maaneet ff # 2...CRAZY IN LOVE/LAST PART PAGE 57.. - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
just read yr ff.. gr8 parts..
cont.sooon dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry for been late...

here u go i m updating now

tell me is any1 is waiting??????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi friends i know i m late in updating but my net is not working... thats why i been little bit late
solyyy😔 plz forgive me and leave ur likes and comments...


PART 30

Kyu aisa hota hain jab hum kisi se pyar karte hain aur ye bhi jante hain ki wo bhi humse pagalon ki tarah pyar karta hain uske dil k har ehsaas ko samjhte hain lekin fir bhi kya kashish hoti hain un 3 words mein jab bhi hum use aapne pyar karne wale se sunte hain humara dil dhadakana bhool jata hain kyu saase tham si jati hain... kyu aisa lagta hain ki bas saari qayanat aapke sath wo 3 words sunane k liye ruk jati hain...

Bas aisa hi kuch hall tha maan ka jab geet ne maan ki aakhon mein aakhen dal kar aapne pure pyar aur shiddat k sath jaise duniya bhool gayi bas wo dono hi the na koi family wale na koi duniya wale...

Geet – maan... maan heart skip several beats... jab se hum is duniya mein aaye hain , geet ki duniya, geet ka saara pyar, geet ka har ehsaas sirf aur sirf maan k liye hain , geet ka dil jab bhi dhakta hain to bas usmein se ek hi naam gunjata hain maan , maan aur geet humesha se ek dil aur ek jaan rahe hain , maan k liye saase geet leti hain aur jab geet saase leti hain to wo maan ki hoti hain..

Duniya chahe kuch bhi samjhe par geet k liye maan uske babaji ka dusara naam hain jo khud uske babaji ne bheja hain , maan tum mere liye mere babaji ho sab jante hain mein tumse bahut pyar karti hu lekin ye sirf mein aur mere babaji jante hain ki mein tumse pyar se jayada jo tum mujhse pyar karte ho uski ibadat karti hu..

Kyuki mein janti hu ki shayad kabhi mere pyar mein kami ho sakti hu par maan k dil mein geet k liye pyar kam ho jaye ye kabhi ho nahi sakta...

Geet while saying this slowly walking toward maan lost in their love , maan condition is not different he is totally lost in her words..

All family members are knows that they love eachother crazily but every time they both amaze them with setting a new limit of there craziness... pyar jab sach ho to koi had uske liye mayne nahi rakti... har baar pyar karne wale aapni hi banai hui haad par kar jate hain...

Geet – maan... 'I LOVE YOU MORE THEN MY LIFE'' ''I LOVE U MORE THEN ANYONE ELSE'' I LOVE YOU MORE THEN I LOVE MY BABAJI...

Maan heart miss several beats... he come forward and hug her bone crushing and geet hug him too with same passion...

All family members having tears in their eyes...and they applause in joy...

Maan and geet remain same for some time and then maan lose hug and give a peak on her forehead...look into her eyes and

Maan – geet mein tumse deewano ki tarah pyar karta hu aur tum bhi mujhe uthna hi pyar karti hu mein ye janta hu lekin aaj tumne mujhe babaji se jayada pyar karke sach mein humare pyar ko ibadat bana diya... pyar to sab karte hain lekin geet jaisa pyar shayad hi kisi ne kisi se kiya hoga... shayad hi koi haad hain tumare pyar ki..

Both were lost in their world but dadu clear his throat to bring them back to reality... both blush and smile shyly

Dadu – aacha beta to kal se tum geet se i love u sunana chate the isliye kal se tum dono k beech cold war chal raha tha aur geet well done puttarji ye khota to hain hi ziddi lekin tum ne isse itna sataya.. bada aacha kiya ise bhi to pta lagna chaiye ki koi isse bhi bada ziddi hain...

All laugh except maaneet both were like sharam se paani paani types...

Darji – haan yash dekho to jara indono ko humne kaise bewakoof banaya tha kal ki hum to majak kar rahe hain..

Maan and geet both get red redder with their elder teasing them. Maan try to defend..

Maan – nahi... darji... wo... aisa... hain...

Dadi – its ok maan bte ab to hum sab ko pata lag gaya hain ki aap dono k beech kya hua to ab chupane se kya fayada..and wink on both

Geet try to change topic for save herself and maan from this teasing..

Geet – ok ok we know humse jayda aap log excited hain lekin plz show some mercy on me maan ne to mujhse i love u bolwa liya par khud abhi tak nahi kaha , this is not fair hain dad... and make baby face , maan get shock on her authority and she wink on him with naughty grin without anyone notice...

Maan (st ) – aacha ji to ab madam ko meri leg pulling karni hain pehle hi sab mujhe tease kar rahe hain aur ye chahti hain ki mein isko sab k samne i love u bolo taki sab meri aur band bhaja de...

Maan – geet tum ne mujhe 24 hours pareshan kiya hain to thoda sa to haq mera bhi banta hain pareshan karne ka to ab to mein tum wo 3 words tabhi bologna jab tum mujhe majboor kar dogi wo words bolne k liye like jaise meine tumhe kiya ya fir tab jab delhi mein snow fall hoga... and wink on her


All having great entertainment because of maaneet... they feel like they were enjoying live show of comedy show..

Geet cruse him under breath – ye samjhta kya hain aapne aapko kahi ka raja maharaja hain , mujhe attitude deta hain , kya bola jab mein majboor kar dungi ya delhi mein snow fall hogi are mein kya climate reporter samjha hain ki mujhe pata hoga delhi mein kab snow fall hoga , jaane de ye to hain hi ek number k sadu..

Dad – maan ye to galat baat hain kuch bhi ho geet ne bol to diya na ab tumhe bhi usko jawab dena chahiye na...

Before maan say anything papaji interrupt

Papaji – are wah ye kya baat hui maan ko geet ne itna pareshan kiya hain , maan bte i m ur side bilkul mat bolna tum is jhali ko bhi to thoda pareshan hone do..

Their argument is going on and atlast there is being two teams one which is geet side and another which is maan side..

Maan's side – all handa's except geet...


Geet' s side – all khurana's except maan..

NEXT - what say delhi mein snowfall ho jaye ya geet ko thoda aur pareshan kiya jaye?????????


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BUT I M LITTLE DISAPPOINT BECAUSE MY LIKE AND COMMENTS ARE DECREASING😒

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Loved the update a lot...
Geet'sconfession was so touching...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome...😊
Finally geet ne Maan ko ILU bol diya...😊
I guess next part m aisa kuch ho ki Maan hamri Geet ko ILU bol de...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
awesome dear snowfall toh banta hai boss delhi mein...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
update confession hogaya but 3rd war shuru hogayi



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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
very nice
geet ne maan ko I LOVE YOU bol deya finely
very very nice dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovelt update with full my maaneet's love...te words are superbbb...i loved it...yaa sure in delhi snow will fall, coz msk can do anything for his misty...te way both confess their love was superbbb..i love all te scenes...waiting for my maan to say that 3 words...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Awsome update
finally geet confess her love
super hit update
nd emo update...
Nd everyone teasing dem
nd handas vs khuranas interesting precap

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