of naku going missing was a normal accident which could happen to anyone, and not a gangster rivalry or something larger than lifeyaar i am atrocious when it comes to writing action scene moreover i don't have the capacity to explore new areas in this ff so stuck to my basic formula which straight n simple ..thanks for liking it ………loved this fact!

To be continued…………

Remember I always used to find naku's narrative more interesting than dutta's, but now I love both equally,thank you 16 chapters rosie, it's a long way, you are telling me *wipes sweat* and you have managed to cover it brilliantly! I still prefer single narratives more than the mixed ones, may be becoz it's more tiring for you this way..ha ha ha ..but hence forth you will get only mixed narratives so be prepared.😛 "shukriya kaise karoon" kaise bhi karo but at least karo, she is so thankless..uff you don't leave any chance taunt her , it's because I sacrificed my love she's having a gala time! Okay the first scene talks about stem stitch, I had to ask my mom what a stem stitch looks like, that makes me wonder, did you knew about various stitches or even you had to a li'l research?..for your kind information i very well know what is a stem stitch , we were taught in school ..

So, naku is continuing cooking for dutta, good! And great that she persisted on adding more hue to dutta's wardrobe and for that matter life as well, I mean who could imagine that a day will come, when DSP will bother about his attire..you remember in the show as well during the ganpati visarjan time , dutta wanted to look different and bothered about his dressing sense ..so like anybody even he is a little conscious of his outfits and in this scene the main purpose was to bring up the topic of baby shower that's why he said that ...for the sake of attending a baby shower! Well we get to see various shades of dutta in your various works but one aspect I've always found consistent is "chali JAIYO, le AAIYO,ek kaam KARIYO"!😆 ..sorry ..i didnt get this one ..what do u mean and wait a sec she thinks he needs antics to grab her attention! her? Out of this whole world😲, ek toh she purposefully broke the button, and look at her attitude man!😡i knew this was coming Naah seriously I loved loved loved the sequence, I mean it felt so nice to see a couple having genuine talks instead of blowing curtains, and eye locks,(and no "shirt da button" song..lol) and the dialogue where he says to hell with what others think about their relationship, god! I'm dead, it's my favorite dialogue till now, and the way he tucked her hair, soo casually, finally he got to do tht, his hands are itching to do that since their beech sequence..lol!..the whole scene till she asks him sahab aap itne acche kyun ho ..is my fav but my most fav. Gesture of not only this particular update but the whole ff is when she stubbornly shakes her head in no and he grins………don't ask me why, coz I myself don't know why!..coz u would have also reacted like that ..infact it would have been harder for him to convince you 😆They getting more and more comfortable!

Don't you think you were way too more "civil" with sups?time will tell Okay seriously…..i loved it this way only, that's how real relationships work, bitter sweet, if there would be loud confrontation slaps and all, may be it could worked to garner TRPs but certainly ruined the essence of the FF!..not my style ..mere thapad mein awaaz nahin hoti ..lol..it must have been difficult for you na to suppress the desire to dhulaofy her! But since sups got an respectful exit (I suppose it's the end of her track) I want you to compensate it with something good in the coming updates *throws tantrum*trust me you will get all you want , just be patient

The baby shower was sweet with naku dancing and then getting embarrassed on finding dutta watching,😍! Strange no body teased them about having their own baby shower or may everyone knew that it's not naku who'll get to have baby shower, it's me *blush*dil ko behlaane ke liye yeh khyal accha hai ghalib i mean aish

Chapter 17 : Humko Pyaar Hua

Pushing the gates aside I was stepping in when I saw my past coming out of the house, overlooking her I continued to walk past her when she stopped me," dutta ji." Turning my neck I gave her cold stare.

" main aapse maafi mangne aayi thi."

I wasn't interested in her sorry or her, as a matter of fact I didn't wish to think about what she did to me in the past hence showed her my palm which indicated all that I wanted to say. Moving just a step ahead she again spoke up," aaj apki wajah se mujhe meri behan wapis mili hai ..yeh baat mein kabhi nahin bhoolungi." This time I turned around clenching my jaws firmly to clear out something," maine jo kuch bhi kiya nakku ke liye kiya ..uski khushi ke liye kiya ..kyunki main usey takleef mein nahin dekh sakta." Stressing on each and every word that left my mouth to make it crystal clear that all this had nothing to do with her or myself, the only thing that mattered to me was nakku's happiness, the one who pulled me out of my dark past to show me a bright present, I wished to do the same for her.

" bahut parwah karte hain ..uski." she said and I thought what kind of a statement or question is this? Of course I care for her and why shouldn't I? she means..she means ..a lot to me.

Tears welled up in her eyes as she said," maine pyar mein apko dhoka diya..phirbhi aapne nakku se dobara pyaar.." I didn't let her complete herself because this love and all wasn't making sense to me, narrowing my eyes I told her," pyar? Tumse ? pata nahin ..woh kya tha ..aaj sochta hoon toh lagta hai bus ek khichaav (attraction) tha tumhari awaaza ki taraf..jo tumse milne ke baad pyar mein nahin badal paaya." I really wondered did I ever love her? Her singing in the rain had mesmerized me but beyond that we never connected with each other, no matter how hard I tried to but still a lot was lacking between us. Her face started to lose color as I continued," jo maine tumhare liye mehsoos kiya aur jo main nakku ke liye karta hoon usmein zameen asmaan ka farak hai." I wasn't lying coz what I feel for nakku , I never felt like that for her. During that stampede incident I was on the verge of losing nakku and that had sucked the life out of me, just the thought of her not being with me anymore had shaken me up completely and when she left me on the wedding day I was heart broken, angry, furious over her for hurting my ego but still I didn't feel a sense of loss within me. It didn't pain me as much as it did when nakku was hurt. Looking at her intently I said," tumhein maine apni zindagi mein shamil karna chaha ..par nakku ..woh toh meri zindagi hi ban gayi." Tears began dropping from her eyes and somewhere I felt sorry for her, I didn't wish to humiliate her but all this pent up frustration was coming out of me on its own. Closing my eyes, I composed myself and realized that instead of being bitter, I should be thankful to her for cheating on me, had she not done so true happiness wouldn't have entered my life " mujhe tumse koi naraazgi nahin hai..agar tum mujhe nahin chodti to mujhe nakku kaise milti..kyunki maine agar kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai toh ..woh nakku se kiya hai..tumse nahin." She lowered her head in shame and folded her hands before me, she wanted to speak but couldn't, I don't know why. She took a minute to wipe off her tears and for the first time I felt she was actually guilty of her actions. Just then Baaji came out of the house, in fact I'd come to pick him up, we were supposed to go for an important meeting, he saw both of us together and knotted his brows in confusion, I blinked my eyes suggesting that it was nothing, he nodded his head and said," bhau chalein ..der ho rahi hai." We both walked out to leave when she took a step forward and said softly," us raat barish mein ..main nahin ga rahi thi." I raised my brow to question her then dismissed the thought, it didn't matter to me if she wasn't singing in the rain that night.

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My heart felt really light as if I'd lifted a heavy burden off it after saying what was in my mind. There was no bitterness for anybody or anything, just a sweet feeling lingered wit in me. Thinking back how easily I'd confessed my love for her brought a smile on my face which didn't go unnoticed Baaji who was driving, at the same time looking at me from the corner of his eye. Seeing me amused how could he stop himself from not pulling my leg," kya re bhau ..pyaar mein aaj kuch zyada hi chehak (chirpy) raha hai." The grin vanished and I glared at him, wondering, how does he know that …that I am in love?..i didn't tell him..forget him, I didn't even tell myself..then how come? He let out a throaty laugh, sporting his dimples and said," bhau tujhe dekh kar koi bhi keh sakta hai ki tu nakku se kitna pyar karta hai..bus tere hi dimag ki ghanti kuch der se baji hai." Yeah he was right, it took me such a long time to actually figure out what I really feel for her, had supriya today not brought up the topic of love, I would have continued to keep my feelings under wraps, because of her nakku came into my life and today again because of her I realized that nakku is the love of my life.

" toh bhau ..nakku ko bata diya nah ..kya kaha usne?" turning my neck I stared at him. He pressed the brakes hard, suddenly bringing the car to a halt and asked me in surprise," kya? Tune abhi tak usko nahin bataya?" I glanced quietly in the other direction, when I myself came to know just an hour back then how could I tell her anything.

He took a U turn to drive back and I asked him," yeh kya kar raha hai tu ..gaadi kyun ghuma raha hai?"

" kyunki tu aaj aur abhi , nakku ko apne dil ki baat kahega."

Shaking my head I thought, he's simply impossible, what's the hurry in confessing my love to her?

" dekh Baaji ..abhi humko meeting mein jana hai ..yeh baatein baad mein bhi ho sakti hain."

" nahin bhau ..abhi matlab abhi." He was adamant and continued," bhau tune pyar ke liye bahut intezaar kiya hai ..ab aur mat kar." I was silent, I didn't know whether I had the courage to pour my heart out to her, I didn't even know whether she was prepared for all this. He patted my shoulder and said," ab tu in khushiyon se dur mat bhaag..pyar ko apni zindagi mein jald se jald le aa." I smiled back at him, love indeed is beautiful and the whole world seems wonderful when you are in love. Cool breeze was blowing and dark clouds covered the sky, it was lunch time but it appeared as if it was late in the evening. It was drizzling when we reached back home, the whole atmosphere was calm and soothing, getting off the car, I glanced at him, he winked at me and said," bhau main jaata hai wahan meeting ke liye ..tu yahan apni meeting sambhal." Nodding my head I thought that I am really fortunate to have a friend like him.

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I scanned the entire hall and kitchen area, she was no where to be found, I went up to our room, she wasn't there as well. Taking out the cell phone I dialed her number, it began ringing in the room, looking around I found her cell phone on the bed. Picking it up I noticed that she'd set our wedding picture as her wall paper, a smile crept my lips. I went out of the room and began calling her out," nakku ..nakku" madhu came to the hall and informed that she'd gone to her mother's place. The nervousness and excitement to tell her about my feelings was getting out of my control, I couldn't wait for her to return hence went to her mother's place.

It felt a little awkward going there without any reason, I'd been to her mother's place only once and that too for the baby shower which was yesterday. As expected her mother was a bit surprised to see me nevertheless she told me that she was out in the terrace. With every step that I was taking my heart pounded loudly inside my chest just then I heard a familiar voice, someone was singing the same song which I'd heard months back. Reaching the door I was stunned to see her singing in the rain.

Roz sham aati thiMagar aisi na thi

Roz roz ghata chaati thi Magar aisi na thi

Yeh aaj meri zindagi Mein kaun aa gayaa

I recalled what supriya had said sometime back that she wasn't singing that evening, so it was nakku? But how was it possible? My mind questioned, it was very much possible my heart said, her presence in my life has that same soothing effect which that soulful voice had that evening. No wonder I always felt drawn towards her like I did when I heard her sing, that connection which was missing between me and supriya was always there between me and her(nakku), what all I wished to see in her sister I found in her unexpectedly. Who else other than her could touch my heart? It had to be her, its just that it didn't struck me before.

She was twirling around in the rain with her arms spread wide open, unaware of her surroundings, unaware that a pair of hooded eyes was watching her so closely. Her innocence, her smile was breathtaking as rain drops touched, kissed and played with her. Leaning against the door with my arms crossed before my chest and my head tilted slightly I enjoyed the beautiful sight before my eyes. She threw her head back as water droplets tickled her cheeks, the radiance and happiness on her face made my mind wonder the reason behind it while my heart only took pleasure in enjoying seeing her sing and spin around carelessly.

Suddenly she stopped and started looking around, her emerald green eyes were surprised to see me standing, she dropped her gaze as she blushed a deep crimson. Without tearing my eyes from her I began walking in her direction, nervously or shyly she began stepping back slowly till her back hit the terrace railing. I stopped in front of her and glanced at her, she was drenched completely from head to toe, she lowered her head feeling my gaze on herself. Lifting her chin up with my finger I made her look back and asked," yeh gaana us raat tu gaa rahi thi?" she nodded a yes silently.

" phir maine teri jagah supriya ko kaise dekha." My mind wanted all the answers, she too appeared confused then replied after slapping her head," taayi..woh main aise hi bheegh rahi thi aur taayi kapde uthane aayi toh main andhar chali gayi..aapne shayad tab tayi ko dekha hoga." I shook my head as everything started to fall into place, that evening she was singing when there was a power cut, AS caught me looking at her, I turned my back to her for just a minute when power resumed and we both thought that supriya was singing as by then she'd already left. A smile spread across my lips as I realized that from day one if at all I was in love then it was always with her.

" kya hua sahab ..aap aise kyun pooch rahe ho?"

" aaj mujhe pataa chalaa ki mera pyar supriya nahin tu hai..woh awaaz ..woh ehsaas jise maine chaaha ..woh tera hai." She smiled in surprise and bit her lower lip on hearing my words. I cupped her soft and wet face in my hands and looked into her ocean eyes before telling her," meri kahaani tujhse shru hui ..aur tujhi par khatam hogi." For long I considered her as the unwanted part of my story unaware that in reality she is my story. The fact that I'd always been in love with her thrilled me to no extent and I brought her face closer. Her lips quivered in a smile that could light up the whole area and I pressed mine against her forehead for a few seconds before taking her in my arms and whispered in her ear," nakku..bahut pyaar karta hoon main tujhse." The clouds thundered, making her shiver and she buried her face further in my chest, her head rested on my beating heart and her finger nails dug into my skin. I smiled inwardly holding her close and rested my chin on her head as the rain soaked both of us, how could I hate the rain anymore? It brought love in my life and now in my arms. Moving back a little I leaned my head against hers with my arms still wrapped around her waist, savoring this priceless moment, when she called out softly," sahab." I glanced at her tender lips which either lectured me or remained silent or sometimes would call me out but whatever they said it always touched my heart. Angling my face I brought it near her, she was clutching my kurta firmly in her fists and kept her eyes shut when I brushed my lips against hers making her gasp.

She pushed me back with force and said loudly," NAHIN..yeh nahin ho sakta." She was breathing hard and tears welled up in her eyes while speaking," sahab..humare beech aisa kuch nahin hai..".maine ..maine .." she stammered badly ,"shaadi ki raat hi ..maine ..maine kaha tha apko." I was rooted to the spot and looked at her in confusion as all this was not making sense to me. Without meeting my eyes she ran back in and I couldn't stop her.

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Shutting the door of my room I dropped myself on the bed and cried my heart out as everything changed within seconds before my eyes. Hour back I was so happy when I overheard his conversation with tayi, where he confessed that if at all he loved anybody it was me. I'd went behind tayi to give her the handkerchief which I'd embroidered for her but stopped in my tracks when I heard her speak to him, fearing that she might say something bitter, I decided to overhear, it wasn't decent on my part but I didn't wish him to get hurt by her again and when he said that he loved me and only me, I was on cloud nine, giggling to myself while turning back to go in, Baaji spotted me, I think he noticed that grin, nevertheless I was on cloud nine. My heart was filled with joy, I wanted to share this with someone so sometime later went to aayi's place, she was busy preparing the lunch and said would listen to me later but I couldn't contain my happiness and went to the terrace. It was pouring, a part of me didn't wish to step into the rain but still I went out and stood there silently as rain drops fell on me. His words echoed in my ears making my lips stretch in a smile and automatically my hands spread out to feel the rain, I began spinning around relishing the moment by singing the same song which I'd sung months back without knowing that this time I wasn't alone, he was watching me from a corner and what happened thereafter was beautiful as a dream but dreams break once you open your eyes, the magical spell got lost as reality struck me and it struck me really hard. Grabbing the pillow underneath my head I questioned myself, why was my happiness so short lived? Why did I break his heart? Why did I stop him? And most importantly why couldn't I tell him that like him even I loved him and that too not from today but from the very first day I met him? He was, is and shall always be the love of my life!

Aayi knocked at the door and said," beta tu bhau ke saath gayi nahin? Chal bahar aa jaa ..khaana toh kaha le." Wiping my wet face I got up and replied," main kapde badal kar aati hai." Dragging my legs to the cupboard I opened it and took out an old suit of mine, I was pulling out the matching dupatta when something else also came out with it, his blue waist coat Holding it fresh stream of tears poured out of my eyes as I recalled the evening when we'd met accidently.

Flashback

It had been only a few days since we'd shifted to patil vadi. My holidays were coming to an end and before going back to the hostel I had to buy some important books. It was a dark cloudy evening and the place was new to me still I decided to visit the nearby market alone. The road was silent and deserted with puddles around, I walked carefully to save myself from not falling into any of those puddles filled with mud. Suddenly a bike rode past me, two boys were riding on it, they made a u turn and came back to me. I stopped seeing them coming close, they began circling around me and started passing lewd comments. Even though terror gripped my body, I preferred to ignore them and started walking, this time hurriedly when all of a sudden one of them pulled my dupatta and I asked in fear," kya chahte ho tum?" they smirked and came close to me before replying," tujhe aur kaun?" then tried to touch me, I pushed the bikers hand but the other one ripped my left sleeve and I ran for my life, unaware where my legs were taking me till I stumbled and fell down badly in a muddy puddle. My face was fully covered with mud, still I tried to get up but it was too late, the miscreants had already reached and now they got off the bike. My whole body was shivering with fear as they started walking towards me, one of them extended his hand to catch hold of me when someone dressed in a blue pathani suit came in between and grabbed his hand and punched his face with his other hand," dutta shriram patil ke hote hue patil vadi mein aisi harkat karne ki teri himmat kaise hui?" his deep husky voice roared in the silence. The biker attempted to attack him with a knife but he twisted his wrist and kicked him hard, he then turned to look at me, I was trying to hide my ripped sleeve with my hand. He took out his blue waist coat and offered me, I grabbed it instantly and covered myself with it. Next moment he was hitting, kicking and punching them left right and centre till they both of them collapsed. Then went to his jeep and began fixing the punctured tyre as if nothing had happened, I stood still and watched him, the whole incident had shaken me up, had he not intervened I would have been ruined. I walked up to him to thank him, he stood up and turned around," kahin chod doon?" he asked, I nodded a no and parted my lips to thank him when his cellpone rang, he took the call and started speaking," haan Baaji ..main bus aa hi raha hoon..nahin gaadi ab theek hai.." he raised his brow questioning me, I folded my hands in gratitude and began walking down the road.

On reaching home I went to my room quickly before anybody could question me. Taking a fresh pair of suit I watched myself in the mirror, I was looking really shabby and dirty in fact beyond recognition with that mud all around my face. Closing my eyes I stood under the shower, images of my savior flashed before my eyes, one moment he was angry, ruthless towards those molesters, they way he was beating them up I feared that he might end up killing them and the next moment he was so soft and gentle towards me that it touched my heart without knowing who I was he jumped in to save me, no wonder the people of patil vadi worship him. Everything seemed so dramatic yet it was real, I'd dreamt many a times of being in danger and then getting saved by dream man, but never got to see his face. Today I saw him, he was my real savior, picking up his jacket I rubbed it against my cheek and realized that I'd given away my heart to him, love could happen so easily and so suddenly I'd never imagined. Beaming in delight I ran out in the terrace and began getting wet in the rains, I loved the rains and now I loved them even more. I twirled, danced and sang in joy

Roz sham aati thi ……yeh aaj meri zindagi mein kaun aa gaya

Indeed the evening was really special for me as love had stepped into my life.

End of flashback

Thanks for reading

lots of love

Rose