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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

superb update.. finally they met..


cont. soon





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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, nice part
loved it






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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: freya123

awesome part

update soon




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

maan fell in love with the little angel and forgot his past for sometime


diya and geet had fun shopping





YUP HE FELL IN LOVE WITH HIS ANGEL 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part



PART 8

It was finally the time which is awaited….. unknown to them that they are again going to be together…. It was when neeraj introduced them…..

Neeraj: Mr. khurana I would like you to meet my partner who will be assisting the project on my behalf…meet miss geet…


Maan was shocked to see her after three years ….still same scared expressions on her face …..which reminded him of their first official meeting….. when he saw her first time after years in bangalore……

While the colour of geet's face was drained after seeing him….. both were shocked and freezed at the spot seeing each other…..

Unknown to others that what has been conspired between them years back Neeraj was highly glad to get both acquainted with each other……..

It was after few minutes of their formal introduction they greeted each other…..by a official handshake ….. just to acknowledge the deal ….being the clients nothing more than that…with the same cold angry and hatred filled expressions for each other…….

Maan: nice to meet to miss geet …. Again…

The word again he said in such a slow whispher that only the owner of that word would listen….. when geet listened to the word again….. there was the certain detestation from her towards him that only she and maan could understand and there was pure disgust and loathe from his side towards side also…. Their relation which has ended three years back is somewhere the main reason for this extreme hate…..

Geet replied to him in the same manner…

Geet: same here sir…..

And left from there……

She knew that on seeing him she will not be able to control herself either her love towards him or her hatred would let out in the form of frustration and words…… the unspoken words that she wanted to tell him that day will somehow found there way on there on and will hit him like the way he burned her soul with those piercing and haunting words three years back….. which still continues to haunt her somewhere today also…..

But what you can do when your heart yearns for her one glimpse….his one sight….

Both of them were in the extremely opposite corners of the hall….. still somewhere finding ways to just catch a glimpse of each other's heart's desire….. no matter how much you try to suppress your love towards your desire but still somewhere it lingers …..

Maan was somewhere caught staring at geet by his staff….

(Staff member as sm)

Sm1: ( to other) the party is too cool and sir also seems to be in good mood look he is seeing the girl …….

Sm 2: hmm.. you are right and I think it is the first time he is staring at someone……

A girl came and said bossily ….

Surbhi: don't talk rubbish….. MK is just looking in the direction…… he doesn't pay attention to all this nonsense ……. and went from there….

The girl taking was the mere employee of KC but always remains on high heels….. and wants to grab the hold of MD….

( well who doesn't wants….. except his own legally wedded wife….)

Soon the dance was announced on the dance floor….. and many couples joined with their partners…… the music numbers changed and it started to play the song that connect both from deep inside their souls…..

tu hi re, tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re, jaan re, in saanso mein bas jaa tu
chaand re, chaand re, aajaa dil ki zameen pe tu

chahat hai agar aake mujhase mil jaa tu
yaa phir aaisa kar, dharti se mila de mujhko
tu he re, tu he re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko

in saanso ka dekho tum paagalpan ke
aaye nahi inhe chain
mujhase ye boli main raahon mein teri
apne bichhaa du ye nain
in uunche pahaadon se jaan de dunga main
gar tum naa aai kahi
tum udhar jaan ummeed meri jo todo
idhar ye jahaan chhodu main
maut aur, zindagi, tere haathon mein de diya re

aayi re, aayi re, le main aayi hu tere liye
toda re, toda re, har bandhan ko pyar ke liye
jaan re, jaan re, aajaa tujhamein sama jaau main
dil re dil re, teri saanson mein bas jaau main

chaahat hai agar aake mujhase mil jaa tu
yaa phir aisaa kar, dharati se milaa de mujhko
tu hi re, tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko


aa ...

sau baar bulaaye main sau baar aaun,
ik baar jo dil diya
ik aankh roye to duji bolo,
soyegi kaise bhala,
in pyaar ki raahon mein patthar hain kitane
un sab ko he paar kiya
ek nadi hoon main chaahat bhari aaj milne
saagar ko aayi yahaan
sajnaa, sajnaa, aaj aansu bhi meethe lage

tu hi re, tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyu
aajaa re, aajaa re, yu he tadpa na tu mujhko
jaan re, jaan re, in saanso mein bas jaa tu
chaand re, chaand re, aajaa dil ki zameen pe tu

pal pal pal pal waqt to bitaa jaaye re
zaraa bol zaraa bol waqt se ke vo tham jaaye re
aayi re, aayi re, le main aayi hu tere liye
jaan re, jaan re, aajaa tujhamein samaa jaau main

Both of them were lost in the lyrics which was sometimes soothing their shattered soul and sometimes was taking them in deep recesses of their torn relationship….. somewhere their heart was bleeding and soul was shedding the cry of helplessness … somewhere still living with the hope that everything is goona be fine…. The other one will come and then everything would be fine…. Their distances will be erased…..

The song took them to the forgotton path of their life some memories that they have shared with each other cherished together…..

Maan was lost in the memories of her beautiful face that he saw first time when she was dressed and desended as his bride…. That day his name was going to be attached to her for this life…. But whether his soul … his desires and his love will be there for her….

That was the question that was repeated in his mind….

That day they were binded with the sacred relation of marriage that itself beautifies the pure feeling of love…. But suddenly maan came out of their past and looked towards the dance floor….

Their his blood boiled seeing her dancing comfortably with Neeraj…. They were dancing in rhytm…. His hands on her waist and her hands on his shoulder… he was twirling her around … moving with every single beat….

Neeraj said something in her ears that made her eyes widen …. May be shocked… and they started laughing …..

When maan was boiling with jealousy and the pain of betrayal was adding fuel in it … then a hand came across his shoulder and he turned around to find aaiyna standing there in her usual short body clinging dress… having a evil aura around her….

Maan immediately backed off and started to approach to one of his clients…. When a sudden statement caught his attention….

Aaiyna: she has moved on in her life….. it's the time for you to carry on with your life….

Maan: just stay away from me…. Donot dare to interfere …..

And walked off leaving aaiyna in anger …. And jealousy…

When Neeraj approached geet for the dance she couldn't deny as she has seen maan staring at her in pure hatred and questioning look….. and here she also doesn't want to remind anything of there past….. although many wounds have opened seeing him but still a dance would be a good distraction thought geet…………

Since diya was there with nisha and geet knows that she cannot stay for long hours and still her baby needs her to spent some hours with her mother that's what atleast she deserve after spending almost all day at the nursery….

So she asked neeraj to take leave and neeraj went maan to take leave since he was the host of the evening…..

Neeraj found maan sitting on the bar with a drink in his hand….. but he doesn't seems to be drinking…. Mainly engrossed in some thoughts…..

Neeraj: Mr.. Khurana thanks for such a wonderful party ….. it was an honour to be working with you…..

Maan smiled weakly and after keeping his drink n the counter….

He replied in same stern attitude…..

Maan: thanks Mr. mittal…. Will be waiting for the project to start…..

Neeraj: sure…. My team will sent you the preliminary sketches along with the presentations…..

Now I would like to take your leave….. pleasure being here…

Maan: ok…same here…..

With that neeraj and geet left the party maan saw geet leaving with geet and winded the party soon and left with enormous questions and feelings that has been woken up by her sudden appearance…..

Geet and neeraj reached at neeraj residence diya was sleeping and the couple asked geet to stay there only but she refused and requested neeraj to drop her….. neeraj knew that if

geet doesn't want to stay there they there will be no one who can make her agree she very stubborn but neeraj doesn't knew that the stubbornness is somewhere a shield that geet uses to protect her and her baby from this harsh world….

It was half past twelve when neeraj dropped them to her apartment geet made diya lie on her bed as she knew her darling daughter will turn into a angry cute brat if she knows that she doesn't slept in her own room….

After changing she lied next to her baby… gently caressing her hair and kissed her forehead…a tear slipped down her cheeks… remembering the day when she prayed to god that please don't let my child hate her father… whatever he did to them…. His betrayal to their relation…. Everything… but still he doesn't deserve his own child abhorrence…

FLASHBACK

Geet was with neeraj shopping some stuffs for her…. These days she remained usually quite and aloof didn't even speek onher own …only answers if asked something…..

Neeraj did not knew what had transpired between geet and her husband that they are living separately….and at that time when she needs him the most…..

Neeraj was shopping in some other section when geet bumped into someone…she was about to fall when the person hold her tightly from her waist…and made her stand properly…..

Geet was about to thank him when she got shocked to see maan …maan on the other side was to shocked seeing her and when his gaze shifted to her he found out that she is expecting…

For once second he forget each and every thing only geet remained in his sight and their moments when those videoclips… recordings and photographs came to is mind and he said in a sarcastic tone with full of disgust for her….

Maan: well …congrats miss handa… or should I say…..

Well I didn't knew that you will be so fast….

Geet: no need for that….actually You don't need to coz I understand that you know it after all you are the one who doesn't believe in waiting …..

Maan: so true geet….. I just hope this time you should be loyal …..

With that maan went away

Geet didn't listened to his last words she was in own remorse that where did she lacked that he left her..betrayed her for some other women….. even sent her divorse papers…..

When neeraj came she was as usual quiet and he dropped her to her place……

Geet was crying mutely …. Tears were falling in her eyes seeing the divorse papers …she hadn't sent him but will sent him after signing them….

She cried very badly that day….

Geet was talking to babaji and her unborn child ….

Geet: why did he do this to me babaji…. I loved him with my all love and soul and he betrayed me…. I was just a piece of relation for him… which he used….

I hate him….

She shouted in rage and fury…


I HATE YOU MAAN!!!!!!!

I WISH WE WERE NEVER MARRIED…………

I WISH WE WERE NEVER MARRIED..

Geet: babaji….. he refused to accept his child…..but I can't let my baby hate his father…


Geet : touching her belly … baby please don't hate your daddy….. I don't want you to hate him….please…

Geet came out of her reverie …her past when she heard diya coughing….she patted her back and wiped her tears….. she never wanted to face him again and now she will not let diya come across him….

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i knew this this the worst i have ever written plzzz bear with me this time...
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Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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UPDATED PART 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg me 1st
geet is in pain😭 but u pen that in lovely way👏
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