My first Naksh OS-Jadu tera chal gaya..

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So in my OS Naksh are not yet married..Naitik is cmng to meet Akshara for the first time in college..I mean rishta pakka hone ke baad first time..lol..He had still not informed Akshara about this..It was a suprise for her!

Akshara was in her college..waiting for her class to start..but suddenly they were informed that there was no class today..So Akshara & gang planned a gol gappa party at canteen..When they were on their way to canteen suddenly Akshara saw Naitik..she taught it was just her dream as she was thinking about him only..And Naitik was confused ki kya yeh dekhkar bhi undekha kar rahi hai..So he went near her and called out her name! "Akshara"..she turned and was surprised to see him there at the same time she was very happy to! She went near him nd asked him how come he was at her college..he said her that he wanted to spend some time with her..he wanted to know her more..Akshara slightly blushed..Meanwhile..A girl in the college was continuesly staring at Naitik..And our Akshara saw this nd got jealous..She caught hold of Naitik's hand nd came near him..That girl just gave a uff look and went from there..lol..Naitik was shocked..but later he realised wat had happened and started laughing..Akshara was embaressed and then showed Naitik a fake anger..And then both looked into each others eye and started laughing out loud..After some time..Naitik asked her to come with him..He took her to a near by garden..and they both sat on a bench..but did not even utter a word from their mouth..but still..they both were enjoying their silent talks just by looking into each other eye!

After some time Naitik spoke up.

Naitik:Akshara ji..woh..aapko bura toh nahi laga na ki mein aapko yaha le aaya?

Akshara:Nahi nahi Naitik ji..Aisa kuch nahi hai..

Naitik smiles..Then there is gol gappa stall infront of the garden..Akshara's mouth starts wateringseeing it and Naitik notices it..He says her that lets go nd have it..how ever ur mouth has started watering..He got up nd forwarded his hand..Akshara slightly blushed nd forwarded her hand..And then both went near the stall & Akshara ordered for 2 plates..but Naitik said that why don't they share in one plate..Akshara blushed and nodded..Akshara started eating like kids and Naitik was enjoying to see her like this..(bg music was jadu yeh kya chal gaya)after their gol gappa date..Naitik dropped Akshara back to her college..Naitik did not want to go from there..leaving his love..it was the best day ever they both had experienced..bcz they both were with each other the whole day..sharing some cute cute moments!They shared a cute eyelock..And after some time Naitik left..Akshara also reached home..she was infront of mirror nd madly blushing thinking about the moments she spent with Naitik..suddenly she got a message from Naitik..

Naitik:"Aaj se pehle meine kabhi itne ache gol gappe nahi khaye"

Akshara:"Kyun?"

Naitik:"Aap jo saath mein nahi thi"

Akshara blushed nd they both continued texting each other with the bg jadu tera chal gaya!

Okay..thats it for now..Let us leave them alone..

And thnk u so much for baring wid me..As Im not a writer..I knw..I hv written very bad..sorry!🤣 🤣

And Thnx a ton Sona for helping me..🤗

Regards,

Sneha :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely OS,,! 👏👏👏👏👏 plz keep writing more nd more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i luvd it...
it was too good...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely os..you have written it very well..It is as simple as naksh relashionship..ye padhkar main flashback me chali gayi 😍keep writing more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...it was cute sneha...not at all bad...do write more..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful os . Do write more . Purani yaadein taza ho gayi & credit goes 2 u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice and lovely os sneha. so nice aksara jealous wow so cute . keep writing . waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os sneha👏
keep writing dear...🤗
n thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazzing os snehu.
Very very wll written :-):-) all credit goes to u..i have done ntng..
It dsnt seem to be like ur first attempt..u wrote really good..
Thank u for the pm..
Do write more n more :-):-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyccc OS Avni welldone ...plz start ur new FF

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