os 24 hours to live( last part updated )

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i am taking it positive as she loves him .
Both stared at each other

Buaji Kya huwa.

Khushi moved away from him & sat

Amma : oh beta

Khushi gave him her hand to pull him up

Arnav i slipped he hold her hand & buaji offer him her hand "buaji biwa ha meri Khayal rakhna ka leya " he winked at her

Buaji : pat his shoulder & hold his hand he stand up he wrap his arm on her waist as he knew she was her self having sprain

Amma: Khushi jao baam lago , agar thek na ho tou Dr ko call karo ,as she saw him placing his hand on his back

Khushi hum

Buaji: pat her nahi preeto kai aama

Khushi walk with him to bedroom she closed the door

Arnav i am fine

Khushi made him sit on bed & open his button

Arnav: what

Khushi" haq hai "she said in a very weak voice he heard it he didnot teased he was just staring at her face her lips ,he wanted to see what she was up to . she taken off his shirt , she look at him

Arnav" what "

Khushi vest

Arnav in front of you

Khushi without thinking pull off his vest as she knew he is in full mood of teasing her

Arnav "i will not pay for this ," she push him to bed ."i fall down & you "

Khushi turn him & apply balm ,he pull her suddenly "yeh aap kya kar raha hain"

Arnav: when you don't talk your eyes speak ?

Khushi quickly closed her eyes

Arnav smiled whisper in her ear "i want to see romantic channel " he kissed her earlobe ,tickle her with his breath .her hand automatically went in his hairs

Khushi hum ko nahi aata , move her face away she gently run her fingers in his hairs

Arnav:come on think your favorite hero movie , he kissed her jawline

Khushi "Arnav"she

Arnav: "hmmm" drop himself on her to hold her , her lips brush his shoulder" Should i tell you " whisper in her ear

Khushi look at him he was resting his head on the pillow , he eyes was closed ,she was not getting why he was so relax .

Arnav: Khushi bolo na said in sleepy voice

Khushi :look at her hand which was in his hairs ,she shyly smiled "aap ko yeh acha lag raha hain"said to herself she stopped caress him he opened half eyes & look at her

Arnav:" i use to think of you when i was there , your thought use to make me sleep & smile "she run her fingers in his hairs again

Khushi in surprise look at him , he had never talk about kidnap event with her today for the first time he was saying some thing .she saw a smile on his face a peace after days " sleep or you will make me again your Tv pagal "she smiled she was liking the way he was holding her tight ...she feel like kissing his shoulder she shyly look at him he was asleep ,"Khushi " to herself to calm herself .he in sleep moved pull her more close .her lips brush again with his shoulder " laad governor he can read heart,mind,eyes.now in sleep he can read my thought" she felt her heart will pound-out . she try to move at the same time buaji knocked "titilya close window rain will come in"

Arnav sat suddenly Kya huwa

Khushi woh barish at water droplet on her face "what the " she was about to wipe it

Arnav hold her hand & kissed her suddenly without given her second ,his eye was closed he moved away

Khushi pushed him

Arnav: smiled i cleaned

Khushi was not getting what to do where to go or hide herself " aap kai yeh hamiat "

Arnav HAQ pull her back to him peck her " that your hero do" whisper in her ear & jump out of bed to close the windows "Khushi what if some one has 24 hours to live then , i will not count this 30 mins you did cheating you made me sleep"he look back at her


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav thek ho , as he closed the other side windows he look at her

Khushi like a lioness step out of bed and pinned him next to the wall by placing both hand on his shoulder " aap apna aap ko kya smajhta hain"

Arnav : tumhara pati

Khushi nahi hain aap 11 din mein sab, she paused

Arnav : look at the back he saw water dripping down he moved her aside

Khushi hum aap se baat kar raha hain , aap iss tarah nahi ja sakta

Arnav: Khushi mujhe ko jana ha upper

Khushi look at him in shock

Arnav :he noticed the anger changed in to pain and she was scared

Khushi kya she limb and walk to him he was picking up his shirt , she snatched the shirt "kya uper "

Arnav : tara bana , he picked his vest didnot took the shirt from her

Khushi : aap kya bol raha hain

Arnav you have already given tea with sugar.

Khushi : hold his arm , pagal hain kya hum jo aap ko sugar ka saath da ga . she pull the vest too

Arnav: khushi you want me to go up like this , chalo koi baat nahi sub ko pata chala meri biwi mere khyala nahi rakti hai duniya mein

Khushi you are not going anywhere suna aap na

Arnav jana to hain , aur jana para ga bhi , if you want to stop me kiss me

Khushi: he pull the vest back and walk out "Arnav" she walked behind him

Buaji kahan ja raha ho beta

Arnav uper buaji

Buaji: kya she look at Khushi , who was having pale face

Arnav Buaji 11 din ka baad tou mein na waise bhi uper jana hai , mein na socha aaj musam ha suhana aaj he chal jao he walk out

Khushi : Buaji roka na ,she took umbrella ,she ran out behind him "happy ji Arnav ji kahan hain"

Happy hi: uper

Khushi kya bol raha hain hai aap

Happy ji woh dehka woh raha

Khushi look at the house ,he was standing on the roof . "Arnav ji "as she saw him losing balance

Arnav: go inside

Khushi aap necha utra abhi

Arnav: look at her she was scared plus angry "i will fix this "he called Happy ji from there

Khushi: happy ji aap na Kuch nahi dana , she walk to the ladder "agar aap necha nahi utra tum hum uper aa raha hain aap ka paas"

Arnav: don't you dare it is very slippery

Khushi aap necha utra , Bauji & Amma was too standing with open mouth , as with his each step all the 3 ladies scream "dekhe kar "

Buaji: bitwa necha aajo, barish taaz hai

Arnav :will you ,he took a step

Khushi : hain aap utra abhi , she was not able to take her eyes off him , as she was dead scared

Buaji: titilya bohat kamzoor hain ,she was praying.

Khushi held her breath as she saw him walking back ...towards the ladder

Arnav: you dare not back up Khushi

Buaji and Amma maan lo na jo bol raha hain , agar gir gaya tou

Khushi deal utra


Arnav carefully try to get down , he slipped twice he look at her she screamed .. as he step down

Buaji: aise koi karta hain , barish mein .

Arnav: i was just checking

Amma: beta barish mein tou woh aur ,she paused

Buaji us Shyam na .. she look at Arnav

Khushi look at Arnav

Arnav: bujai aap chup kyun hogai kya iss Shyam na aap ko impress karana kaleya kiya tha

Buaji: look at Khushi

Khushi : bujai sab pata hain inko ,she hold his arm buaji please tea bana da

Arnav : buaji and aunty i want to talk on that . he walk behind her as she was pulling him with her

Khushi : ab ko muhje ko tang karan ka siwa kuch aata hain ,as she push him in side room and close the door

Arnav: deal

Khushi:kya deal she in anger look at him

Arnav you said you will he smirk

Khushi " aap ko ho kya gaya hain " feel like killing him

Arnav: uper jao , why you are so angry ? you have to smile this hour i will not count

Khushi: fume " aap se paise la kar hum na galti kardi " she was all red

Arnav: grab her from her waist " tum ghusa mein itni cute kyun lagti ho" with eyes asked her ,his breath brush her lips

Khushi hand was on his shoulders ,she felt it was cold " aap change kara "

Arnav: why i listen you i am your boss for today

Khushi i am you wife first , she walk to the cupboard & taken out his tracksuit

Arnav: yeh tum na chori kiya

Khushi jee nahi muhje ko pata tha ka aap zaroo aai ga ..she throw towards him

Arnav: look at the t shirt this

Khushi : muhje ko achi lagi ..she paused

Arnav: for me

Khushi nahi apna boy friend ka leya thi

Arnav: hide his smile "aur woh kiss " sh hold his hand open bedroom door

Khushi acha tha Shyam ji na aap ko kidnap kiya tha , aap ko sirf mujhe ko tang karna aata hai.change kara or i will do my self. he push him to wash room gave him clothes

Arnav: most welcome ..he said in low voice

Buaji: Shyam na kidnap

Khushi ha buaji i lie to you all he was kidnap by Shyam ji

Arnav: buaji she should take care of me & look at her she is just shouting he peep out & said

Khushi : closed the door , "change kara "

Buaji Amma& babuji look at each other .

Arnav: buaji aap bola iss ko meri sawi kari chaiya aur yeh

bujai pull his hand with her & made him stand in front of her

Arnav buaji

Buaji shhh was praying & taking off the evil eye

Khushi look at Arnav he was moved with her act .

Arnav: buaji aap mein thek hoon

Amma: Khushi did you thank he came back safely

Khushi: look at Arnav "hmmm"

Buaji: cupped his face & kissed his head ."titilya tum fast karo iss ki zindagi kaleya "

Arnav: but why Buaji only 11 days are left in my life , he said in low voice

Buaji bus hum na bol diya , tumhari zindagi kaleya

Khushi: look at him

Arnav was not looking at her as buaji & amma was inquisitive to know the made him sit in center ,he told them each & everything , Khushi was in kitchen making pakors for him .

babuji was trying to say some thing

Arnav kneel down ,he was not getting , babuji poke his chest & pointed at buaji "DI "

babuji: shake his head in yes

Arnav: she is at home , she is fine babuji hold his hand

babuji: pointed at Khushi & gave a smile

Arnav: she is pagal i know

Khushi Khud hoga aap , she placed the pakora plate on table & walk in bed room . she wanted to cry .

Arnav: yeh aaj kal zara zara se baat per naraz hojati hai

Amma: beta aap se pyar bhi tou karti hai


Arnav shake his head in yes "Khud se zaida " he stand

Buaji kuch kahati bhi nahi hain

Arnav buaji mein hoon na i will make her eat , walk with the pakora plate in room "Khushi make me eat"

Khushi wipe her tears he had seen it "kya "

Arnav took a pakora , hold her from her waist & pull her next to him pinned her next to the wall ." open your mouth"

Khushi "Kya" he placed pakaro

Arnav dont eat , he took a bite , his lips brush her lips she held his shirts he chew .. "hmmm this way make me eat the remaining " she quickly chew the left over her eyes was closed

Khushi look at him

Arnav: come on , he pointed at plate .

Khushi aap he placed other in her mouth

Arnav took bite of half of it ... he smiled ,she has no option then to quickly chew the left over ,as she was scared he will ask for that too . ,he look at her hands one was holding his arm , other was placed on his heart he hide his smile . , buaji had told him she was not eating properly , to make her eat he had to do it . he didnot said a word as he knew she will stop eating . the cold breeze blow her hairs all over his face , he smiled at her .as he kissed her hairs and inhale her scent




precap Arnav cried in Amma's lap


do tell me should i cont or end here





Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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(now i got time to update i wanted to write something else it turn out something else )

He left her waist and removed her curls , she look at he ,she could read his eye as he was coming close to her again . she quickly picked pakoras and put in her mouth " now i will not give you" she said filling her hold mouth

Arnav :" Khushi it will stuck "he got frighten , snatched the plate from her ."Moti finish that first " he started eating the remaining" bujai asked me to make you eat few , she didnot asked to finish it " he look out at her , who was trying to chew "thek ho " she was not able to talk

Khushi just finished it

Arnav : buaji she had all didnot left for me

Buaji was coughing

Arnav what happen ? got panic

Amma: because of ran she has asthma attack sometime

Khushi came with her inhaler

Buaj hum thek hain she inhale

Khushi amma inhaler is about to finish , if she get again attack she will not be able to inhale

Arnav i will bring he walk out

Khushi: ran to get her money and she ran behind him" i dont need your help"

Arnav ignore her as he knew she will fight with him

Khushi walk ahead to the road " i will get & auto and get before him"she was walking on pavement , it was drizzling ,there was no auto , she felt a bike following without looking back she started walk fast " i think today people don't have maa behan at home " as she felt the guy hold her duppata she fume raised her had & turn back " how dare "she paused to see Arnav smiling on bike following her .


guys : you are teasing girl they all walk to them

Khushi in confusion look at them & then at Arnav

one guy bit over smart he came ahead & try to hold Khushi hand she step back hold Arnav arm

Arnav: dare not touch her

guy why? first you are following her & now others step ahead

Arnav should i tell you why ? he was about to step down

Khushi placed her hand on his chest to stop him ,quickly sat at back as she felt they were drank "chala aap " hold him tight to calm him he drives ,

There was silence he look at the her in mirror ,he hit brake ,she bang with him

Khushi : what happen

Arnav: i think some problem ,hide his smile ,her hairs was flowing with breeze

Khushi : can you slow down? he slow the speed she tied her hairs " by the way from where you got bike ?"

Arnav: happy ji

Khushi: & where are you taking me?

Arnav; where ever you ask me to take you ?

Khushi: buaji inhaler

Arnav: yes tell me where is pharmacy ?

Khushi: guided him .they stopped at red light

Police man whistle to stop

Khushi : Arnav ji aaj aap gai you are not wearing helmet

Arnav: shit & my license it was in purse

Khushi oh it is at home , run

Arnav: kya

Khushi don't look at him drive fast as it is green, like i did after hitting your car

Arnav smiled ,for the first time he was willing to break the traffic rule that to because of his crazy wife " hold me tight" he pull her close quickly with one hand as it was green he drive at full speed

Police man shouted "first no helmet then with a girlfriend, double fine" he note the number

Khushi "Girl friend nahi hain hum patni hain Khushi kumari Gupta Singh Raizada"

Arnav pagal hold me you will fall down

Arnav was happy that she call her self his wife , they reached the shop & took the inhaler .he search his pocket it was empty

Khushi: gave the money

Arnav: thx i really needed this ..

Khushi walk out

ck

The journey back home was quiet , she was thinking what all had happen, she was clutching his shirt tight and wrapping one arm around him . they took the long way , to avoid the policeman, he didnot disturb her as she was all lost some where he was just enjoying her closeness .he parked the bike

Arnav we reached

Khushi came back to life

Happy ji : Arnav ji kam hogaya aa gai paas paas, i am at your service any time

Arnav: smiled & gave him the key

Khushi: kon se kam , kya paas paas

Arnav: Khushi go give to buaji

Khushi nahi bola aap

Arnav: walk in with inhaler "Buaji yeh"

Khushi : buaji don't take she pull it from him

Arnav:Khushi

Khushi : aap aur happy ji kya baat kar raha tha she was pulling him

Buaji: titilya

Arnav: buaji pagal ha

Khushi: hain haan Mr Raizada she was out od her mind , she push him

buaji & Amma look at each other

Amma: "Khushi pagal ho" she try to come between them

Khushi: moved Amma she lost balance

Arnav : grab her from falling he made her sit "Khushi you want to listen"

Khushi haab ,he drag her with him to room & lock the door "yeh aap kya kar raha hain" as he twisted her arm & pull her close

Arnav: i am telling you

Khushi hum aap ki

Arnav was all lost his control ,kissed her passionately , as the broke "Happy ji was telling me tips how to bring wife close "

Khushi hum aap ki patni

Arnav: still i have 11 days so still you are my wife , he push her to bed

Khushi was shocked " you can't do like this you go home "

Arnav :why i cannot do this ? and today i am staying here ?he removed her duppata kissed her neckline she pull his hairs to move him away as he brush his lips next to her neck she ,left his hairs ,her fingers run in his hairs

Khushi Ar.. he sealed her lips again caress her hairs she became calm he slowly occupy her as both was all

lost .




Arnav was standing looking at the sky thou it was dark "maa where are you today i want to talk to you"

Amma placed her hand on his shoulder "kya baat hai"

Arnav wipe his tears

Amma gave him milk "Khushi "

Arnav: pagal so rahi hain lar kar , that is the reason so much peace in atmosphere

Amma: smiled

Arnav: now i don't like this peace ,i want her to fight with me even in sleep . pata nahi kya kardiya hain aap kai beti na

he sat on the stair and drank the milk

Amma: pull the chair and sat

Arnav: please you buaji or babuji don't get worried if she fight with me , if she doesn't fight she can't relax , see after evening fight how peacefully she is sleeping

Amma: "zaddi hai"

Arnav i am more

Amma: woh to pata hai

Arnav look at her she giggle

Amma: kya baat hai , she placed her hand on his shoulder

Arnav: look at her, he turn around , placed his hand on her knee" if i tell you will you help me"

Amma: ha bolo beta caress his cheek as she could see the tear

Arnav: first you slap me

Amma: what

Arnav: mara na

Amma: pat his cheek

Arnav: no like you slapped her

Amma aap bola baat kya hai

Arnav: "that day i married her for 6 months ,don't worry i love her & want her as my wife for my rest of life"

Amma : tou Khushi iss leya

Arnav: hold her hand" please kuch kara please she forget about that 6 months , it all happen because of Shyam"

Amma: we all told her so many times to you

Arnav: aunty we can't reversed time but i want to freeze this time

Amma: smiled Khushi ko maana lo

Arnav: i am doing that but see how she is fighting with me,but she is right she has to do all this with me , now she is not willing to go to RM. i don't want to force her at all

Amma: beta give her time

Arnav: look at her " if i give her time she will go far from me, she will think i don't love her and dont care for her . you don't know how i was without her for 15 day's ,i don't want to waste a min as while give her time my life end ,

Amma"Arnav"

Arnav" i want her in front of my eyes . i can't live without her , i can't breath,please don't mind if i come here " he cried placed his head in her lap

Amma was bit confused , he was talking so different" aik baat maana ga aap"

Arnav: jee

Amma : wipe his tear" you don't take tension, we all are with you we still have 11 days ,before that she will be in your home "

Arnav: but how

Amma: you try your way if she will not agree i will send her

Arnav: no force please , i don't want to force her , i want her to come with love

Amma: she will beta . she can't live without you either ,see how she is sleeping as she know's you are here, last night she didnot slept, she was having headache , every time she use to call me or babuji but this time she was just call your name, i will ask her now , in sleep you call his name & when he is around you fight.

Arnav: smiled at last

Amma: keep smiling & maano your pagal patni, jo karna ha karo , we are in one team. offer her hand ,my daanda is there

Arnav: thx you sleep

Amma: go wake her ask her to eat & you too eat , if you will not eat ,how you will pato you pagal patni

Arnav:had a laughter

Amma:kissed his fore head, "when ever you are sad & you want to do gossips about your pagal patni come to me"she got up

Arnav: smiled & walked in locking door " you sleep we will have dinner" he walked in room she was sleeping "Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada wanted that " a naughty smiled appeared on his lips sat next to her, he recollected how she didn't let him move away from her "i know you will fight with me, why it happen etc but we want that " twisted her curl on his finger " you asked for it your self " kissed her cheek ,he was imagine it was still blush ,pull the quilt on her " you look cute in my this black shirt "he slide next to her he had make her wear his shirt as he did not want to wake her up.

Khushi: sense his present before he could pull her close she moved on him like before ,this time she didnot clutch his shirt ,her hand went in his hairs

Arnav: look at her closely she was asleep "you to know what i want " peck at her lips "fight as much you want to HAQ hai meri Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada ka even in sleep you are using your right " he closed his eye as he too wanted to have a nice sleep

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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me waiting for more updates :D
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Di,loved it😃
Super cute😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow too cute i loved it
will u continue di?
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hi naddiya hru? Ur amzing
Wow it was lovely very cute,,,,,, yaar,,plz contu
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Originally posted by: devishree

wow too cute i loved it

will u continue di?

ya Insha Allah that is the reason i res 2 post ... aman wedding os still half way... and my SS they are on hold
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awww.w...this is sooo shweet os...😍loved ittt...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome naddiya
will u continue this os ?

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