ARHI SS: Mistake...Part 3|pg 31|25/8/12|PM l8r

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PART 1...


the lines in blue is the English translation


A mansion of Delhi...just bcoz of one mistake...which was always filled wid lights...is dark today...hapiness which was always a part of this house...is no where to be seen...

the house which was always filled wid sweet laughter...is filled wid silence...

the darkness is everywhere in the house...leaving the hearts of the people living in this house dark n shattered too...


a dark room filled wid all the things needed...n along wid that...fotos...of someone...

a figure...sitting on the floor...wid a frame in hand...tears rolling down the cheeks...

someone opened the door...n seeing it completely dark...switched on the lights...


: Arnav...

yes it's Arnav...sitting on the floor...with eyes puffy red...n swelled...coz of constant crying...

Arnav: bhai she left me...n its all coz of me...

Shyam [a good person here]: Arnav ... Arnav try to control urself...


Arnav : how i can control my self...when i know...its completely my mistake...how can i do this...how... "he was feeling frustrated n guilty at the same tym..."


i cant bear this load of guilt bhai...im the culprit...how can i do this wid her...coz of my one mistake...she left me...she left me bhai she left me... "he said crying n throwing things..."


but wat she did is rite...i deserve it...wat i did wid her...was wrong...kab tak sehti woh...im wrong bhai...she was rite...always rite...n wat i did...i failed her...


her trust...her faith on me...i failed...ma...pa...i failed u bhai...i failed everyone...i failed everyone..."


he said n punched the mirror in front of him...he was not in a state to see his face also...he was ashamed of his doings...he punched it sooo hard that the pieces got pierced in his hand...n blood start oozing out of it..."


: Arnav ... " Arnav heard a voice n look for it...n saw a beautiful lady in front of him...


Shyam: Anjali plzzz samjhao ise...yeh mere koi baat sunane ko ready nahin...[Anjali please handle him, he is not ready to listen me at all]


Anjali: Arnav ... "she said n came near him..."


Arnav : bhabhi plzzz...i want to be alone...im the one who did this biggest mistake of my life...n everyone is paying for that...

Anjali: Arnav dekh plzzz...meri baat maan...tu ne ghalti ki...tu usko sudhar [Arnav if u made a mistake that rectify it]..."n talking like this she took him to the bed...n make him sit there...n got up to bring the first aid box..."


Arnav : nahin...ghalti meri hai...aur mein usey apna chehraa dekhane ke like nahin.[No it was my mistake and i dont have enough guts to show my face to her]..she deserve the best...she dont deserve some one like..."saying this...he again started crying badly...the tears...which never stop"


Shyam: Arnav dekh tu...[Arnav listen..]


Arnav : nahin bhai...mein ne jo uske saath kiya...woh kabhi mere pass wapis laut ke nahi ayegi.[No bro i did the worst with her and it was all my mistake she wont come back to me ever]..she hates me...she hates me...


Shyam: Ar--- "but he was cut by someone..."


V: he deserves this...coz wat he did wid her...n coz of him...she left us...no one knows where she is...


Shyam: mom plz...


Anjali: maa plzzz...woh pehle hi teekh nahin hai...aur aap..[Mom please he is already suffering and you..]. "she has bandaged his hand...but was sitting wid him...as he again started crying"


Ananya [u can imagine anyone]: i told u before also Anjali...he deserve this...uski muskaan...uski khushi cheeni.[he stole her happiness her smile he deserves to suffer]..tu he deserve wat he is getting...


"she said widout even giving him a glance...though her heart ached...seeing her child like this...but his mistake is not wich can be forgiven easily...he has to pay for it..."


saying this...she left the room...calling Shyam and Anjali down...


Arnav: bhai aap jao...mujhe akela chor do...plz [Bro please go and leave me alone for sometime]... "Shyam n Anjali both were feeling miserable seeing him like this...but they cant do anything to ease that pain...so they left...giving him some space n tym..."


after all where gone... Arnav broke down n started crying badly...holding the frame...


"im sorry Khushi...mein ne jo kiya...woh ghalat tha...plzzz wapis ajao [im sorry khushi i made a mistake. please come back]...its been 2 months now...im waiitng for u...plzzz wapis ajao na...plzz Khushi...but nahin mein ne jo tumhare saath kiya...woh ghalat tha.[please come back Khushi..but no what i did with you was certainly wrong i dont deserve u]..i deserve more n more punishment then this...that m family disowned me...i hate myself...im hating that moment...the moment i gave u sooo much pain...im sorry...


"he hit his already bandaged hand again on the floor...but feels no pain...as the ain inside him is more than this physical pain..."


plzzz wapis ajao Khushi [please come back Khushi]...plz..."repeating this...he slept on the floor...holding the frame close to his heart...wid her picture in it..."


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on one side'this was the scene'n the other'


a big house on the outskirts of the city' wid two floors'having a bit rough texture'windows open n old'n a garden outside wid some workers cleaning the garden as many leaves have fallen due to autumn season'.many children playing in the garden having gala tym'.


A long road was there'which joins to the main road'going towards the city''.a board was hanging there which reads the name of the place'. Jeevan Orphanage Lucknow'.


A gal was standing in the window'looking at the kids'playing in the garden'n enjoying'having gr88 tym'n the workers'who were cleaning the garden..


Tears roll down her cheeks seeing the dry leaves..Scattered everywhere'


Gal: meri zindagi bhi bilkul in bikarey patoon ki tarah hai..jinhen jahan hawa chahye udha le jaye'koi nahin jis se apna dard bant sakoon'apna dil ka hall bata sakoon'mein kitni independent thi'apna har faisla khud liya..magr ek faisle ne zindagi hi badal dali'kitna baroosa kiya'apni zindagi tumharey naam kar di'''magar tumne mera dil thor diya'tum ne mera vishwas thor diya'mujhe tor diya'I HATE U ARNAV'.I hate u'''' [ My life is like a dry leaf now wind can blow it away where ever she want. No one is there with whom i can share my pain my sorrow, i was an independent girl whole life i took my all decisions but one decision changed my life forever. I had full faith on you, have given my life to you. but you broke my heart, my trust, you broke me Arnav.. I HATE YOU ARNAV..I HATE YOU]


While she was thinking n saying all this to herself'someone called from behind'breaking her chain of thoughts..


V: Khushi beta..kahan hai..chal aja khana tayaar hai'. [Khushi, come dear food is ready]


Hearing the voice..Khushi cleared her tears'n went inside'she came here after getting hurt by Arnav 'she can never forget wat he did'but she never shared wat she is going through wid any one'nor her family'nor her bua'the care taker of the orphanage'as she didn't want to share her personal life wid anyone'she just said that she want to take a break from her life'n want some peaceful moments'i-e. she is here''..but her bua know very well'that something has happened'y a gal who got married just a 8 months ago'wanna go away from her new house'n her husband'but she didn't asked as she want Khushi speak herself'


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Index


Part 1...above..

Part 2...Page 17...

Part 3...Page 31...


Hope u all like...

sorry for any grammatical mistakes...n yeah its completely different story from the actual story line...

so u have to imagine few things...

take care..

anumeha 'anu'...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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cant wait for the next part
Translate the Hindi conversations into English please
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hey anu, this sounds very interesting and different, please continue.
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Anu it's sounds awesome :) wonder wht Arnav did that hurt Khushi sooo much ?? Update soon xoxoxo
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Nice part.
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Hmm sounds interesting pls continue
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good one yaar :)
lovely :))
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V v nice:):))) happy writing
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hiii
awesome start
loved it
loved arnav
sooo sad
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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awesome start loved it very heartbreaking can't wait to find out what her did loved it thanks for the pm continue soon

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