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Posted: 13 years ago
Good update... Nice twist.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update.poor chandni is still troubled by ghost and later by kamini and on top of that neither veer is helping her.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909


nice update.poor chandni is still troubled by ghost and later by kamini and on top of that neither veer is helping her.

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 2sanjana

Good update... Nice twist.. 😊

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago



Part 37



"Chandni...come fast" she heard her Grandmother's voice and quickly wore the dress and covered her head with the dupatta...she knew her Grandmother always wants her to cover her head while sitting in a prayer... the moment she opened the door his eyes fell on her...



Stunned to see her walking down the stairs ...she looked extremely beautiful like a princess of his heart and soul... astounded at her outfit he didn't blink '... with the duppata on her head she sat in the temple... Veer could see a glimpse from the half opened door... her hands folded and eyes closed she looked like a angle from heaven, so pure and so divine... he couldn't let his eyes off her...



he watched Chandni who almost finished the required task that was given by Kamini... she drank the holy water and took the blessing... he saw her coming out of the room...



"i must leave now" Veer spoke up...



"Chandni...give holy water to Veer" Kamini walked towards the kitchen



Chandni came closer with a big plate, that had a little candle and incense stick...some flowers scattered around... she offered the holy water to Veer while his eyes looked into hers...



"why don't you stay for dinner beta??" Shama asked Veer...



he looked at Chandni who walked back towards the temple... "no thanks, may be next time..."



"but next time...we won't let you leave without dinner..." Kamini smiled and patted his head...



he walked towards the main door...Chandni stealthily followed him...



Resentfully she walked towards his car. Peeved at his behavior that always makes waves for her...how could he ask for a whiskey and how dare he open the hook on her bra... he was so boorish and insensitive "Shameless..." she whispered softly...



He turned around and came closer making her heart thud... he whispered in her ear " when I see you... everything around gets shameless..."



"i can never understand you" irked at his constant wisecracking...



"i am too complex to understand..." said the scintillating Veer



behold by her loose strands falling softly around her shoulders with the curls gently framing her face ....her white suit shining in the dark... making her look even more pretty "Chandni..." he stepped closer surveying her from top to bottom...



"what???" she gave a sullen look...



"now you look like Chandni..." he mumbled...making her quizzically confounded at him...



softly with his fingers he moved the silk locks behind her ear... Chandni mystified at his style...



"do you know what Chandni means..???" while closing the distance between them...he enmeshed her wreathing his arms around her waist tightly...



Chandni didn't move, instead she was caught by his magical features that were attracting her, making her billion times fall for him... all her efforts of escaping the deuce were drained, instead she felt his breath grazing her mouth... "wha...what ???"



Veer stroked her cheek with his thumb... " a pure moonlight " contemplated at the confused figure...



"a pure moonlight???" she repeated softly when somehow his words made her lost in a different world...his eyes clearly stated that he wanted her...she tried to lower her eyes '.amazed by her beautiful features he wanted to immerse in her...





it seemed the world stopped, everything around them faded making them bright... he gently brushed her lips with his finger and held her tightly closer to his body, she closed her eyes as she saw him coming for her lips...

his touch melted her and she wanted him to kiss her, without thinking about any other consequences, she curled her arms around his neck and stood on her toes...Veer gazed at her lips and bend down, he came closer to place his lips on hers...



"Chandni...where are you??" that was her Grandmother shouting for her...Chandni opened her eyes...and tried to push Veer '.. "please let me go Veer"...



"no...i can't" he tightened his grip...making Chandni feel angry and nervous... " Grandma will come outside..."



but Veer did not budge a inch... "let her come"



"please Veer..." she pleaded... while he smiled at her situation...



"only on one condition" he demanded...making Chandni even more nervous...how can she fulfill his conditions when she knows he is so difficult to handle... but she had no choice...demon won't leave her until she agrees on to his condition...but she was more than angry at him... "fine...what is it??"



"that you will get to know when we meet next time" this time he let her go...



she hurriedly went inside without looking behind... her heart thumped at Kamini's face just at the door...she was about to come in another second...what if her grandmother would have seen her in his arms...even the thought scared her... she was chafed by Veer who provoked her teasingly every time landing her in dilemma...



"has Veer left??" that was another question that whacked on her head... "of...of course grandma..." she said apprehensively...





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Late night '.



"Veer either this mammoth will stay in this house or I have to leave" Kaka miffed completely maddened by Manohar who looked amusedly at the old man...



Least bothered about Kaka's complaints Veer was thinking about his project... "Kaka...we must throw Manohar back to Mumbai...he can look after the work there...and you can stay here until we are busy with the tea estate project..."



Kaka was indeed happy with his decision... "well I think the project here will take time...but I want you to look after it...Meghna will come tomorrow...if you want the details..."



"sure Kaka..." Veer was ready to eat his dinner... when he thought something... "Kaka can I ask you something...but before that I must clear that I don't believe in superstitious things..."



Kaka gave bemused expression "what is it Veer??"



Manohar bursted out laughing loudly making Kaka and Veer astonishingly staring at him "Veer...don't ask this old man...otherwise he will wireless his ghost friends"



Making Kaka streaming in anger inflamed by Manohar's sudden reply...



"Manohar...just shut your mouth" Veer shouted... making Manohar's laughter turning into a little smile...



""kaka is it possible, that we can have two people with identical face in this world??" he asked seriously making Kaka think



"yes...it is certainly possible..." Kaka replied in full confidence...



"my question hasn't completed yet..." Veer stopped... making Kaka baffled... "identical face...where one is ghost and the other is human???"



Kaka was silent...this was not an easy answer '...Manohar looked at Veer...then at Kaka... "Veer I think you asked a difficult question...Kaka may not answer this one..."



Veer smiled at the confused man... "don't overstress yourself Kaka" ... he finished his dinner and headed off to his room... making Kaka completely shocked...



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Chandni's thoughts didn't leave for a second, she was angry at him...how dare he behave so casual... and how could he ask for a drink when he knows that she hates drinkers...and now he wants her to fulfill his unsaid condition...that could be anything good or worse...how could she let him win over her every time... she picked up the phone that was ringing from last few minutes...

She didn't say a single word '.


"angry??"


"hmmm"


"good" he added with a grin...


"Veer...you are so bad" she answered annoyingly...


"i know...listen I called you to let you know that I am leaving for Mumbai tomorrow..."


"so...what should I do??" she said annoyingly...


"nothing...good night..." he disconnected the phone leaving her fuming with anger...


"what do you think of yourself...i will die if you go away..." she said to herself...



She couldn't sleep and stood at the window feeling the cool air... though it was cold and pouring outside...she somehow wanted to feel the rain as it reminded her of his presence around when suddenly she heard something...


swiveled around the room her eyes fell on the stone '.. slowly she picked up the broken piece... "i wish I could visit Mehrangarh..." she looked at the stone that was trying to reveal her something that was hidden from ages...



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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super awesome
haye veer k toh toote ud gaye chand ko dekh kar...he is fully lost in her
n this granny...what a wrong timing
waiting to see what is veer's condition n chandu's reaction on that
continue soon
luv u :-)
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...

wil edit...soon
~~EDITED~~
vry vry gud jii
maaze aa gye,
ver bhai saheb ke tho hoshh ka thikana hi nhi h..
chaa gyi tussi chandini..
kaherrr ekdum... lightining ho yaar tum tho...

veer ke tute udd gye...🤪...

ooo.. veer ko bhi hindi aati h.. o ho!...
veer, yup... aaj sachi main chandini ko uska naam ka meaning batake, tumne kitna acha romance kiya h...

haye, wrng timing graany.. kyun aaye aap aise, itna jaldi...

kiss bhi nhi hone diya 🥺..

koi nhi, better luck next time ...

veer has sm thng really cheezy in his head i feel...

gud veer is becming responsible...
interested in business...

veer's doubt... hmm.. interesting doubt...

similar face fr bhootani n chandini..
bhotani den is surely beautiful bhootani🤣..

hmm.. veer is leaving fr mumbai...
chandini pretending his -NO CONCERN..
lovely...

but ma fav is kaka n manohar lovestory...
haye.. nazar na lage inn dono ko..
i wish yeh jodi hamehs asalamat rahe...
made fr each other...😍...


ud soon di
lov u.


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
O my god!! Veer got mesmerized by the beauty...Chand looks awsum in Salwar Suit...
Veer even 4got to blink...
Again Veer iz lost in her beauty nd Chand is also mesmerized by his manly feautres...
Kiss hone hi wali ti aur reh gayi grandma ki wajah se wrongtiming...
Veer again puts unknown condition to leave Chand n poor girl had to agree otherwise grandmom would have caught her in d arms of Veer...
Waiting 4 her visit to Mehrangarh
nice part loved it:):)
Edited by Shraddhamurat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
I knew Veer will be mesmerized seeing her in the suit
oh no granny spoiled their moment! She had to call out then only?
hoping to see chand in mehrangarh soon
update soon

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