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completed...😃
Edited by dildostidance19 - 13 years ago
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😊congartulations to all of us...😊

"We hate but still love" has hit d century again dat too 4 third tym..
So hetric of centuries..

wowee.. i m so happy 2day i nevr dreamt dat i'll write any thing & when i'll write i'll get so much of sucess its jst like no dream evr seeni yet sumthing vry special cuming true..

& all d credit 4 dis success obviously goes to all of u, who loved is FF so much dat its celebrating its third century..

thanx to u all 4 ur long-long cutely decorated comnts who inspire me, motivate me to write more & more...

thank u soo much 2 each & evry readr 4m d core of my heart...

& ofcrse special thanx to spamming queens who have great credit in getting dis score 2day..

Love u all..

thank u soo much 4 supporting me in IF & making me feel so special abt myslf & my FF..

i'll try my bst to entertain u more thru cuming chappy's..

❤️wid Love❤️
Neeti

p.s. title giving responsibility 4 below chaptr is of -Yogini
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HAPPY kRIYAANSH..

Chaptr-36

*Sw's room*

Sw*slf talk* : iska matlab kriya ka accident hua 1 & half years back & Mahraaj Arya singh wud have found hr aftr accident , he wud have adoptd kriya gave hr new name, & told hr sum random story.Iska matalb Rr hi kriya hai.. haan Sw Rr hi kriya hai..
All of a sudden his eyez got wet getting dis joyous news .his fevr vanished on getting dis merryful news dat kria is back aftrall he had waitd long to get dis news.He was vry happy, he wantd to share all dis wid Rey, but cant coz Rr wud nevr allow him go out in dis condtion so he thot of a plan.
He acted sleeping ovr pillow placed ovr Rr's lap.
Rr (smilingly) :chalo achha hai, princess Rr ke kahani sunkar ye so toh gaye.
She placed his head gently ovr another pillow on bed & covrd him with blanket & left out to take dinner 4 hrslf.
As soon as she went to kitchen, Sw got up out of d blanket, walkd to d door of his room saw Rr cuming out of d kitchen holding a plate 4 dinner in hr hands he quickly ran back to d bed & buried himself under d blanket, Rr came towards his room, ppepd Sw 4m d window & found him sound sleep,she smiled & walkd ahead to hr room.
Aftr she left,Sw peepd out of blanket saw hr going towards hr room, & slowly woke up out of bed, as soon as Rr entrd hr room & closed d door, he came out of his room & wituot making any noise steppd out of d house.
* D same place where Reyam sat on prevalentine nyt *
I hope u all remebr it, it was a goround , near to tea-shop Rey has parkd his vehicle, & reyam were sitting upon d top-front of d car.
As dat day in same position,same place & same way Reyam r sitting.
Rey:Bol q bulaya mujhe wo bhi itni raat ko??
Sw:What else can we discuss in nyt except..
Reyam(2gethr): CHICKS!!
Rey:U mean Sharon, q fir se tum odno ki fyt toh nahi ho gayi??
Sw:Not Sharon,its Kriya!!
Rey:Kriya??
Sw:yaa.. Rr..kriya..
Rey:hey what r u saying Rr , kriya , jo bhi kehna hai clearly keh.
Sw:tu sahi tha rey, aur mai galat, tere dil ki awaaz sahi thi.
Rey giving a prplxd look.
Sw:Rr hi kriya hai..
Rey:What?? I mean I know par how u came to know, did she tell u??& if yes den u askd him y she behavd as strangr infront of us 4 past 3-4 months.
Sw:Hey wait, she didn't tell me anything coz she dosnt remebrs anything.
Rey: I cudnt get u??
Den Sw tells him d entire story which Rr had told hr.
Rey:Iska matalb, humare clg ka losses mein jana, Mr.Raajvansh ka humare clg ko hlp karna aur uske baad apni daughter ka humare clg mein admission karvana ye sab Univrseji ki setting thi mujhe keri kria se wapis milane ke liye..
Sw:Sirf tujhe hi nahi hum sabko qki kria humari bhi toh bahut achhi friend thi..
Reyam's eyez got wet, Rey quickly hugged Sw vry tightly , Sw hugged him back.
Reyam breaking d hug say:Our kria is back dude,she's back…
Rey:Par Rr ne tujhe apni story sunayi kyun, I mean..
Sw:coz I got fever aftr our rain dance & dr. said ki agar mera proper take care ho,& if I take complete rest 2nyt so I may get well by 2moro morning itslf.
Rey(with concern):Sw tujhe fever hai
Sw:Hai nahi tha..
Rey:Tha matlab??
Sw:tha matlab ye ki kriya ne mera itne ache se dhyaan rakha meri itni sevaa ki, ki mera fevr thik hogaya, aur issi bhi jada kria ke comeback ki news ne mujhe alryt kar diya..
Rey:ok u had fevr dats all ryt but story??
Sw:haan wo actually mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thin a so kria was telling me story , patting my head.
Rey:u mean when u don't get sleep kria tells u story patting ur head.
Sw could smell d fumes of slight jelousy arousing in rey's heart, so now he thought of sum shaitaani.
Sw:yaa & dat too by placing my head upon hr lap.
Rey:Upon hr LAP.. kria itne achhe se khyaal rakhti hai tera..(baby face)
Sw(controlling laugh):Haan.. kria mera bahut achhe se khyaal rakhti hai..
Rey's sad baby face changes to super sad baby face & seeing dis Sw bursts into laughter.
Rey:Ab tu has q raha hai.
Sw:rey dekh tera chehra burning wid jelousy , kitna possessive hai yaar tu kria ko lekar,& worry not sirf aaj hi kria mujhe story suna rahi thi aur uske lap aur mere head ke beech 1 pillow tha, ab khush.
A smile of relief spread ovr rey's face.
Rey:Sw tujhe yaad hai around 1 & half years back, on prevalentine nyt hum isi jagah aise hi car par baith kar mere kria se milne ke liye plans bana rahe the, aur usi din meri kria mujhse dur chalegi gayi thi aur aaj isi jagah par meri kria mujhe wapis mil gayi..
Sw:haan sachme tujhe teri kria mil gayi dude…
Rey:what??
Sw:Leave what & look back .
Rey:hey kria , yaha !!!
She cums closer to dem.
Rr(in full on anger):humne aapse kya kaha tha Sw raat ke 12 baje bimaar halat mein tea-stall ke samne rey se gossip karne ko ryt??
Sw:Yes. I mean NO..
Rr:So what did I say u??
Sw:To take rest.
Rr:So is dis d way u r taking rest.
Sw:Sorry kr.. I mean Rr.
Rr:What sorry haan, dere I m so worried 4 u dat I cudnt sleep & here u r,What so imp to discuss dat u cant evn wait 4 u getting well by 2moro morning.
Rey:Wo Rr ismein Sw ki galti nahi hai.
Rr:Exactly hum Sw ko q dant rahe hai, ismein Sw ki kya galti hai, aapne hi zaroor Sw ko bulaya hoga yaha, aur Sw who's ever ready 2 do anything 4 frenzz wud have cum widout thinking anything abt himself.
Rr(continued):Rey aapko pata bhi h,Sw is has such high fevr aur is halat mein aapne unhe yahan bulaya hai , wo bhi itni raat ko, u evn care 4 sum1, I am ryt 4m beginning u r really careless 4 urslf & 4 evryelse.. & she continued..
But it was strange to c evn Rr/kria was contihuasly scolding rey, but rey wid a lot of essence in his eyez was quietly listenig to hr evry word, widout any trial to defend himself..
Rey*slf tak*:Meri typicall Battcutter, bina kuch jane samjhe bas bolti rehti hai, par tumhe aaj jo bolna hai kria bol lo, I don't care ,what I care is I m seeing u speaking infront of me, near me, wid me, & 2day I got link to get u back 4evr..(a smile of hope & cheer spread on his face).
Rr(wawing hr hand ):Mr.Caresless I m talking 2 u!!
Rey:yaa..
Rr:What yaa?? Ab aap humein aise hi dekhte rahenge ya apni car mein humein clg campus bhi karenge, otherwise lets hier a taxi Sw.
Rey:Ya ofcorse I'll drop u guyzz, cum lets sit inside d car.
Sw:hey wait,Rr tum apni car mein nahi ayi??
Rr:No, I came by taxi coz agar hum car mein aate toh Pitaaji ko pata chal jata ki hum itni raat ko ghar se bahar ja rahe hai, u know na Sw my outing is banned late nyt.
Sw:yaa, lets go!!
*Inside d car*

All the 3 sat inside d car, wid Reyam on front seat, wid rey driving d car & Rr on back seat.
Rr recivd Sam's sms informing hr dat 4 d work he came to India has been done, now both of dem startd text chatting thru cell.
Cold breeze blowing out entrd d car,thru window Rr's silky hair beagn drizzling ovr hr face,she got disturbd a bit, rey noticd it thru rear-view mirror of d car.
Rey:u can close d window.
Rr:No its ok, I like such cold breeze aftr rainfall, let be.
She was still busy in chatting wid Sam.
Her curly brown hairs wid choclate brown shade were constantly touching hr cheeks, wid hr fingrs trying to pin dem back, how can dis innocent beauty go un-noticed by our romeo rey, he was drooling hr image in d rear-view mirror of car.
Wid BG:O ho.hoo...O ho Ooo..
Sw noticed d single sided LL in b/n KR,he coughd a bit to bring rey back to his senses but no use he was cumpltly lost in kria.
Sw: rey dekh ke road par concentrate kar dude warna hum HOSTEL nahi HOSPITAL pahunchege..
He smirks.
Rey (out of senses):yaa.. kya karu dude baatcutter = distraction, how easily she distracts me.
Rr:hey guyzz what r u both talking abt??
Sw:nothing jst remebring our 2day's rain dance.
Rr : yaa it was rili awesome I enjoyed a lot, but u know what I jst wonder I mean u all r great dancrs of St.Louis so u all doing hip-hop is ok, but me I nevr dance excpt slow-dance of royal parties how was I able to dance wid u,dat too hip-hop street dance.
Sw*slf talk*:Ab tumhe kaise batao kria ki tum kitni brilliant dancer ho.
Sw:it happens when we r happy & in joyous mood we often do those things which we have nevr done in life.
Rr:perhaps u r ryt.
& dey go on..
Next morning
*St.Loius*
Neha:Babu , tumne tayyari toh ki hai na, dekho is test mein tumhe paas hona hai aur wo bhi bina cheating ke.
Viky:Don't worry kagu, dekhna is test mein mai, merit-list mein aunga..
All:What??
Nil: Dude itna hi fake na jitna log catch kar sakein.
All smirk.
Swmaira cum runnig.
Rr:Thankgod Sw hum late nahi hue.
Taani:bhai aap theek toh hai na.
Sw:haan Taani mai bilkul theek hun,aur Rr ke hote hue mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta.
Sharey cum.
Sharey:All d bst guyzz so lets go now to classroom.
Dey give dier surprise test .
Profeesor collects answer sheet & moves out.
Shr:Finally test is over,& it was good.
Vish:Yaa man my test was also good.
Rr:haan surprise test keh kar itna dara diya tha par test to easy tha.
Nil:Aur viky top kar raha hai na tu is test mein.
Viky chal na dude now stop teasing maine nursey mein bhi kabhi top nahi kiya hoga toh kya MBA ke final year ke test mein top karunga.
Bharat:Chalo yaar canteen chalte hai.
Neha:Haan chalo.
Reyam: guyzz we'll cum dere aftr few minutes.
All:Ok.
*Rehrsal hall*


Reyam enter & say dier signature dialogue looking @ kria's pic.i.e. Hello kria.
Rey:Kya kismat hai humari yaar,kria humare saamne hai, aur hum yaha uski photo ko hello keh rahe hai, y cant we jst go & say hr dat she's not Rr but our kria, my Kria.
Sw:Wo isliye Mr.Romeo coz evn if way hr she'll not belive us.
Rey:par q?? we have proofs, we'll show hr footlosse photographs,rose day's photo, hr all records as St.Loius' student & as AJS.
Sw:Proof toh humne palace mein bhi dekha tha, hr passport ,visa ID of London Univrsity, photos wid Raajvansh family & dat too since childhood.
Rey:So whats so special abt photo any1 can edit d photos 2day, unhe kria ke bachpan ke photos mil gayi hogi aur unlogo ne use apni family photos mein include kar liya hoga.
Sw:yahi toh mai tujhse keh raha rey dat fake proof ,evidences everything can be easily creatd 2day, aur agar hum Rr ko aaj ye kehte hai ki wo Princess Rr raajvansh nahi balki kria ghai hai toh wo humari baat q manegi, q wo apne un pitaaji par shak karegi jise wo khud se bhi jada pyaar karti hai.
Walking ahead he continued: tujhe yaad hai , jab us din Rr par attack hua tha, uske baad usne kaha tha ki uski jaan sirf isliye imp hai qki uske dad uske bina nahi reh sakte she loves hr dad most in dis world as b4 1 & half years back she lovd hr mom.she cant hear anything against hr dad.
Rey:But Sw Mr.Raajvansh ne aisa q kyun hoga, agr kisi accdent ke baad unhe kria mili bhi toh unhe kria ko uski mom ke paas pahuncha dena chahiya tha , y he made hr his daughter.
Sw:mai bhi kal se yahi sonch raha hun, rey kahin aisa toh nahi ki Mr.Raajvansh kria ka kisi kaam ke liye use kar rahe ho, waise bhi ye Raajvansh kinhdom ki story bahut hi complex aur dangerous hai, I fear dat dey r not using our 4 dier some means.
Rey:Hone ke liye toh kuch bho ho sakta hai dude, par ab hum kya karein??
Sw:Any how we have to find what exactly happned aftr kria left Mumbai, how she lost hr memory..par hum ye sab find kaise karein??
Rey:Hey univrseji ab aap hi kuch way bataiye..
All of a sudden nil entrd.
Nil:Hey dude, I have 2 invite u 4 sumthing.
Reyam:What??
Nil:Rr's birthday party.
Rey:Rr's b'day!!
Nil:Haan , but listen it's a surprise party princi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiya, hr bestie Samraat is organizing it 2moro, so he contactd me aftrall is clg mein Rr ka sabse achha friend toh mai hi hun na..So both of u have to cum 2moro evning, tym & venue I'll msg u later on ok mai chalta hun I have to invite evry1.. but remebr it's a surprise 4 princi..
He leaves.
Sw:Kahi ye Univrseji ka reply toh nahi hai tere recent paryer ka.
Rey:yaa dude , ho sakta hai , is party6 mein humein kuch pata chal jaye , coz Samraat is organizing dis party so all d royal ppl , including all d relatives of Raajvansh family & friendz will cum dere , ho sakta hai hume wahan kuch pata chal jaye..
Sw:yaa…
A servant of clg entrd: Reyaansh sir, ye Talent contest ke winnrs painting hai, Sharon madam ne kaha tha ki ye paintings hum rehrsal hall mein laga dein.
Rey:Achha aap ise yaha rakh dijiye hum dono laga denge.
He nods & keeping d painting he leaves.
Sw moves ahead to paintings .
Sw:Rey look @ dis, tune aur kria ne same scene paint kiya hai.
Rey( nearing to Sw):Show..
Sw:kahin is sketch ke boy aur gal tu aur kria toh nahi??
Rey smilingly nods.
Sw:Hmm.. so dis d bst scene of ur life aur ho bhi q na, aftrall ismein teri Baatcutter tujhe kiss jo kar rahi hai..(patting rey's back)Good going haa dude.. kissing aur wo bhi 1 & half years back..
Rey:Ab kria ki painting yaha hang kar dete hai aur meri painting store mein dal dete hai..
Sw:Store room mein..
Rey:yaa coz my heart says 1 day'll cum jab kria khud ye painting rehsal all mein apni painting ke baju mein hang karegi..
Both smile & hang kria's painting on wall.
To be continued…
Ok so a long update as a treat 4 hitting century on 3rd thread.
I know u all r missing sum KR special momnts as many of u said in ur comnts , ther4 I have plannd sum KR momnts in 4 nxt update..i'll try to give 1 more update b4 I leave 4 to Assam 4 my engineering studies, & if not den I'll meet u all aftr I reach IIT Guwhati(Assam) & get settld dier so it'll take nearly 1-2 weeks, dere4 I'll try my bst dat b4 leaving to give 1 more update..Lets c I m able or not..
Ok so enuf of my bak-2 now plzz comnt soon , im waiting anxiously 4 ur precious comnts..
Love u all..
Oh precap (I jst 4got)
Precap:
Rr:Is he in d party.
Sam:if u have some othr topic den we can talk otherwise lets go & meet our othr friends 4m London.
Rr:ok baba, I wont say but u have to propose hr soon.
Jia flew to dem,& strtd flickering hr wings.
Sam:I think jia wants to take u sumwhere..
Rr:yaa.. chaliye jia ab aapka surprise kya hai ye bi dekh lete hai..
kitna bada precap (hwww..)😆

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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lovely update it was awsum and oh no kya sam kriya ko propose kar raha hai kya
Edited by pkriyaansh - 13 years ago
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res
unres😃
Happy KriYaansh neeti...
congo for completion of 100 pages that to of 3rd thread...🥳
the update was long and amazing...👏
finally swayam understood everything...
and i am very happy that he firstly inform Rey...😃
Rr/kriya is very sweet the way he cares about swayam..aww..
Rr/kriya is still such a baatcutter...kya mast danta usne rey ko...😆
love the car scene...one sided LLHH😍
i am excited for Rr birthday...
hope everything will be cleared soon...
ab kriya ki memory kab wapas aegi neeti...?
update soon...
and all the best for your college...👍🏼
Edited by dildostidance19 - 13 years ago
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Heya di!!!

Dekho main phir se aagayi aapko pakaane ke liye

lolz... 😆

back to my addicted story 😆

Happy Kriyaansh... 🤗🤗🤗

Sabse pehle congo shongo!!!!

teesri baar century lag gayi

jis tarah yahan pe spamming hoti hai uske according u will take this story to atleast 5th thread haha

hum sabko yehi thread milta hai combine os/ss/sff likhne ke liye 😆

sorry sorry agli baar se koi aur dhunden ge 😆

lo main phir se bhatak gayi topic se 😆

ab seedha topic pe aaungi nahi toh update jitna bada comment ho jaayega 🤣

Arey waah swayam kya acting ki tune 😆

Ramaira se bach ke nikal gaya! gud! bahut guts hai tujhmein!

Aww rey was 100% true

haha i luv this rey! totally drown in kriya opps his baatcutter 😆

Di it was soo gud!

Luved ramaira opps kriya in her typical baatcutter avtaar 😆

Sw: rey dekh ke road par concentrate kar dude warna hum HOSTEL nahi HOSPITAL pahunchege..

Di this line totally cracked me up! 🤣

Rey (out of senses):yaa.. kya karu dude baatcutter = distraction, how easily she distracts me.


Hayee so cute 😍😍😍

Opps forgot to mention di!

Luved swayam making rey jealous lolz...🤣

Now d main prob for reyam

How will they find out the whole truth???

Well Ramaira ki birthday party hai

lagta hai bahut mazaa aayega!

di ismein bhi thoda opps no no bahut bahut bahut saare shitaa moments dena

it will b rocking just as the last tym 🤣

Wow di i dint knew u got admissin in IIT

Well congratz... IIT mein admission milne ke liye

Yup rite bahut bada ho gaya precap!

Love u di!!!

Now my comment finished!

Bahut lamba hai no??? 😆

Aapke thread pe aise dene ki aadat jo ho gayi hai ab 😆
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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this is cheating jao ab koi comment unres nahi karoogi
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Awesome update

Thanks for the pm
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woow awsommww neti it was sooo gd finally the truth is out to rey 2 well i hope rey gets his baatcutter back soon waiting for mree yaarrr aww plz updte by next wekk cuz den m going to plzz jaldi updte neeti i want ann updte quik aww jia is so cute waiting for her surprise i bet its planned by reyyy nyyc 1
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Neeti ind blowing update
loved it

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