maaneet ff # 2...CRAZY IN LOVE/LAST PART PAGE 57.. - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it awesome you did a great job!!!
Now ab Maan ko thora pareshan kiya jaye!!!
Love it update soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awespme concept !! already liking it after reading intro !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely dear, finally geet said those 3 words to maan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OK I WILL UPDATE BUT FIRST TELL ME HOW MANY OF U ARE WAITING????????????😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi friends!!!!!!! Here is the update


PART 31

Its looking like maan belongs to handa's and geet belongs to khurana's... its the reality of their relationship they love more to each other as compare to there own family..

Geet is princess of handa's but equally she is ladli of khurana's too same with maan , he is prince of khurana's but his every wish is command for handa's..

Now not only maaneet but whole families reputation is stake(hehehehehe me yaar love u maan ko bolna hain family reputation kaha aagayi yaha but maaneet k sath to kuch bhi ho sakta hain)

Dadu – oye khote de puttar tune kabhi aapni zindagi mein kabhi suna tu chod mein aapni zindagi mein kabhi na suna na dekha ki dehli mein snowfall hua ho ye kaisi sharta hain...

Dad – bauji aap maan ko dat rahe hain ya mujhe aap mujhe kyu khota bol rahe hain... and make baby face to his mom.. aur tu maan sidhe se humari princess jo sunana chati hain bol de warna tera tere jo plan hain na usmein mein tera sath nahi dunga...

Maan eyes widen alonge with other three mom papaji and mummyji... and geet confuse and other dadu dadi beeji and darji give them suspicious look...

Mom (st) – inse koi baat chupai nahi jati dekho sab ke samne bol diya ab mere bichare maan ke plan ka kya hoga

Geet –(st) ye sab kis plan ki baat kar rahe hain kahi koi gadabd to nahi dekho in charo k chehare dad ye plan wali baat bolne k baad kaise shoch ho gaye hain... geet puttar jarur dal mein kuch kala hain..

Darji – sanjay kounsa plan hain maan ka puttar??????

Maan papaji mom and mummyji gave murderous glare to dad for this... and dad gulp hard and mummered

Dad – (mummered) mar gaya agar bata diya to ye charo meri jaan lele ge ofcource with bauji and darji ki mein maan ko aise kaam mein help karta hu aur agar nahi bataya to darji aur bauji wala option to fir bhi open hain wo kaise bhi karke mujhse sach bolwa lenge... geet k babaji bacha lena mujhe...

Dadu – streamly sanjay kya baat hain..

Dad – wo... bauji...mein...wo maa..n...

Papaji – are kuch nahi bauji wo maan ne aap sabke liye trith yatra ka package book kiya thaw o aap logo ko surprise dena chata tha bas wahi kyu sanjay hain na yahi baat hain na... and gave him an angry glare and signal him to agreed with him..

Dad – haan bauji yahi baat hain...

Dadu and darji is suspicious and not convienced so mom

Mom - are aap sab kin baton mein lag gaye abhi bhool gaye hum sab kaha the..

Mummyji – wo maan se... turn to see maan but our maaneet is missing... lo ye dono to fir gayab ho gaye yaha hum sabko baton mein laga diya aur dono fir kahi hoge aur aapne anoke style mein romance kar rahe hoge fight karte hue..

All laugh and proceed to there chat they knows that now maaneet will manage...

Here when all elder are busy in aruge with eachother geet slowly come near maan and hold his and take him away from there in her bedroom...

Geet – maan ye kya hain tum kyu mujhe sata rahe ho plz bol dona..

Maan very lovingly look in to geet eyes and start walking toward her... geet lost herself those passionate eyes which show only love..

Maan is smiling on his effect on her inwardly and smirk naughtily but geet miss that smirk on his lips because she is lost in his eyes..

Maan – geet can i ask u something..

Geet only nod in yes .. she forget herself and surroundings , she only remember maan and his love..

Maan – kya dikhai deta hain jab bhi tum meri aanko mein dekhti ho?????

Geet – tumhara mere liye bepanha pyar..

Maan - jab tum meri saaso ko mehsoos karti ho aapni saaso mein to kya mehsoos hota hain tumhe..

Geet – tuhmara pyar jo meri saaso ki wajah hain...

Maan come close in mean time and lock his arms in her slim waist , geet close her eye... they both were so close to each other that both can hear each others heart beat which is so fast..

Maan come close to her ear and huskily say – what u feel when i come this close to u?????

Geet – moan maan...

Maan – bolo na geet what u feel???????

Geet – i feel secure , i feel blessed , i feel ur boundless love which is only for me... and blessed because ur love is like a work ship for me..

Maan – geet jab tum sab janti hu , ki mein tum se kitna pyar karta hu fir wo 3 words sunane k liye itna drama kyu and jerk her suddenly...

Geet come back to reality with this... and make o shape face and maan start laughing seen her expression...

Geet (shout on top of his lungs and throw pillow on him) – maan i m gone kill u , u dust danav , dus sar wale ravan mein chodugi nahi aaj tumhe.. kya kaha tumne mein drama karti hu..

Maan run for his life and geet start chasing him they both running like kids in whole farmhouse...

Maan (while running ) – aur nahi to kya ur a biggest drama queen i ever saw...

All other knows there tom and jerry fight but every time they enjoy it...

Geet – tum sajhte kya ho aapne aapko haan

Maan – Maan Singh Khurana aur kya samjhoga mein aapne aapko...

Geet – agar tum MSK ho to mein bhi Mrs.MSK hu... and both stop suddenly with geet words ... maan heart miss so many beats with her declaration while geet blush and family members are give naughty grin to both of them... and mostly they were laughing who maan stop only with Mrs.MSK...

Beeji(teasingly) – aacha geet to aap mrs.maan singh khurana hain...

Geet – wo..mein...haan...nahi...

Dadu – aur maan aap aise kyu ruk gaye geet ki baat sun ke..

Both get red redder while other doesn't leave this chance to tease both.. at last both run from there to save themselves..

Geet lying on her bed on her tummy and thinking about what happen just few min ago.. how she declera herself as a mrs.msk

Geet – kitna aacha sound karta hain Mrs.GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA... and smile shyly on her thought..

While maan in his room..

Maan – Mrs.MSK hu jhali hain bilkul dekho kaise sab k samne bol diya.. par kuch bhi ho kitna pyar sound karta hain Mrs.GEET MAAN SINGH KHURAN... babaji plz kuch karona ab geet se dur nahi raha jata... wo pass ho kar bhi pass nahi hain...

Maan – par maan bte pehle to ye soch ki delhi mein snow fall kaise hogi... warna wo jhasi ki rani wo 3 words bolwane k liye pata nahi kya kya silly ideas tujhpe apply karegi.. par wo bhi to jhali hain ruk nahi sakti thoda time mein bhi to tadap raha hu use i love u bolne k liye but mein chahta hu jab mein use i love u bolo to she feel really special aise kaise mein bol du... babaji plz is pagal ko kuch to dimag diya hota... to samjh pati y i m not telling her i love u..

In geet room..

Geet – dekha babji kaise footage kha raha hain i love u bolne k liye.. aur dekha mujhe kaise bewakoof banta hain aur upar se drama queen bolta hain ... and pout her lips.. kya mein drama karti hu.. nahi na babaji...

In maan room

Maan – abhi na mujhe kos rahi hogi for not saying i love u aur complain kar rahi hogi aapne babaji se ki mein footage kha raha hu.. par koi na jab mein use i love u bolounga to wo ye sab bhool jayegi...

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Posted: 13 years ago
it superb update mrs msk



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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part a lot...
dad was about to make their plan reveal..
thankgod kuch nahi hua..
ab maan beta bol bi do..
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Posted: 13 years ago
love their fights...

n loved the way she called herself mrs msk...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved both families
kitna pyaar karthi hai
loved the fun loving maneet families
n maneet not less than nautanki
maan made her sense week n asked y he should say ilu 2 her..lol
nice part..
loved mrs.msk
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Posted: 13 years ago



wow lovely lovely update dear...i love te family bonding...bechare dad ...my maaneet lovely cute scenes...geet is saying mrs msk...wow...im waiting for my mana to say that 3 words...if u ask i will say i want a kiss scene...

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