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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

cant open my eyes n e more🥱


Same here!!!🥱
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Posted: 13 years ago


this is not fair..
wenevr i stay online... update never get posted and once i go off..
the update cums within seconds...😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet



this is not fair..
wenevr i stay online... update never get posted and once i go off..
the update cums within seconds...😭

is it so... then pls log out and sign back in... ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet



this is not fair..
wenevr i stay online... update never get posted and once i go off..
the update cums within seconds...😭


Awww don't be sad sweets!!!

Di is not online right now so we hold check it tomorrow!! It's okay shona!!😳

Let's wait for 5 minutes then lets go and sleep!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ruchs
thinking of tht only :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chalo me gng to sleep
Will read tomm evning after iftari update
Good night ppl
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Posted: 13 years ago

I am so emotional after reading your comments and wishes. Love you all…muaaah. 😊 You made me so happy and I thank the day I joined this amazing forum and made so many great friends. On a lighter note, if my boss appreciated even half of this, I may have worked for half the salary!!!😆

Thanks for your feedback. I wish I had given you an update sooner to keep the flow of story. Well Mohinder finds about his Geet's pain so here is the next part. Also, as a small thank you, I have already started formatting / editing my next part. So expect another update in a day or two

Love you all a lot

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Chapter 37

"How could you not tell me….how could you…Itna sab kuch ho gaya and still you hid this from me? Rano…tum…tumne mujhse sach chupaya"

[How could you not tell me….how could you…So much happened and and still you hid this from me. Rano…you…you hid the truth from me]

"Tusi Suniye toh"

[Please listen]

"Bas…ab aur kuch baki bacha hai kehne ya sun ne ko. Galti toh meri hai jo apni beti ka dukh nahi dekh paya."

[Enough…Now is there anything left to say or listen. After all it is my mistake that I could not see my daughter's pain]

"Papa"

Mohinder lifted his both hand and held them together.

{Totally clich line I lifted from DDLJ – But I love this line}

"Apne inhi hathon mein jab pehli baar uthaya tha tumhein, tab us waqt I promised to keep you always happy. Meri princess, meri nanhi si jaan. I promised to fulfill all your wishes before your heart could desire them. I promised to keep you safe from these world's eyes"

[When I had held you for the first time in these hands of mine, at that time I promised to keep you always happy. My princess, my little life. I promised to fulfill all your wishes before your heart could desire them. I promised to keep you safe from these world's eyes]

Geet hugged his dad and sobbed in his arms.

"Par mujhe kya pata tha ki meri bachi itne dukh mein hain aur mein yeh soch kar aaram se baitha rahunga ki woh khush hai. Tu mera hissa hai…Mohinder Handa ka hissa"

[But what did I know that my child will suffer so much and I will keep on sitting peacefully thinking that she is happy. You are a part of me…Mohinder Handa's part]

He pulled Geet out of his arms and looked at her face with new determination.

"Jo ho gaya so ho gaya…lekin bas ab aur nahi. Kya samjhata hai woh…I won't spare him jiski wajah se meri beti ki aankhon mein aansoon aaye hain…mein use chodunga nahi."

[Whatever happened, happened…but no more. What does he think of himself…I won't spare him because of whom my daughter has cried…I won't let leave him]

Geet shook her head in denial trying to make her father understand that she loved Maan. But without listening to anything Mohinder walked away and stormed out of the house.

"Oh God yeh kya ho gaya…I never wanted dad to find out and that too like this…please mumma aap samjhaiye dad ko….please"

[Oh God, how did all this happen… I never wanted dad to find out and that too like this…please mumma…you make dad understand…please]

Rano just nodded and ran after him but she could not find him in the house. She consoled Geet telling her to keep calm as she tried calling her husband but to no avail.

Rahul had seen his dad coming down with a furious expression and had accompanied him as Mohinder just asked him to come with him. He briefed Rahul about whatever he knew in the car and Rahul went berserk with anger. Mere thought of Geet in pain because her husband was in love with some other woman tore his heart. He could not believe that his sister who confided every small thing in him chose to hide such a big thing from him and his trust in Maan completely shattered.

Mohinder was a man of means and he called up his lawyer immediately. He was determined not to let her daughter suffer anymore. They reached Khurana Mansion and went inside demanding to meet Savitri Devi.

Daadima was visibly shaken at the anger she could read in Mohinder's and Rahul's eyes. Unaware of the bigger volcano burning inside them, she tried to calm upset Mohinder.

"Beta aap…lagta hai Geet told you about the fight today evening. Mein bahut sharminda hoon ki Maan ne unchi awaaz mein Geet se baat ki. Par please aap shant ho jaiye. Pati Patni ke beech aisi galatfehmi ho jaati hain. Humne samjhaya hai Maan ko aur woh Geet se maafi bhi maang lenge."

[Son you…think Geet told you about the fight today evening. I am vey ashamed that Maan spoke to Geet in such a rude manner. But please you calm down. Sometimes such misunderstandings do happen in between husband and wife. I have made Maan understand and he will apologize to Geet also]

Maan, Dev and Meera also came to the hall hearing voices.

Maan bent down to take blessings from Mohinder but he stopped him in the middle. "Is sab ki koi zaroorat nahi hai"

[There is no need for all this]

Though Maan was little surprised that Geet had confided in her parents about their fight but at the same time he also realized how much he would have hurt her to take this action.

He quietly accepted his mistake – "I am sorry Bauji."

"kis kis cheez ke liye maafi mangoge Maan aur abhi kis cheez ke liye maafi maang rahe ho."

[For what all will you apologize and for what are you apologizing now?]

"Mohinder Beta"

Mohinder folded his hands in front of Savitri Devi

"Kyon Maaji, kyon kiya aapne aisa. Hum bahut khush the apni duniya mein. Phir kyon aap aye the humaare ghar humari beti ka haath maangne. Agar Maan was not ready for this marriage then why did you come? Who gave you the right to spoil her life like this?

Koi majboori nahi thi humari phir kyon aaj humein itna majboor kar diya aapne.

Did you not know that your grandson is not ready to move forward? And even after knowing if you decided to spoil my daughter's life then forgive me but I can only say that I never expected this from you."

[Why Maaji, why did you do this? We were very happy in our world. Then why did you come to our house to ask for our daughter's hand. If Maan was not ready for this marriage then why did you come? Who gave you the right to spoil her life like this?

We did not have any obligations then why did you made us so obligated?

Did you not know that your grandson is not ready to move forward? And even after knowing if you decided to spoil my daughter's life then forgive me but I can only say that I never expected this from you.]

Daadima was shocked hearing Mohinder's words – "yeh aap kya keh rahe hain beta"

[What are you saying beta?]

"Sahi keh rahe hain. Puchiye is se. He only told Geet that he still loves Poonam. Till now, he has not accepted her as his wife.

Meri beti iske pyaar ke liye tadapti rahi and he married her publicly and then denounced her in private.

What was my daughter's mistake in this?"

[I am telling truth. Ask him. He only told Geet that he still loves Poonam. Till now, he has not accepted her as his wife.

My daughter kept on begging for his love and he married her publicly and then denounced her in private.

What was my daughter's mistake in this?]

Daadima looked at Maan questioningly as she was still not able to believe Mohinder's words. Maan stood quietly with his head hung low. He could not fathom any reply which could fit the situation.

"Yeh kya bolega Maaji. But I will not let my daughter suffer anymore. I have already spoken to a lawyer and divorce papers will be ready by tomorrow. We don't want anything more from you. Pehle hi bahut kuch de chuke hain aap log use. I don't know how I will reduce her pain but she is not alone. She still has a family and I will not let her stay where she is not welcome."

Maan's head jerked up as he heard the word divorce. He panicked and tried to convince Mohinder – "Bauji, mein jaanta hoon mujhse galti hui hai and I am sorry"

[Dad, I know I have made a mistake and I am sorry]

Rahul clutched Maan's collar in anger – "Sorry…you are sorry. Teri koi behen nahi hai isliye you think a sorry will solve everything. You can not understand our pain."

[Sorry…you are sorry. You have no sister that is why you think a sorry will solve everything. You can not understand our pain.]

Mohinder held Rahul's hands.

"I think it is too late for a sorry Mr. Khurana."

With those words Mohinder just walked away along with Rahul.

Daadima looked at Maan – "Kya yeh sach hai Maan. Kya yeh sach hai ki aap aur Geet…"

[Is it true Maan? Is it true that you and Geet…]

Daadima stifled her sob as she struggled to find the right words.

"Boliye Maan. Hum aapke muh se sun na chahte hain. Kya aapne Geet se kaha ki aap Poonam se pyar karte hain. Kya aapne aaj tak unhe patni ka maan nahi diya?"

[Tell me Maan. I want to hear from your mouth. Did you tell Geet that you you love Poonam. Did you not give her the respect of a wife?]

"Daadima…please try to understand."

Daadima held her hand to stop him.

"Hum safai nahi maang rahe Maan. Haan ya Na mein jawaab dijiye. Kya yeh sach hai."

[I am not asking for an explanation. Answer in ayes or a no. Is it true?]

Maan looked at Daadima's eyes which were shining bright with unshed tears. He knew that she had undergone a lot in her life and his heart squeezed but he had to own up to his mistake now. He respected her too much to lie to her and it was a fact. He did not realize earlier how much pain he had given to everyone with his wrong decisions.

He simply nodded and after a split second felt the sting of her hand on his cheek. Dev and Meera gasped as she raised her hand for the first time on her grandson.

"Aaj tak hum kabhi jhuke nahi Maan lekin aaj aapne humein humari nazar mein gira diya. Aap par bharosa kar ke hum waha gaye the. Galti humari hai jiski wajah se humne ek masoom ladki ki zindagi barbaad kar di"

[I have never bent till today Maan but today you have made me fallen in my own eyes. I went there because I trusted you. It was my mistake that I have spoiled an innocent girl's life]

Meera came forward to support Daadima but she shirked away her hands – "Ghabraiye mat. Itne kamzor nahi hain hum ki apni galtiyon ki sazza na bhugat sakein."

[Don't worry. I am not that weak that can not take punishment for our mistakes.]

Saying this Daadima just walked away from there with whatever pride she was left with.

Meera cried silently as Dev looked at Maan – "Bhai how could you do this? It has been more than four months. Us din jab aapke wallet mein I saw Poonam's photo I just thought ki galti se reh gayi. Lekin? Why bhai?"

[Bro, how could you do this? It has been more than four months. That day when I saw Poonam's photo in your wallet, I just thought that you forgot it there. But? Why bro?

Maan looked down ashamedly and walked outside to his car. He could not stay back to answer all those questions. He just drove away without knowing where he was going even as it started raining heavily signaling the start of monsoon.

Precap –

"Mujhe freedom nahi chaiye. Mujhe bandhan chaiye…tumhaare pyar ka bandhan. Don't leave me and go Geet. Don't."

[I don't want freedom. I want bondage…bondage of your love. Don't leave me and go Geet. Don't.]

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Posted: 13 years ago
yay!! me FIRST accidentally!!😆

thank you di for updating before me slept!!😳

Such an emotional update di!!!

Iss update ne toh me ki neend hi uda di!!!😲

DIVORCE???😲

Though me had predicted that something of this sort will happen when me read the last update and Geet's father part but still it shook me a little!!!

Geet's father's and brother's anger and pain is totally justified!!😳

Dadima slapped Maan!!!😲

Oh My God!! This one me didn't expect!!

The pre cap is awesome…. Hoping Maan says it to Geet though me knows he must be saying it to himself while letting out his pain in a n isolated place….

Awesome update as usual Di!!!👏
Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh me 2nd...but koi na super happy tht am going to sleep after reading this!!!!!😃

very very very beautiful and emotional update dii...👏
geet's family is with her...am very glad about that.
mohinder's act is justified...n e father will be angry to see his daughter in pain..
me actually chocked with emotions now!!!!!!😭
very beautifully written...
and sumwhr am glad tht everyone came to know the truth...
geet couldn't have hidden it for long...🥺 she has endured a lottt
and i had also mentioned sumwhr in my earlier comments too..kisi bhi insaan ki sehne ki shakti ki ek limit hoti hain..after that he/she breaks!!!

and am wondering about geet's reaction after hearing about the divorce!!!
dadima ka gussa bhi jayaz tha...
reactions of all the characters was wonderfully captured..starting from mohinder to meera!!!!!
and as i had already said...it is the time that maan took to realize his love...tht time span broke geet...she lost all hopes...
really painful update...

Ye rat itni tanha kyu hoti hain
Apne kismat se sabko shikayat ktu hoti hain ?
Ye kismat bhi ajib khel khelti hain..
Jise hum pa nahi sakte,
Usise hi bepanah mohabbat kyu hoti hain?


this is wht geet is feeling right now...
diii really can't wait for the next part!!!!!!
am totally senti senti now...actually speechless...
very beautifully written!!!!! maan not only has to woo his wife n get her back but also win her family!!!!!! and i really just can't wait for the next update!!!!!!! its getting more and more interesting day by day!!!!!
😳
continue super soon..the future updates are going to test their love now!!!!
Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
As expected they took the extreme step😲😲 darr lag raha hai aage kya hoga...

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