SS: my TRUE desire !!!!!!!!!PART11 ON PG 51 - Page 31

Created

Last reply

Replies

327

Views

42.1k

Users

68

Likes

389

Frequent Posters

iqrahareem thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
PART 11:
NOTE:guys i have planned 2 continue😆 it again n i have planned to finish this first then that FF...😳
PIA POV
i couldn't belive that my best friend..wants me more then a
friend he loves me madly .y? when this happen? how can abhay love
me?..oh my!!! oh my!!!jeh..what jeh knew?..what's is going on?if
abhay was in love with me...then y didn't he told me or y i never
saw it? i m so confuse!!i never felt anything for him...i never
build anything like this for him then how can he?...with out
wasting a second, i spoke"what's going on?" he starred for a while
.then his blue eyes where on the floor...i couldn't hold my
horses!!!!!..."for god sake abhay!!!!! plz speak"...i came near to
Him and hold his collar n begged him to speak!!!

ABHAY POV
what should i say?how can i tell that i love her?how can i say
that jeh betryed me?...without seening in her eyes i can see she
is all confuse...she never felt anything for me... gathering
all my guts i spoke slowly"pia...""yes speak abhay""pi...a...(a
pause)...what ever k..kab..kabir told is ...""is
true?"pia...yes!"..than she left my collar and took a step
back..."pia listen i can explain""nothing to explain".."pia""JUST
STOP IT ABHAY!!!" SHE SHOUTED...placed her hand on her
forehead...started to speak to herself"how can this happen?how can
i let this happen" i hold from her shoulder and spoke"pia just
listen for once...for once!"

PIA POV
i was starring at his eyes...i nodded, then he spoke"pia..is
true i love u! is true...but i always think about ur happiness
when i saw u were happy with jeh..i kept quite for u only...i
didn't wanted to hurt u..not at all.."i spoke in between"who knew
this?""kabir jeh n misha""misha knew this!" oh my..this was
cooking behind me and no one didn't let me know even...not even
misha...i couldn't stop my tears ..."he took my face in his hand"
pia!"...i pushed him..."how can u fall in love with me!?..how
can u!?..didn't u realized that i belong to some one else...i
started to feel that u killed jeh to achive me..."then i realized
what i said...cruse u tongue...the wound was made which can not be
heeled!!! i saw him..i took see the pain in him...guilt in his
eyes for loving me..."u think ..i ...i killed...jeh.."

ABHAY POV
how can she say that...i hushly pinned her on the wall
withoutrealizing she could be hurt...i rest my forhead on hers"
how can u think that pia...how can u think that pia!!! how can
u!?..." i started to kiss her neck...she was pushing me
away..."abhay..please! abhay stop"..but i contiune kissing her
neck..then "ABHAY!!" PUSHED ME AWAY AND SLAPPED ME WITH OUT
THINKING...

PIA pov
i slapped him..what's going on...everything was out of my
hand..he placed his hand on his check..turned towards me and gifted
a fake smile...n spoke"..if i can't share my feeling with u.if u r
not happy with me...then what's the reason to win u i don't wanted
to be our love story to be one side love...i loved u with out
thinking..n i will still gonna love u!...it just
happened..when?how? don't know..i only want ur happniess..if i
love u..doesn't mean u love me too!"...A PAUSE..he begin"i will
never do anything which can hurt u!!" and left the house...
I sat on the floor kept crying and drifted into sleep.as my eyes
opened it was 4 am...where is abhay?..he has been gone for a whole
day ...i called him but his phone was switched off..i was scared
if something happens to abhay then?...i ran outside with the cars
keys...as i sat i had no idea where is he?... he could be any
where...but where?...i planned to go west as i drived for 15 to 20 mins i saw a guys lieing on the road i placed brakes..i came out of the car..in this tough time every thing had to go wrong...i came to that guy turned n ...n it was ABHAY!!!...he was smiling.. he was dreaming something..came near to him and smelled alcohol...
HE IS DRUNK!!!
Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago
alicia212 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story pl\z update soon
thanks for the pm
urmita thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
wow gr8 update...it was so immotional...
thank u for continuing this...
thanks for pm...update soon again...
Sukirticious thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
wow thats great up date dear ,waiting for next story
--geny-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..nxt part plz...abhy drunk n pia cmng...wow..kuch to jrur hoga..waiting
Fearless_Lover thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
glad u hv decided 2 continue dis stry...piya blamed abhay 4 j's death 😲 😲 😲 hw culd she..he hlpd her,he ws beside her in her bad tymsss ...i didnt xpct dat 😡 he ws drunk at d end of d updt hp all d truth cms out lik hw j betrayed him 4 piya...etc continue soon
trishnawaliya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
thank god dat u r cntinuing wid ur writing.,.. nice but short update and why not abhay tell pia that its jeh who betrayed him... its all because of jeh only... plz continue
.AgapiMou. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Luvly update..eager to know wats gonna happen next;)
hema_rawat thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
nice update ... m glad dat un r continuing dis os ...
MS-meghasharma thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
pia is behaving like a fool...hope some good sense prevails in her
grt to see that u decided to cont this ff

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".