hi,
i had posted this fiction before and it was deleted in few hours ....i didnot find it after that....so i am posting it again....if you have read it already...please do not scold me....i am sorry....
anyways.....the fiction starts this way....
bani is standing near the window of the guest house...remembering all the good times she had with Mr. walia.... suddenly she realises that.... she still remebers only the good times... not the bad times... and the scoldings..... and starts to cry her heart out... the wind blows as if to wipe her tears away and console her.... so juntle but strong....then she goes to her fathers picture and stands in fornt of it... starts talking to the picture...
" papa, aaj apki kami mujhe bahut mehasuz ho rahi hai... papa,kaya apne hame yeh din dekhne keliye hi akele choddiyatha... meiyen aaj bahut akeli hogayihun papa.... meyin jis se isduniyame... aapke bad subse zyada pyar karthithi.... usise aaj meyin bahut nafarat karne lagihun... kaise bhuljaun papa ki.. unkey vajasehi... merimaa margayithi... aur aap ne pina churoo kardiyatha....hum sab kithne kush tthe papa... lekin aaj dekihiye na papa... mere saath koi nahi hai.... meiyn rano ki aur pia ki maa bangayi... sari taklifonse.... guzarkar jarahihu.... laken mujhe kon kandha dega... meiyn bhi...kisike... senepar rokar apna dil halka karna chahatihun.... lekin mera koi nahin hai... meiyn ne sochatha ki mujhe eka sathi milgaya hai..lekin..aaj who mera sabse bada kathil nikla... meyin kaya karu papa.... "
she starts to cry with out stoping.... then a thurst of wind comes and hits her face and a thunder sound and the drops of rain start .....to come down.... its raining...so she goes to close the window.... and feel the cold wind... and closes the window.. and turns around....
😊😊.......................😉.............................
to see.... some one standing at the door...of the room.... she goes 2 steps forward and tries to find out who it is ...as the room is dark with some low light from other room... she instantly recognises him as mr. jai walia...
she says..." mr. waila aap haya iswaqt.... " and poses after that....
jai comes in and comes near her... and then looks at her...where as our bani...is looking down...
then says " kaisi ho bani.... " and pauses then bani says.. "meiyne socha nahitha ki aap iswaqt yaha ayeinge..."
then... he hesitates a little bit...and starts to say..." maiyen tumari sari bath sinli... mujhe aab sabkuch pata chal gaya hai...."
bani lifts her head... and stares at him....
there is lot more to come...i will post it in my next post......
now jai has listened to all that bani was saying....
now he knows that bani loves him...but now she hates him as he is the one who destroyed her child hood.....so what will jai say.... what could be banis reaction....?????
i had posted the whole episode... even the second part in my last mail...but i lost that post...and no one has read it....so i will post the part2 after i get a replys to this post......
please read this and give your reviews....
i am waiting eagerly for your reviews....
akshata..
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