SS: 7 Days - SaRa : last part & Epi-pg:7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey all i am back with my new SS...

I thought of writing OS and when i started it became SS, i thought chalo lets complete it with in 3 to 4 parts but it went to 8 to 9 parts šŸ˜†

Guys it is a love story of Sameer and Indira, if you people feel my story repetitive or bored please let me know so that i can understand that i am pakkaing you people and will refine my writings 😳

so here is the Short Story on SaRa... adaat sa majboor i cannot think beyond SaRa, i really very fond of Sameer and Indira's characters, so again i wrote on them... ā˜ŗļø

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Index

Chapter-1 Page-1

Chapter-2 Page-2

Chapter-3 Page-3

Chapter-4 Page-4

Chapter-5 Page-5

Chapter-6 Page-5

Chapter-7 Page-6

Chapter-8 Page-6

Chapter-9 Page-7 (last part)

Epilogue Page-7



Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago
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Chapter-1

Indira slams her books on the library table with much irritation, the sound made mandira, sunaina and seema jump under their skin.
Indira "idiot kahi kaa, kanjoos, kadoos, saduoo. He don't know how to talk with a girl. Dil tho kartha hain cheerka rakdu vusee. Darthi pe booj hain."
Sunanina, Mandira and Seema sitting in the library of Sharma college of Arts and Science when Indira comes in with full of angry mood. Sunania is reading 'how to reduce weight in 10 days' book, where Mandira is doing her nails and reading the beauty tips article, and Seema is reading some bollywood news in the newspapers. First one to react is Sunania, who is eating her 5th packet of lays asks innocently "tu kiska barama baat karahi hain" mandira who is adjusting her hair says giving a dreamy look "obviously the handsome, stunning macho man of the college Mr. Sameer Diwan"
Indira glares at her, folders her hand says "introduction katam hogaye, tho muhh band karo nahin to makkieya gusjayenga"
mandira pouts a little and bends her head to read the magazine.
Seema sighs and says "now what happened?"
Indira "what happened, that stupid is making fun of me saying that if I dance the stage will fall down for my weight and-"
Mandira cuts her says "maybe bechara might be thinking that sunania is also dancing with you so he said like that"
Sunania beats mandira, mandira "oouch" and rubs her hand.
Indira shouts "will you people be serious" Mandira raises her hands in surrender, sunania silently starts eating her lays and seema "ok Indira tell us what happened, now what did Sameer do"
Indira takes a deep breath and says "as you all know I am participating in the dance competition along with Sumer. So I went for the practice and waiting for Sumer. Just then this Bandar with along with his so called chipkoo girlfriend, Natasha and her friend Tanya came their and started commenting on me. Whatever dance step I do he started pointing wrongs in that I am really fed up with him. I feel like banging his head to the wall. What does he know about dance all, he just knows how to make fun of all and roams with girls, the most irritating person on this earth. He really donot have respect for woman and arts. When he sees me I think he undergoes some chemical reactions in his body and just starts irritating me in one way or the other. God knows how many days I have to bare him."
Seema coolly says "after today - another 7 days, yes just bare him for another 7 days after that no need to see his face also"
Indira relaxes taking a deep breath says "yes another 7 days after that I donot need to see that Bandar face".

Indira, Mandira, Seema and Sunania are best friends from day one of their college. They met in the welcome party given by their seniors on the first day of their collage and instantly became friends. Indira Sharma, yes Sharma collage of Arts and Sciences is her grandfather's college. Her father Inder Sharma is the board member of the college but Indira never behaved like the owner of the college. She is always down to earth. But when she gets angry no one can stand infront of her, she erupts like volcano. Everyone fears to stand before her if they do any mistake; Indira can be rude and angry at the same time can be kind and caring. If anyone needs her she stands with them without hesitation. But only one person is there in the college whose sight Indira cannot stand, no it is not due to fear but due to irritation that is Sameer Diwan.

Sameer Diwan is the only son of Diwan family, the next heir of Diwan foundation. He is rich and spoiled brat. He is famous for his devilish handsome features in girls. No girl can deny him if he shows interest. He changes his girl friend's like he changes his clothes. He is never serious with any girl. He sits in the last bench making masti and funs of everyone but this does not mean that he is the weakest student in the class. The first shock came to all when first semester results came out and Sameer lost his first place to Indira with just 7 marks claiming the second position. Though Indira is impressed with Sameer for his intelligence and sharpness but never accepted. From then the competition started between Indira and Sameer. They both hate each other to core; never leave a chance to show each other down. Once sameer gets the top marks the next semester Indira beats him. They are popular in the college for their fights. Everyone fears to come between them when they start arguing.

Today they completed their 4 years college life, they got the results and asusal Indira topped beating Sameer with a very little margin. Just another 7 days of college, on 7th day they will have an inter dance competition conducted in their college and for last time of her college life Indira is participating in it along with Sumer, who studied along with her. She has only 6 days in her hand to prepare for the dance competition. A lot of colleges are participating in the competition, she want to win this one at any cost.

Indira hears announcement for her to come to arts class as soon as possible. Indira sighs and says "ok I think Dance master came; I need to go for the practice. Bye guys hope that Bandar is not there anymore".
Indira reaches the arts class room to see the first face which she is wishing not to see, Sameer who is grinning like idiot to see her there. She closes her eyes with irritation, mutters some curse and goes inside greets her dance master.
Dance master "Indira, one bad news and one good news"
Indira "oh kya hain master"
Dance master "bad news is Sumer broken his leg while driving his bike, nothing to worry he is fine now but he is not participating in the competition"
Indira feels low "oh", she and Sumer won a lot of competitions before.
Dance master "but good news is we got the replacement"
Indira's face lightens little and asks "who is it master"
Dance master points towards the person says "Sameer Diwan"
Indira eyes pops out and she shouts "what?"
Dance master jumps a little to hear the sudden outburst of Indira where Sameer is still grinning at her like a mad man.
Indira "no Sir, I am not going to dance with that banda-" closes her eyes "I I mean with Sameer Diwan. Please select anyone in our college but not with him" Dance master is not from the same college. The old dance master left the college as he got some reality show, so Sharma College appointed new dance master who donot know about the rivality of Sameer and Indira.
Dance master "why Miss Indira, I have seen Sameer's dance. He is good at his steps. We have very less time and all the students are busy in organizing the fare well and all. At this last moment it is really good that we got a good dancer who can grasp the steps soon"
Indira "but sir-"
Dance master cuts her saying "ok Mr. Sameer and Miss Indira tomorrow at 9 AM at my dance school. We will practice for 6 days continuously and we will rock the floor on 7th day" Sameer smiles at him and nods his head. Indira reluctantly nods her head.

As soon as Dance master leaves the room Indira glares at Sameer "I want to win this dance competition at any cost, if you do any mistake I will kill you mercilessly"
Sameer yamns and says "I am not kid that I will be afraid of your damkiya. So don't show your little finger to me Miss Indira Sharma. First check yourself if you can meet my standards"
Indira folders her hands "standards, Sameer Diwan also has some standards"
Sameer glares at her "you will see that"
Indira "I am awaiting to see that" says with a fake anxiety. Indira turns and take the paper kept by her Dance master, the theme of their dance.

Indira goes from the room ignoring Sameer reading the paper, the dance theme is "Lust, Love and Adoration". They are going to show the difference between these three words in the form of dance.
Indira thinks "can Sameer will be able to pull this dance well, oh god Sumer. I feel sorry for your condition but still want to beat you for your reckless driving and mostly for pushing me in this situation to dance with that stupid Bandar" she puts the paper on her face still thinking "Or can I drop from this competition… NO why should I drop from this competition, if he messes then I can make fun of him. Last 7 days may be I will have a lot of fun to show him down" she gives a evil grin and decides to face Sameer tomorrow for dance practice.

7 days, will Love find its way in these 7 days? The bond they are not able to form for last 4 years can they form in just 7 days. Let's wait and unfold the story…

Edited by preethimadhavg - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome part..

loved the first part...

do cont soon..

please do pm me soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start that bandar i mean sameer going to make indira very angryšŸ˜†
r u going to update regularly
preethi r u free from cooking šŸ˜†
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Really liked the concept ...
Awww...Toppers ki never ending fight ...to be better than each other...šŸ˜† 😊
I really enjoyed it ...šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Originally posted by: clustersofstar

nice start that bandar i mean sameer going to make indira very angryšŸ˜†

r u going to update regularly
preethi r u free from cooking šŸ˜†


one month kitchen kaha hai bolgaye ghar mein šŸ˜† mom use to cook and i use to eat 😳
now again i need to cook, god why do we need to cook

kaash Madhav kana pakana jantha ho tho ā˜ŗļø šŸ˜†
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ok guys i am back with my update...

The dance sequence i am putting in this part is purely my imagination, i tried my best to show Lust, Love and adoration with these three songs... if you feel it is not upto the mark then sorry and bare with me... 😳

i love dancing and i use to dream this dance sequence everytime when i heard about competitions
[i am not a gr8 dance mind you... i just love to dance thats all 😳]

chalo read the chapter and leave your comments šŸ¤—

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Chapter-2

7th day the dance competitions are going with full swing. Sameer and Indira waiting for their turn, the stage is decorated well. They are going to perform on three songs remixed by framing the required lyrics and music to show the three emotions in three songs with three different backgrounds and costumes. Their Dance master says all the best to both of them and other group of people who going to support Sameer and Indira and goes to sit in the audience to cheer up them.

Anchor "and now let me call up our next participants Sameer and Indira from Sharma collage Arts and Science. They are going to perform on three different songs showing three different emotions of life – Lust, Love and Adoration. Give them a big hand" everyone claps and cheers for Sameer and Indira.

Slowly the curtains raise and the background setting is shown with black stones like material and showing water pictures, music starts:
The girls are sitting around Indira on a stone and decorating Indira, the dressing is little like ancient clothings and jewelly, Sameer is standing turned towards audience and he looks like body guard, stands with a weapon as if he is guarding Indira. His dress is ancient dressing with dotti and duppata without any top, a waist band around his waist to keep the duppata it at place.
Indira comes near Sameer and starts dancing:

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin

Sameer is about to move from her without giving her a look, Indira stops him holding his hand and swrills near him singing…

Tera Nashila Badan Baahon Ne Chhoda Nahin
Aankhen To Kholi Magar Sapna Woh Toda Nahin
Haan Wohi Woh Wohi

Indira leans on his shoulder closes her eyes singing…

Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi

Sameer pushes her little and tries to go to be stopped by Indira, this time he looks into her eyes. Indira gives a triumph smile singing…

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin

Sameer and Indira do few steps with little lifts and classic steps…
Light is turned to red so that they reflect on their eyes and make them look so they are in deep romantic mood. The light falls on Indira's eyes and lips making them shine. She takes the weapon he left on the floor puts it before her; Sameer puts his hands on her hands holding the weapon like hugging her from back…

Tere Gale Milne Ke, Mausam Bade Hote Hain

Indira turns towards him leaving one hand on weapon, Sameer moves a little far and pulls her near him where she goes with a swirl puts her hand on his chest over his duppata…

Janmon Ka Vaada Koi, Yeh Gham Bade Chhote Hain

Both leaves the weapon and dances moving either side looking into each other's eyes…

Lambi Si Ek Raat Ho, Lamba Sa Ek Din Mile
Bas Itna Sa Jeena Ho, Milan Ki Ghadi Jab Mile

Indira goes into Sameers arms; Sameer picks her up and bends her completely…

Haan Wohi Bas Wohi

Indira still in bends position closes her eyes and trackes her body with her hand, sameer makes a small turn around singing…

Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi

Sameer makes her stand, both sits on their knees infront of each other and Sameer slowly buries his head in her shoulder, she turns her head and closes her eyes… slowly the part of stage goes inside taking both of them inside and lights get slowly dim still song plays…

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin

They take 15 seconds to change their customes... not much change but Sameer puts his shirt on removing the shervani and Indira wears gagra takes little time by which Sameer manages the stage...

[Second song]

Sameer stands facing the stage starts singing, slowly lights get turned on,

Chand chupa badal mein, Sharmake meri janaa,
Chand chupa badal mein, Sharmake meri janaa,

Indira sits on julaa wearing a little blue gagra with glitter duppata and open hair. The julaa comes down slowly…
Sameer turns towards Indira and forwards his hand, Indira gives her hand to him. Both starts dancing on slow numbers..

Seene se lagaja tu, Balkhake meri janaa,
Ghumsum sa hai, Gupchup sa hai,
Madhosh hai, Khamosh hai,
Ye samaa haa ye samaa, Kuch aur hai,

Indira moves away from Sameer singing and dancing..

O oh oh
Chand chupa badal mein, Sharmake meri janaa,
Seene se lagaja tu, Balkhake meri janaa,

Sameer and Indira stands and looks at sideways acting if some people are doing some pooja..

--Chorus--
Aaja re aaja chanda Ki jabatak tu na aaye ga
Sajanaa ke chehren ko dekhne Ye mantersa jayega,

Sameer moves forwards singing…

Na na chanda tu nahi aana, Tu jo aaya to,
Sanam sharma ke kahi chala jayena,
--Chorus--
Aaja re aaja chanda Tu lakh duya ye painga,

Sameer dances singing… Indira goes towards julaa smiling

Na na chanda tu nahi aana, Varna sanam chalaa jayegaa

Sameer dances..

Achal mein tu chup ja ne de

Indira pouts showing her thumb down dancing around julaa

Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,

Sameer goes near her pulls her hair little singing..

Zulfo mein tu kho jaane de

Turns otherside making her hair brush his face singing…

Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,

Sits on the julaa, swinging singing…

Pyar to naam hai, Sabar ka hamdum,

Sameer dances moving a little distance from julaaa..

Wohi bhalaa bolo kaise kare hum,

Indira comes towards Sameer dancing…

Sawan ki rah jese dekh morr hai,

Sameer catches her hand pulling her close, when Indira tries to run away…

Ae,rehene bhi do jaane bhi do ab chudo na

Yo modo na, Ye sama ha ye sama kuch aur hai,

Again as chorus starts Sameer and Indira stops their dance and looks at the people.

Aaya re aaya chanda, Ab har khwayish puri hogi,
Chandani raat mei.n har sajani apne,
Sajanaa ko dekhe ki. -- (3)

Indira slowly puts takes her duppata and puts infront of Sameer looking at him throw it. Sameer brings the duppata down. Indira slowly hugs him and lights gets turned off one after the other making the stage dark and music will be placed at the background.

[3rd song]

First the chorus girls comes on to the stage dancing…

Aasmaan ki baahon mein chaand akela thehra tha
Hey, hey, hey, hey
Raat ki jawaani pe chaandni ka pehra tha
Hey, hey, hey, hey

Indira comes wearing half saree over gagra and stands in between the girls dancing…

Hey, runjhun runjhun hawa ka jhonka ujli ujli raat

Sameer comes and stands a distance as if he is looking at the girls dancing, girls stops dancing noticing Sameer…

Taaron ki doli mein aayi jhilmilaate jugnu ki baaraat
Sab ke honton pe thehri thi aake koi baat

Indira is unknow that Sameer is watching her, she dancing closing her eyes imaging Sameer with her…

Dhumak dhumak kar naach rahi thi meri radha pyaari, haan
Dhumak dhumak kar naach rahi thi meri radha pyaari

Sameer asks all the girls to go way and comes near Indira places his hand around her waist hugging her from back.

Jaane kahan se raas rachaane aaya chhaila girdhaari

Indira stops dancing breathing heavy stands still with closed eyes, she donot need to know who is it as she is very much knows the touch…

More piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
Ho more piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
Haan
More piya

Indira slowly turns towards Sameer, the whole stage has moon lights which are reflecting in their eyes, it gives a feel that Indira and Sameer are looking into each other's eyes with love and affection. Sameer raises his hand to trace her face when Indira bends her head with shy and tries to run when Sameer catches her hand…

Na baiyyaan dharo, aati hai mujhe sharam
Haan, chhod do tumko hai meri kasam

Holding her both hands Sameer and Indira dances little classic steps mixed…

Na, zid na karo jaane do mujhe balam
Dekho, doongi main gaaliyaan bhaanwre

At last Sameer pulls her close and lifts her in his arms making a round.

Chalo hato sataao na more piya
More piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
Ho more piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
More piya

Sameer puts Indira on some rock like thing and sits above of it, Indira hugs her with an expression of love and Sameer puts his chin on her head with affection… their expression are the highlight of the song which shows that they love each other beyond their lives.

Jamuna ke teer baaje mridang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Athron pe geet mann mein umang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Saanson mein pyaas tan mein tarang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang

The performance is a huge hit and Sameer-Indira group bagged the award. Sameer and Indira went to receive the award. After that competition all other college people left the auditorium. The final farewell party for Indira's batch is started at last in the college premises after their principles speech. Everyone is enjoying the party Indira is standing along with mandira, Sunania and Seema. Indira hears Natasha and Tanya fighting over Sameer for their next date openly, Mandira sighed hearing that, Sunania laughed seeing the scene where Seema shakes her head but Indira was glaring at both of them searching for Sameer who is at drinks counter. Sameer takes the drink in his hand and smiles at the girls; he starts walking towards them and crosses everyone to reach Indira. He gives the drink to Indira with a smile, Indira smiles back and takes the drink. Everyone stops on their track to see Sameer and Indira smiling at each other and the way they are looking at each other any blind person can tell that they are very much in love, this came as a shock to everyone. But Sameer and Indira are oblique to the surprise looks they are getting, because they are in their own world.

What might have happened in last 7 days? Let's see in my next part šŸ˜‰ 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow nice work Preethi ...šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘
The song sequence were all very nice...šŸ‘

Really nice SS...
Waiting to read what has happened in past seven days...😳

forgot to say...
Congratulations on ur new SS n All the Best for it ...šŸ‘šŸ¼
I am sure it is going to be very nice...

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