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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it loads...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
finally geet is in her sherni mood...😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
nyc maan u deserve it...😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
u always tk her forgranted...
i really felt bad for geet... 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
want a update soon...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
waiting as always...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 nd thanks for pm nd updates...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
awww good for geet being stern for once poor girl finding it difficult to grasp maan had forgotten her 😭

liked yash here to give maan a reality check 👏

thank god he realised he misses her 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story, very well written. plz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
waiting for the next update...
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi All,

I read each and everyone's view on Maan'[s fauld and his punishment. Most of you have same view but my point of view as I have visioned this FF is a litle different.

You will get my views with my updates.

But I wrote this update in hurry... hope it came out well.

PS:Add anuffpm for PM regarding Updates
--Anu

Part 16

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Two days have passed and now Geet had cooled down a little. She was never angry on Maan, she knows that he does not love her but still she loves him and with no limit… her love for him has no limit, it is not bounded by any boundry that he has to love her.

But his forgetting her presence had hurt her. The person who was her world, forgot her and how little she meant for person who is her world pained her. But other than that she has no complaints with Maan.

But now after staying two days away with him she just wants to go back to him. He is her world and that's what matters for her. But his pampering has left its effect on her… She just wants him to come back and pamper her and take her back to his world.

He loves her or not but he pampers her whenever they are together at home. He does everything for her, from cooking to arranging her all the messes that she creates and when she tries to fix things with him, to impress him, he just does not let her do anything saying

"You have done your job, now go.. let me do mine…" and she is head over heals crazy about his pampering her. This is their relation which none knows.. not even Yash and Meera as Geet will never share anything between her and Maan with anyone… he is too personal a matter to her.

And thus Yash and Meera only knows that Maan is so busy with his life that he has no time for Geet and thus he had given a reality check to Maan from his point of view.

But this time Geet was pained and thus decided to stay at Meera's place but after two days when her mind is a little cooled down, she wants him to come back and take her to his world… This is her innocent love, where no ego, no anger and no pain can stay for long.

Maan woke up on the couch… troubled with her thought whole night he slept when he did not know…

He had got a call from Meera in the morning- it's a Monday morning

"Abb bas bohut ho gaya. She is not eating anything and not taking care of herself. I am going to bring her back." Then thinking something he smiled.

Yash comes to meet Geet and console her "Sanorita, you don't need to worry dear… I have given him a real talk and he will think twice before doing anything like this"

Geet did not like this "What, you said something to Maan… how could you. Kya kaha aapne PC" [She shortened PC for prince charming]

"I showed him the truth, You don't worry. I said him how he neglects you and how he doesn't take you anywhere and when he took you what wrong he had done."

Geet kept her palm in her mouth "Yeh sab keh diya aapne unse, kya sochenge who mere bare me… What he will think that I complain of him to you… Did I anytime said you PC that I have complain with him… how could you say so to him…. Yes he has hurted me this time but still"

Yash is shocked with Geet's behaviour… he thinks that it is this innocence of Geet due to maan takes her for granted

After a while Yash hears some noise in the kitchen and thinks Meera is there. But Meera comes in a while… Yash is about to ask something when Meera wishpers to him..

"Maan is in kitchen" "What??? "

After a while Maan comes to hall with a tray in his hand. Geet looks at him and her pain surfaces and she turns to other side. Yash and Meera are surprised to see a tray in Maan's hand but Maan is not looking at them. He directly goes to Geet.

"You did not have anything from two days right? You know very well I don't like you staying hungry, phir bhi tumne aisa kiya….If you do like this then from next time I will not allow you to stay at anyone's place…."

Yash and Meera does not understand Maan's talk but Geet feels that tears will come flowing her eyes… she wants to get lost in his care but the pain he has given her she still feels it when he is near her.

He keeps the tray and turns her to his side… She jerk him away "Kya fark pardta hai aapko.. I am not going to eat anything, you can just leave…" Though after the smell of his food she feels her appetite has increased.

Maan bends a little to her face "Its you favorite sandwich… fried potato.. double cheese and" Geet could not hear more, its really her favorite and Maan always prepare it for her , even if he is in hurry but if she wants it he always makes sure to prepare it for her… geet turns and looks at the sandwich and then at Maan. Maan raises his eyebrows..

"You are upset with me, if you are upset with my sandwich too then.." he picks it to put in his mouth when Geet hold his hand, looks down and opens her mouth.

Yash and Meera is surprised to see this. They never knew this side of Maan's behavior with Geet.

But Geet and Maan are now oblivious of their surrounding… Maan feeds her from his hand bite by bite and Geet taking each bite but still have angry face on him. Yash and Meera could not believe what is going ON…

He had given such big lecture to Maan but today he is getting to see completely opposite side of him, that too with Geet. And Geet, she is lost too.

After she has her food, he gives her a glass of water.. it looks so natural between them that Maan is doing everything and Geet is just sitting like princess and taking his services. Looks like it is so common between them and it was… Maan really treated her like princess but he has his own way of life and thought about this marriage.

Then after keeping her plate in kitchen he comes back "Abb chalen…."

Geet turned her face again in anger… "You will come with me or you want me to take you…" Maan knows he have to please her but it would be only them together.

Geet could not hold anymore. She was dying for his care for last two days; she turns, hugs him and keeps hitting him continuously on his chest taking out her all pain.

Maan without saying a word picked her up in his arm and carried her to his car. She turned her face away from him.. he sat on driver's seat. Placed his arms on her shoulder

"I know I have upset you and it was a big mistake Geet.. I agree. But this will bever happen again"

She removed his hand from her shoulder "let's go home" Maan and Geet quietly drove home.

She doesn't get down… so many questions are in her mind.. though she can't stay away from him but there are many thought bothering her. He quietly come and picks her in his arms and is taking her to their room… Geet feels so safe and secure in his arm… she can feel him so close… his smell, his chest movement that she wants to get lost in him… but the main question is does this anything matter for him, No.

Is she really secure with him… she has started doubting after that night. He has his own life and she was not part of it then how can she feel so secure with him… but she wants to be secure in his arms… wants him to take care of her.

Maan makes her sit on the bed and himself sits down on his knees…

"Why are you sitting down… I don't like you sitting like this…."

"I know you love me very much Geer and that's why I want to talk something serious with you… but before that I have whole day off for you today"

He has anyhow to cheer her up first, he has done a mistake and takes all the responsibility on himself. And for that he is going to be someone she would want him to be… he will just live this day for her before he says that thing to her.

He is throwing his guard of The great Maan singh khurana away for today

He places his hand on his heart and bends down on his knees…

"Princess, the slave is here for your service today… your wish is my command"

This brings smile and tears both in Geet's eyes…. She goes down and hugs him…. Then separates herself and in childish way wipes her tears

"Make me happy, make my pain go away… make me feel safe" he kept his hands on her lips to stop her from talking further but feel of his fingers on her lips send shivers down her spine and Maan fels somewhat same and immediately removes his hand.

Next:Whole day for her and a serious talk at night

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Posted: 13 years ago
waitng...

-edited

nyc update

hats off to geet's luv...her luv is as pure as first drop of rain

maan had finaly start his manofying session...

I hope maan came to knw about her luv soon...

Wat he wan to talk to her??
Edited by khushi1022 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
just loved it
geet is too cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...
Nw i understand ur POV...
Maan noes hw to treat his princess...
I think he wants tym to accept their relation..
For that both have to understand each other's lifestyle,likes,dislikes..
I loved the way maan s planning to make it up to geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.. you updated my favorite FF...

As always i love this story... and the update was amazing... The best part about this FF is Maan cares for her but in his own way and Geet loves him like crazy inspite of knowing that she doesnt get the same from him...

Loved the way Maan made up with her by cooking and feeding her and ofcourse the leave he took for her... 😳 so sweet...
and am glad Geet asked him to make her feel safe...

Precap is so interesting... waiting for the maaneet talk and their cute moments!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!

cant wait for the pampering to start!!


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