FF A death and justice -edited part 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This different story the concept is Jeevika and Viren had been married for 7 years and they have a 5 years old daughter they live in Mumbai with Viren younger brother Virat and his mum Vanishika. Jeevika has a younger sister who lived in Rishikesh her name is Maanvi but Jeevika calls her Maanu. Jeevika and Maanvi parents died when they where kids in a car accident. Maanvi stay with her grand ma who she loved to bits. Virat and Maanvi love each other, they where gone get married soon as they where in a relationship since 5 years but where not ready to get married, as Virat wanted build his career so he could support Maanvi. However one day a terrible tragic has happen Jeevika and Viren where alone at home as Virat had taken his mum to different temples in Hardowar as it was her wish for many years and Virat & Viren promise to take her but never got round to it. Viren and Jeevika could not go as Jeevika was 8 months pregnant and was ready to drop at any time. Viren was a well known lawyer as he fight for justice due to this he had a lot emeries. So that one day someone had fallowed Viren home and murdered Jeevika. Then beaten Viren up and taken him away killed him and throw him in sea with rocks. The murdered aim was that Viren would be blamed for Jeevika murderd but god was not cured as Viren dead body was found after 5 days in the sea same time they found Jeevika body.

This story is based on a true story how Virat and Maanvi fight for justice to clear Viren name and find the real murders of Viren and Jeevika. I hope you like my concept please tell me your views and thought by leaving comments. It a different concept this time it about justice how people fight for justice some time the cases are still open as murders are left open and the cases are closed without justice as the case brush under the carpet from authorities.


Viren and Jeevika happy married couple:


Jeevika and Viren daughter Diya who is 5 years old:



Maanvi and Virat:


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indian10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys I hope you like the story please leave your comments so I know if I should continue the story or not...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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grate concept
cant wait to read
is jeevika alive ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: GkKgKklover

grate concept

cant wait to read
is jeevika alive ๐Ÿ˜•

No Jeevika and Viren are murdered will continue the story soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept Its different something new
Update soon can't wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept. I surely will like to read this. Please do continue soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1:

Diya had finally feel asleep, she was not sleeping properly for past 2 weeks since Jeevika and Viren had passed away. Maanvi had come to Mumbai to take care of Diya but she had found difficult as she was finding very had to come terms with Jeevika death. It a week before Raksha banden Maanvi thought "This is the first years I won't have got di, I always tie Raki on her, she is like my brother. She was everything to me di was my god, my parents..." Maanvi was stroking Diya hair and crying aways as she was missing Jeevika a lot.

Here Virat was punching the patching bag thinking "Bhai I will get you justice, and find your murders and bhabhi murders that my promise Virat Vedhare. But how??????" The thought was going through Virat mind day and night he had not slept or eaten for days.

There was Vanshika in her room, she was seating in her room in the concur holding Viren and Jeevika wedding picture. Vanishika was in total shock as she could not take her son and daughter in law death. Vanishika had not eaten or spoke in 2 weeks her mind was like a vegetable could not think, her mind was just suck in one place and that was in Viren and Jeevika memories.

Flash back:

5 years back Maanvi was decorating the wedding hall in Mumbai to make sure it was just like Rishikesh so Jeevika does not missing home. The wedding had be in Mumbai as it was Viren father dream that Viren had got married in there home. Vanishika a gave permission to Maanvi to decorate the place how Jeevika would like it. Virat had help Maanvi out to decorate the place.

to be continue soon...
Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a super fast update loved it great start update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love ur concept!!
continue sooon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow...quite different n interesting too...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
plzz cont soon n thnx a lot for the pm ..

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