SONTU OS : Tu meri jaan hai

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello ABians 🤗 I am loving SONTU's special bonding which they share .😳So I thought to write an OS on them on their present situation. I hope you all will like it. Sorry if it's not good or you guyz get bore as It gonna be Emotional one .

PINTU's ROOM

Pintu sad , restless , and concerned for Sonu walking in his Room . Ganga comes to him . Ganga " Pintu!! Sonu didn't ate anything since morning. He needs to eat else he will fall sick . Noone have courage to face him and his innocent questions. You are closest to him , So This you will have to do " Ganga in tears . Pintu " Maa!! I don't have so much boldness to face that little kid who lost his mother .When he asks to me about Sargam Bhabhi ..I don't have any answers of him . It's first time that his chachu don't have any answers of his innocent questions , I feel helpless infront of him maa " .Ganga cups Pintu's face " But U will have to be strong Pintu, For ur Brother , For Sonu , For Krishna , They all need u " .Pintu hugs Ganga and starts crying " why maaa ..Why it happened ? Why Bhabhi left all of us alone ? Coz of her This house was a home , But Now when she is not here ..This Home again became a house made of Bricks . " Suddenly Sonu comes to the room and sees Pintu crying . Sonu " CHACHU!! " .Pintu by hearing Sonu's voice wipes his tears quickly and gives a forced smile . Pintu goes to sonu and picks up in his arm . Pintu " Arre mera Gunda Beta ..Ur Daadi was complaining to me that U havn't eaten anything . Why ? " . Sonu " Chachu Always Maa feeds me and Now also I will eat from her hand.I will not eat anything until and unless Maa comes " .Pintu hiding his pain and tears says " Sonu!! U always eat from ur maa's Hand , Today I will feed u from my hand .What say ? " Pintu forwarding his one hand for Hifii But Sonu jerks it and says " NO!! I will only eat when maa wil come " . Pintu was feeling helpless but controls himself and says " Sonu!! This is not right hun , When U want something U comes to ur chachu . Right from ur Fav Bike Ride to Choclates to Video Games , Everyhting u ask from ur chachu . So If ur chachu is asking anything then Can't u give that ? " Pintu shows his Fake Anger .he removes Sonu from his arms and turns away .Pintu " OK!! FINE .If U don't want ur chachu , Then It's Ok . Ur chachu will also never talk to u .U go to ur Maa and papa " .Sonu feels bad .He comes infront of Pintu and oulls Pintu's Kurta and says " SORRY!! " .Pintu doesn't look at him and turns in another direction . Sonu comes again infront of him and kneels down holding his both ears " SORRY CHACHU !! Ur Gunda beta loves u , Loves u very much .Plzz maaf kar do ".Pintu couldn't help himself from smiling .He too kneels down and removes sonu's hands from his ears and hugs him . Pintu " If U wil eat food , Only then I will forgive u . Deal ? " .Sonu " Ok !! I will eat but Promise me that When I will finish my food , maa will come back " Pintu gets nervous about what to answer him . Ganga interfers in between trying to handle the situation . Ganga " Sonu!! I made ur Fav dish today , U will love it ." Pintu " Wow Is it maaa ? chalo Sonu I am very hungry . First we will have our food and then we will talk " Sonu gets diverted from the Promise thing .

Ganga brings food for Sonu and leaves Pintu-Sonu alone . Pintu takes Sonu on his lap and starts feeding him . Sonu stopping Pintu's hand" Chachu!! U didn't promised me .Tell me naa , If I will finish my food , maa will come naa " .Pintu was unable to think what to answer . Pintu (Stammering) " Son..Sonu See It's Rainning outside .U always loved Rain naa ." Pintu was unable to see Sonu's face . Sonu still was adamant on his question and asking for Promise . Pintu " Aacha Sonu!! See it's raining naa and Do u remember how we used to have a bike ride in Rain " Pintu while talking feeds Sonu . Sonu too gets distracted and eats the food . Pintu . Sonu finishes the food .He runs towards covered and starts searching for something . Pintu looks at him in confused look . Sonu takes out their family album from covered and goes to Pintu . Pintu gets surprised to see it .Sonu " Chachu ! See These are the pics from ur wedding . Maa tld me to show it to u and chachi but I forgot . Now I remember .Maa , U , Chachi all are looking so good naa chachu. " Pintu was in tears by seeing Sargam's pics .he hugs Sonu and kisses him . Pintu " Haan Sonu!! Why u didn't showed me ? See how beautiful all are looking .Haina? " Sonu " Sorry Chachu !! From next time I will not forget Maa's any work . " Sonu was again and again talking abt Sargam .And Pintu helplessly was just seeing him with tears .

BG SONG (Please Listen to it while reading this )

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cslHWo4wI3A[/YOUTUBE]


Sonu" Chachu Why u are crying ? " Pintu wiping his tears " Sonu!! I want to eat nice Icecream . Don't you want to eat ? ".Sonu " Wow ICECRAM !!.I will love it chachu . But If maa will come to know about it that I went for icecream in this rain then she will scold me naa " Pintu " Nahi!! Sonu Noone will scold u . Ur chachu will not let that happen " .Sonu gets very happy and Both leaves in the Bike .

MARKET

Rain stopped now.Pintu sonu reaches to icecream corner . They both have icecream .Suddenly Rain again starts falling .Sonu holds Pintu's hand and takes himunder some shelter . Pintu gets confused .Sonu " Chachu!! We can't get wet in rain . U know naa .If Maa will see both of us like this then She will scold us "Sonu after saying this starts eating the icecream . Pintu just sees him with a helpless sad look with tears . He thinks why God did such a bad thing to such an innocent child ? Why he snatched his mother from him ? ". "CHACHU!! ",Sonu's voice brings Pintu into senses .Sonu " Chachu Rain stopped .We should leave else maa will get angry na when she will come".Pintu nods his head with a smile .He once again takes Sonu in his arm and kisses him on his cheeks and says " Chalo!! ".Pintu tells to himself " I couldn't promise to u Sonu about Babhi but One promise ur chachu is doing now that Till his last breathe he will take care of his Gunda beta and Not a Single problem could even come closer to u . This is a Father's PROMISE , MY SON!! "

Edited by moniluvskinshuk - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg Moni I loved it, luckily I came to this Forum to find this lovely OS by you I can really imagine Pinto and Sonu like this and Sonu's innocence and questions, Wonderful Sontu OS Moni. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Moni this is just too emotional and mindblowing OS. I just had tears in my eyes while reading it. Please do make more VMs you are just too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Moni the OS is just Amazing I actually pictured every scene .
& when Ganga asks Pinto to be strong for everyone ,when he hugs her & cries , This scene felt so real & with the BG song just way too sad .
Sonu no matter what he does he is always thinking about his mum
A really emotional OS
Moni its AWESOME
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Moni great OS . reading & playing the bg song almost killed me it was as almost i was watching the scene on tv .
the part where sonu brings pinto back to his senses & where pinto promises him he'll take care of him & no problem will come near him
felt so real .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Guyz for liking my OS . It means a lot 🤗

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