OS: Breaking the Ice

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey everyone🤗
For those who always read what I write - long time I know sorry but thank you for the encouragement!
Dunno if this is any good, I was feeling bored this morning so I wrote it. Didn't intend for it to get so long and rambly and not even sure what the point to it is - just an idea that was itching to be wrote and if I didn't post it a friend would be mad😉
Not much dhak dhak but hope you like anyways - it's in 2 parts.
Sincere request, please feel free to criticise constructively - or gush as much as you like😉 But on the same note, please also feel free to remove me from your buddy list if you didn't like it, I can handle it...👍🏼
Asma x
PS: It was 3 am here when I posted this so plz excuse typos etc😳
This OS has now been moved to my blog - please PM me for details!**
Part Two below...
Edited by anjaani07 - 12 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh...suprb...touching...really liked it... keep writing...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update 👏

loved it...😃
continue soon...
nd thnx for the PM [>:d<]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome! You captured the pain and the loneliness so well.

Lots of hugs for you!🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...that was just awesome...please do continue...
Can you PM me please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful!!! I could feel their pain. Loved it. You write beautifully.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved them both! Nice one 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lams

cant bear another separation

It's coming Lams, unavoidable...🤗
Thanks for reading n hope ur well xo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: polly2312

Beautiful!!! I could feel their pain. Loved it. You write beautifully.

Thank you hun, needed that 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was awesome!!! I loved the line about 'duniya mein meri ek hi khushi hai'!!
this absolutely begs for another part... pleease PLEASE PLEASE do consider it?
naina

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