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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome n wonderful update...

happy k geet accept maan in her life...

loved it...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Geet had to go through so much
stupid people blaming her
Thank goodness she has Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...
I felt like punching dat inspector...
Next part seems to hav action...
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely update...te way man was talking to te babies, lovely scene...wen te babies are inside te womb, now itself they feeling they papa maan, wen they cum out, both babies with they papa maan, will becam so naughty, bechare geet will hav to struggle between these three,...now they filing te case...oh im waiting for next...i love te scenes of my maaneet and babies...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update..
Inspector s so mean...
Waiting to c MSK in action!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 12


Maan got angry n said in a stern voice, "Toh theek hai apna suspension letter ke liye tayar rehne" n dialed the commissioner's no. n kept it on loudspeaker.

Maan, "Hello commissioner sir, Main Maan Singh Khurana baat kar raha hu."


Commissioner, "Hello Mr. Khurana, aap ko kaun nahi jaanta. Ji kahiye aapne mujhe kaise yaad kiya???"

The inspector had started sweating hearing the commissioner's voice n Maan smirked seeing it.

Maan, "Main Palampur aaya huva hu kuch kaam se aur abhi main police station main hu lekin yaha ke inspector complaint likhne se mana kar rahe hai."

Commissioner, "Aap mujhe paanch min dijye main abhi dekhta hu." N cut the call n the next second the telephone in the police station rang n the inspector picked it up n spoke,


"Sir"

"Ji sir"

"Im sorry sir. Aage se aisa nahi hoga sir."

"Theek hai sir"


he hung up up n turned to them n said, "Mujhe maaf kar dijye main abhi complaint likhta hu"

Geet began telling what happened that day n also answered his questions n then Maan also gave his statement n then they both signed it n as the inspector was about to say something they heard a commotion outside.

suddenly they saw all the villagers barged into the police station n looked angrily at Geet n said, "Geettt………. Tu yaha wapas kyu ayi hai apne bojh ke saath."

One of them shouted, "maa baap ki izzat tho mitti mein mila di..ab kyun aayi hai yahan apne manhoos bachiyon ke saath?"


Geet stared trembling in fear seeing the angry villagers as she knew how violent they could get if something went against them but then gasped, "Maannn…….."

Maan hearing them calling his Princesses Bojh got very angry n his eyes turned red n he went n punched that villager who said that n started hitting him left right centre.



Geet saw that the person was already half dead but Maan's anger was no where to calm down n so she went n held his hand as he was about to hit the villager again. Maan turned towards Geet n saw her trembling n tried to calm down but just then someone pushed Geet n he held her at the right time but Brij entered the police station at that moment n saw Geet in Maan's arms n clapped his hands loudly n said,

"Wah Geet Wah!!! Teri jaisi badjalan aurat maine aaj tak nahi dekhi. Tere pati ne chode tujhe abhi kuch din bhi nahi huve aur tu kisi aur ke baho main hai. Shayad isiliye tere pati ne tujhe chod diya. Chi ghin aati hai mujhe tumhe apni behen kehte huva"


Geet hearing all the accusations couldn't hold it anymore…everything just came back to her..brij's words going round and round his her head…she was shocked beyond limits..how could they just….she just couldn't take it anymore..she felt dizzy and the next moment she lay unconscious in his arms!!! .


Meera who was listening to all got very angry when Brij came but controlled her anger but when he accused Geet she couldn't hold it back n went n slapped him n said, "Chi…. Tum apne aap ko bhai kehte ho. Kaise bhai ho tum jo apni behen ki izaat kharab karne pe tula hai. Mujhe phele Geet se bohut jalan hoti thi ke uske pass itna dhyan rakhne wala bhai hai lekin ab mujhe khushi hoti hai ke acha huva babaji ne mujhe bhai nahi diya aur who bhi tum jaisa jo apni behen ko marne ko tayar hogaya." N slapped him again.

Here Maan had held Geet as she fainted n was patting her cheeks but Geet wasn't responding. Yash got some water n sprinkled it on her face but she didn't respond.


Yash then called Meera n said, "Meera dekho Geet behosh ho gayi hai aur respond hi nahi kar rahi." Meera hering it rushed to them n checked her pulse rate which was going low n said, "Hume Geet ko jaldi hospital le jana padega."


Maan hearing it carried Geet in his arms but as he tried to go out, the villagers along with Brij blocked the way n said, "Hum isse yaha se bahar nahi jane denge."

Maan got very angry n shouted at the top of his voice, "GUARDSSS!!!!! COME IN RIGHT NOW."

All the villagers shivered hearing his deadly tone n then saw 6 well built bodyguards coming in n making way for their boss to go out pushing all the villagers away.


Maan to the villagers in his deadly tone, "Agar Geet ko yah meri Princesses ko kuch bhi huva toh jail main jane ke liye tayar rehna aap sab" n went out followed by Yash n Meera.


Yash drove as fast as he could n reached a hospital on the highway n they admitted Geet there. Meera went with the doctor to explain her about Geet's medical background. Here Maan n Yash were pacing in worry. Maan then said, "Yash yeh sab kya hogaya???"

Yash, "Maan mujhe yeh samaj nahi araha ke tumhare gaurds waha kaise pooch gaye???"


Maan smirked n said, "Main Maan Singh Khurana hu Yash aur isiliye yeh guards hamesha mere saath rehte hai. Aur waise bhi maine aisa kuch expect kiya tha isiliye maine kal raat ko hi apne gaurds ko bula liya tha Delhi se lekin itna humgama hoga maine yeh nahi socha isiliye sirf kuch guards ko hi bulaya maine" n sighed.

Yash kept a hand on his shoulder n said, "Thanks Maan. Tu Geet aur uski bachiyo ke liye kitna kuch kar raha hai."

Maan, "Isme thanks ki koi baat nahi hai Yash. Geet meri bhi dost hai aur uski bachiya meri Princesses hai aur waise bhi agar tu ya Meera pareshaani main hoti toh tabhi main aise hi madat karta."


Yash nodded n hugged him in gratitude. They pulled out of the hug n again began to pace the corridor. After nearly an hour, Meera came out of the room n hugged Yash n began sobbing. Yash hugged her back n asked, "Kya huva Meera??? Tum ro kyu rahi ho aur Geet aur bachiya kaisi hai???"

Meera pulled out of the hug n said, "Who Yash…Geet aur bachiya….bohut serious condition…..main hai. Agar Geet ko….. agle 24 ghanto….. main hosh…….nahi aaya toh……toh……bachiya nahi bachengi..." n began crying again.


Maan n Yash were shocking hearing this. Yash consoling Meera said, "Meera chup hojao. Geet ko kuch nahi hoga aur nahi uski bachiyo ko. Who teeno theek hojayenge tum dekhna"

Maan to himself, "Nahi Geet ko kuch nahi hoga aur nahi meri Princesses ko. Who mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakte. Agar unhone yeh socha bhi toh main unse naraz hojaunga aur baat nahi karunga."


Maan went to the small temple outside the hospital n prayed for them. He then took camphor in his hands n said, "Bhagwan ji please meri princesses ko theek kar do...." His hand was burning but he didn't remove it from his hand. He didn't know what was he doing or saying!!! It was his subcounciousness that was making him do all that..a strange connection he felt with geet and the little babies who hadn't opened their eyes to the world..but he couldn't have let them die like that!!!!!


After about 1 hour Yash came searching for him n saw him holding the fire on his palm n ran towards Maan n removed the camphor n shouted on Maan, "Maan yeh kya pagalpan hai. Agar tumhe kuch hojata toh."

Maan said painfully, "Yash meri Princesses theek toh hojayengi na???"

Yash hugged him n said, "Who theek hojayege Maan. Tum chinta mat karo aur abhi chalo. Ek Meera hai jo ro roke apna haal kharab kar liya hai aur ek tum ho jo yeh sab pagalpan kar rahe ho. Agar Geet ko pata chala toh uska kitna bura lagega tum logo ko aise dekh ke"

Maan nodded n said, "Theek hai chal" n went inside.


As they went inside they saw the doctor coming out n they all rushed to her n asked, "Geet kaisi hai doctor???"

Doctor, "Aap log shaant ho jaye. Mere pass apke liye ek good news hai aur ek bad news hai."

Meera, "Good news kya hai doctor???"

Doctor, "Good news yeh hai ke Geet ko hosh agaya." All sighed in relief hearing that Geet had gained conscious.

Yash, "Doctor bad news kya hai???"

Doctor, "Bad news yeh hai ke bachiya respond nahi kar rahi."


Maan, "Kya meri Princesses respond nahi kar rahi. Nahi who mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakti. Main unse baat karunga toh who zaroor respond karegi aap log dekh lena." N entered the room..he was dead scared...he didn;'t know why..but he just didn't want to lose them!!!!

Geet was talking to her babies with tears in her eyes, "Bacha apki Mumma bohut buri hai na…. Isiliye aap naraz hai na lekin aapki Mumma apse maafi mangti hai. Aage se kabhi main aap dono ko leke laparvai nahi bartungi par plz aap Mumma se baat karo na."


Maan had tears hearing to Geet n went near her n wiped her tears. Geet seeing Maan said, "Maan dekho na tumhari Princesses mujhse baat nahi kar rahi. Maine unhe sorry bola lekin who mujhe reply hi nahi kar rahi. Who toh tumhari baat sunti hai na toh tum hi bolo na unhe ke Mumma ko maaf kar de. Bolo na Maan plz."

Maan hugged Geet to calm her n then said, "Geet tum shaant hojao. Main meri Princesses se baat karta hu aur dekhna who mujhse baat jaroor karengi."


Geet nodded n then he went to her baby bump n caressed it n said, "Princesses dekho Mumma ro rahi hai aur maine kaha tha na Mumma ko tang nahi karna hai kal raat ko toh kyu kar rahe ho aap usko tang. Chalo jaldi se Mumma ko sorry bolo" but the babies didn't respond. Geet began crying again n then Maan said, "Princesses dekho ab main bhi aapse naraz hojaunge agar apne abhi humse baat nahi kit oh phir main aapse kabhi baat nahi karunga" but the babies didn't respond.

Maan again continued, "Princesses dekho ab apke PAPA apse sachi main naraz hojayenge." N caressed her baby bump n kissed it n said, "Princesses plz ek baar Papa se baat karo." N felt a light movement.


Maan looked at Geet who was also looking at him in surprise n he then said, "Geet dekho meri Princess ne mujhse baat ki lekin lagta hai meri dusri Princess abhi bhi naraz hai apne Papa se isiliye baat nahi kar rahi." N felt another movement.

Geet smiled n said, "Sorry Bacha maine aapko takleef main dala na par agaye se kabhi aisa nahi hoga. Promise." N caressed her baby bump. Maan who heard it said, "Princesses aap chinta mat karna main khayal rakhunga ke Mumma apne aap ko koi takleef na de."

Meera n Yash smiled at the scene n left to call doctor to check Geet.

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next: "whats you husband's name?" + dadima's entry😉

Prev: PART 11

Next: PART 13


update courtesy: hinal_maaneet (hinal)😳
Edited by sweet_aishu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely emotrional update dear...i becam so emotional...this my maan...now te villagers face te real msk...te way my maan prayed to te god and my maaneet talking to te babies..maan was so attached to te babies, so they responded to him...wow lovely scene, so touch...i loved it dear...thanku for giving such a feel...im waiting te way my maan will he is te papa of his princess
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Posted: 13 years ago
Second part was so touching...
Babies responded to maan..
That was so cute..
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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing dear...maan ki princesses tho sirf uski papa se hi baat karenge...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
thsi is one of teh best story i m reading right nowo
i always want thsi SS's update😃

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