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Posted: 13 years ago


lovely teaser waiting dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on the new thread🥳
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maan babu ...tu to gaya🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
PS:Add anuffpm for PM regarding Updates
Thanks a lot everyone for your wonderfull support to this FF. I know I am never able to reply you but beleive me I just somehow steal time to post all my FFs and post PMs.
I really enjoy all your comments so much and it is only your comments and likes which encourage me to give updates inspite of being so busy. So please keep doing so and also keep forgiving me for not being able to reply. All your comments are so so precious.
And most of you liked the last line. Thanks a lot for that.
--Anu

Part 18

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Geet really have so many dreams but all her dreams were connected to him.. he in any form was her biggest dream.. but Geet did not know how to put her view very intelligently and she said'

"I liked Beauty and Beast more than Cindrella, when I was a kid.. Now Good night" and she went to sleep, leaving Maan helpless and not giving him chance to explain what he wanted to.

Maan at last gave up talking to her at night.

Next Morning, just like a rare chance Geet woke up early, yet she found that Maan was not there.

"OMG he is already awake?? Does he even sleep? " But the next moment she heard his footstep. And when he entered, her eyes went wide awake with the view in front of her. She forgot all her sleepiness. Her booring, practical and logical husband was looking more hotter than any of the heros of her novels or movies'

In his black vest with all sweaty and in black track.. she just kept gazing. Urges of having a passionate touch of him was so so strong..

"Ohh god, he can be sooo sooo hot But babaji this is wrong. If he does not allow me to come near him, he is not supposed to look so-ooo-ooo hot, this is complete cheating".

But to her surprise and unaware of her weird thought Maan came near her and sat down'.

"Geet" he said keeping his hand on her cheek'. Geet's happiness knew no bound. She knew he is going to talk something she doesn't want to hear but as he was soo hot and so near to her she didn't mind but didn't want to hea him too'. Something naughty entered her mind as she was unable to control her urges.

"Geet I want to talk something to you" she placed her hand on his sweaty chest, feeling his muscles... "Haan boliye Maan" she said dreamingly all lost in him..

Her touch sends sensation thru his body' he fluttered while speaking.

"wooo Geet woo main keh raha tha woo" he at last closed his eyes gulping his saliva.

Seeing her effect on him she got more naughty idea and before he could register she shifted herself on his lap and placed her head on his sweaty chest and her fingers started tracing his well toned muscles of his arm.

"Geet" Maan said suddenly' "Haan Maan" Geet said dreamingly' she had become bold with him' his shouting not being much of effect on her

Maan was loosing his senses the way she was doing and he has to stop her before he looses completely.

"Geet sit properly" "Sure Maan" and she shifted more comfortably on his lap, more closely and her hand all on his chest. It was now almost impossible situation for Maan'. she was creating havoc within him. The more he wanted to control their relation the more things were going out of control' he was going out of control..

But for his immediate desire he could not spoil her life... his life style and career busy life will never fulfill her dreams and he cannot let her expectation go high and then let her wait for him every time due to his hectic schedule.He has no right to play with her emotion and life just becoz he was her husband.

"Geet I am getting late for collage, Move" he said with heavy heart' every ounce of his blood in each vain was dying to hold the closeness she has brought now.

He immediately rushed to the washroom and closed it. Is hand placed hard on the sing and he looking into the mirror.

"Why is everything going out of my hand" he closed his eyes' he then washed his face with cold water and then took a shower. He left to his study and then after breakfast just before leaving he handed letter to Geet.

"Perh lena' hope you will understand what I want to say" and he immediately left.

Geet had now to read the letter'

"Geet,

You have dreams which going further I feel I will not be able to fulfill and you may regret your life with me. I have my priorities regarding my career which keeps me very involved and I fear I will not have time to fulfill your dreams.

Also, just coz you are married to me I don't want you to burry all you dream and life style coz of this marriage. So I don't want to bind you and suggest you to be free from this bond.

Yash correctly said I have not been treating you the way I should but that's what I am. I am not into all this Geet. So please give it a nice thought and take decision for your life.

I really feel blessed that you are my wife, who is full of color but I feel guilty of making your life bland due to my bland lifestyle' but again that's what I am.

I agree with whatever Yash said me.

Always yours only,

Maan"

Geet who never took everything lightly had tears in her eyes reading his letter. The effect was completely opposite of what letter was intended to. Geet fell more in love for Maan. She actually never had any problem with him being busy, though she always wished he gave some time to her but his everyday presence in her life was enough for her' And now this letter from Maan made her love even stronger.

But Again Geet was Geet and she has her own way of expressing thing, completely unpredictable.

First thing she did was tore that letter and threw in trash

"Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, how you think after seeing such a hot husband today, I will ever think of leaving you' I won't free you are just mine Got it."

Then after a while

"PC you are gone' how dare you put such feelings in Maan's mind"

She called Yash

"PC I wanna meet you now"

"Sanorita, can we not meet in evening, I have lecture in half hour and I am just leaving for that"

" no we need to meet now, it very very urgent" for Geet when it was anything related to Maan it has to be most important thing for whole world, this was her.

Yash got worried.. "OK, but come soon. I have an important meeting today"

Geet immediately reached Yash's place.

"PC, I want to know what you said to Maan and why did you say whatever you said"

"Sanorita, you are so nave. He just takes you for granted that's what I thought and saw and I needed to give him some reality check after what he did with you in casino. Now try to understand, he was all wrong"

"PC, do you intend to break my marriage. How emotional Maan has been after you said so. He thinks he does not deserve me' you know how much it hurts me seeing him like this. And he is my Maan, he can behave however he feels with me, I never have problem with him' I can never see him in guilt"

Yash was holding his head within his palm' why was he even trying to help this crazy couple. Both are unique'.

"Theek he kaha hai kissine, Pati patnee ke bich nahi pardna chahiye' abb bhugto"

"Do you think, Maan will do anything just becoz I said it' He has his own big mind which is fixed and cannot be moved Geet' If he is feeling guilty, he knows he is wrong"

"No, he is never wrong only this guilt of his is wrong and you are responsible"

Yash bowed down'

"OK, I am so so sorry, that I troubled you great husband'abb age se aisa nahi hoga.. is that fine'"

"Sanorita, I have classes to take' I thought you have something serious to talk"

"This is serious and we are not yet done" And shee kept on telling him how great Maan is and all that making Yash feel that he does not exist in front of the great personality of her Great Husband MSK. He kept on listening, having no option

And then

"Now, you have to convince Maan that he is no where at fault and make sure this Marriage breaking thing out of his mind. You have to make sure, he never talks about this again"

"No, Now I am not interfaring' and why don't you tell him directly... why don't you give this lecture to him"

"You want me to give him the lecture' do you have any idea, how scared I am of his on big stare' his big big eyes, when he looks at me in anger' no way I am talking to him, it's you"

Yash after all could not deny his Sanorita'

Next: Maan gets too busy

Everyone, don't take Geet wrong in behaving such with Yash. he treats her like sister and she feels she have right on him to say anything... its such a relation between them and she feels free to say anything to him.
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lolz...

after the update i actually pity geet☺️

look but dont touch becahri!!

maan khotta desrves all the cold showers he is taking🤣

on a serious note...i can see whre maan is coming from..but doesnt he understand that geet is a typical Indian woman...for whom marriage vows mena the world?
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear
and the way geet thought is ossum dear
so the precap msk get busy means do he get busy to avoid geet dear or indeed he is busy
pls update the next part soon
and update YRUL also dear
waiting for that update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww awesome mindblowing update yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
sona ki bacchi tu mereko stalk karring..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
so finaly u updated
awesum update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
so maan wants her to move but poor maan he made her fall for him more

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