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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awww...Love it. so emotional, Pls continue. Thanks for the pm

Muaaahhh😛

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Ok it was BEAUTIFUL!! You know when it comes down to portray their emotions you are just awesome.

Each and every word was filled with emotions and really showed their love. You know that line "duniya mein meri to sirf ek hi khushi hai." After reading that even my throat was thick with tears. You've done it again.

Totally adored NK in OS. I guess he is the only one who can actually understand their love.

👏

But I will take your class on fb :p

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srijaaa127

@srijaaa127

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Heart touching OS dear... Truly amazing 👏

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

A really beautiful & poignant OS, could really feel the pain of the two.

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

This was so beautiful!! I loved this! can you ryt a continuation of this OS? As in a happy one where finally things go back to normal> :)

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VkjThomsun

@VkjThomsun

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awesome dear

nice update😛

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Fabulous ! Loved it .Hope you write more and more .

Thanks for the pm.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Wow Lovely... His bday.. ❤️ There is an unknown bond that binds them together.. ❤️

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Fantastic.

You have depicted the feelings of both Arnav and Khushi so well.

And NK, you are a real cupid, aren't you?

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

That was so beautiful. Chuck GH i still firmly support the idea of you being a part of the creative.
The pain the underlined yearnin... The promises of a future... I love this! And you for writing it. :)

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