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Posted: 13 years ago
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Siddhi: Maine aapka bacha abort kar diya hai. Main us bhej ko aur nahi utha sakti thi.

Siddhi flinched as she spoke the cruel words to Kunal.She looked up to see Kunal who looked stunned

Kunal: tum jhooth bol rahi ho. I know you cant do this.

He reached out to his phone and dialled the number of their doctor. Siddhi kept studying his face. She knew what he was going to hear next was going to kill him.

The color disappeared from his face and it winced up in pain. He repeated aloud what he had heard. A sentence that had destroyed his whole world

Kunal (he repeated out loud) She aborted our baby.

He walked out. He was walking on the street with no clue where he was going. Cars whizzed past him; drivers yelled at him to walk carefully.

He reached Powai lake. He sat with his face in his hands. He then let out a heart wretchin shout

Kunal: NAAHHHIII

And started weeping.

Kunal: How can she do this??? Hamara bacha... hamare pyar ki nishani... itna dard itna takleef to maine tab bhi nahi mehsoos kiya yha jab anand mara tha

He recalled the moment he had found out that he was going to become a father. That was the happiest day of his life. He loved his nieces and had always wanted babies of his own. But after Richa had dumped him he had though that it was impossible. And then after Siddhi came into his life this miracle too became possible.

S-I-D-D-H-I

He remembered her tears of joy when he had told her that she was pregnant. He remembered how tenderly she would touch her tummy from time to time. He remembered how fearful she was for their baby when richa had returned.

At home Siddhi was going thru hell. She knew that she had to do this. But the look on Kunals face had killed her. She was suddenly scared that he may hurt himself.

Just then Kunal walked in. he saw the expression on siddhis face. He saw relief, love and concern. She changed her expression immediately but kunal had seen what he needed to see.

Siddhi: You dont have a right to say anything to me. Its my body and i didnt want this baby. It was a mistake.

She kept ranting. kunal kept walking towards her. he hugged her

kunal: i believe your eyes not your words.

Siddhi couldnt handle it anymore.. her facade crumbled. She began weeping profusely and told him how Richa had blackmailed her.

Kunal heard her out. with every word his hatred for richa multiplied ten-fold

Kunal: You leave richa to me. We will beat her at her own game.

As he wiped her tears he said

You think I can live without you. Meri zindagi to tumse hai aur is bache se hai

Siddhi looked up, blushed up and said

Siddhi: is bache se nahi in bacho se. we are going to have twins

Kunal was ecstatic. He picked her up and started whirling her

Siddhi: K-U-N-A-L!!!!

He finally put her down and embraced her in his arms. They melted into one another. Two bodies but one soul..



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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is it...Picture perfect...
Same was the scene that was going on in my mind...

jis kunal ko hum sab jante hei...
aur jo SINAL rishte se humhara parichay hua hei ... this is how kunal is supposed to react...

so far things have always been like that...
he does not believe in evidences when it comes to siddhi...

they read each others eyes and jis siddhi ko hum jaante hei woh kunal ko kabhi hurt nahi kar sakti...
itna bada sach woh chupa bhi nahi payegi...


paradigm thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Exactly our KC doesnt need proofs when it comes to SC
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love it script...this is real copy of cv from parichay...pls tell me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well written dear..wish something of this sort happens..dont want SINAL separation..
dont want KC to doubt SC for even a second.. that would really be painful..

i really want Kunal to give Sidhi a tight and long hug...they way he gave her during the kidnapping track.. the way he held her close to hi, she was feeling so safe and secure... i love that hug..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww awesomely written😳 👏 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written...
wanna see the replica of this in the serial...😊
paradigm thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot everyone for your appreciation. I genuinely hope that CVs show something on similar lines
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
After such a long time we hav an ss.i really want the other writers to write os,ss and ff's.loved the update.plz continue...

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