My First Love-ManVeer Poetry

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Imagine Manyata is mad in love with Uday, but cannot open up heart to him, and he also never gives any hint of his love to her.
This poetry is from Manyata's point of view. This is my first work with Manveer and I am in high fever.so guys forgive me, if I could not win your heart...

Hey dark haired-

This isn't fair!

Hypnotize me first-

Then, why be so harsh?

I fell for your eyes...

And you said only 'Hi'!

Kill me with your smile-

But never care to say-

"Beautiful, meet me for a while"-

Yes, I know-

You're not only my heartthrob...

Then why play hide and sick-

With my heart's doorknob!

Faint every time-

You sing, "You're beautiful"..

Can't you ever be-

a little bit helpful!

Hey charmer!

Will you ever give me a corner?

Thief of my heart-

Don't you know-

It's most delicate part?

Man of my dream-

Please no more game...

Why play with these pebbles?

When, you've already got the jewel!

Finally, found out man-

I too in your heart.

Take your time-

To say,

Those magical words" ..

Note: "You're Beautiful" is a song by James Plant from his album, "Back to Bedlam".

Please hit the like like button, if you guys like it and don't forget to leave a comment...😊

Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago


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KaSh-Maneet-Fan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful poem
Loved it
Thanks 4 sharing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
beautifully poetry very nice well done

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful👏 It's perfect! Every word is amazing😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweet poetry 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear.😃..
Pming me...😛
just ...dear
for ur hard work...⭐️
the job up dear..👏..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: ME'LL NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_T

Beautiful👏 It's perfect! Every word is amazing😃


Thankz for your nice comment...love you 😊
Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing poem
thanxx for sharing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww that was beautiful dii 😃
Each and every line was so simple yet so breathtaking
Loved your writing style... 😊
Super dooper awesome poem Dii. Loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: alissa345

Awww that was beautiful dii 😃
Each and every line was so simple yet so breathtaking
Loved your writing style... 😊
Super dooper awesome poem Dii. Loved it 😊


thankz alissa...how are you now sis?

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