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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok so Appu gave me this idea of OS she wanted me to write write some thing romantic...but i suck in writing all together & when it comes to romance no one is as bad as me
hope you all like this
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THE HIDING OUT.

It was our first major fight since we got together. All thanks to shivam..if he was not there in the rehearsal room with me.

How I convince him that I didn't cancel our date because of shivam & my meeting but because of V.P . he wanted to meet me & there was shivam in his room he just followed me till rehearsal hall. Gosh what should I do now

Sharon try to call him several tyms but he didn't respond to her.

Sh:ab mai kya karu'I have made a mistake this tym & I have to make up for it.

Sharon was pacing in her room & thinking of an idea..

Suddenly something come up in her mind'& smile crept on her face.

ok too good I will do this only'but its too late 'whatever I have to do it today itself

Sharon gets ready & put on her over coat

It was almost 8.45 when she reached swayams place

Ab uske room tak kaise jaao

Ok'Idea

She rang the bell'servant opens the door..there was no one outside..she was hiding in corner.

She repeated this several times ..finally servant came out of the house to find who was doing that.

At that point she enters the house & before any one notices her she went up to his room

Thankfully it was not closed

She enters the room

Sw:tum yaha iss waqt

Sh:hmm to tumhe kis ka intazar tha

Sw:Sharon jao I am not in mood to talk now

Sh:hum tumhe he to manane aaye hu

She removes her over coat she was wearing short skimpy outfit.

It was black shoulder off dress..just above the knee line

Swayams jaw drops down .he couldn't take his eyes off her

Sw:Sharon tum

Sh:ha bolo swayam

Sw:Sharon tum ye sab..kyu

Sharon moves closer to him'swayam backs out..she keep on moving towards him..

He lost his balance & fell on couch ..

Sw:Sharon tum

Sh:ha swayam mai

Sw:Sharon tum kya kar rahi ho

Sh:apne boyfriend ko mana rahi hu'jo muz se naraz hai

Sw:Sharon ..but

Sharon kisses him on his cheek & started placing small kisses on his neck

Sw:Sharon 'stop it please koi aa jayega door open hai

Sh:aane do

Sw:Sharon stop it

Sh:nahi & she keep on doing the same

Swayam holds her by her waist & get up from couch & stats kissing her on lips

Her tender red lips started responding to him'they both were kissing deeply to each other..he start moving toward wall. He pinned her against wall

Sw:so ye tumhara plan tha muze manane ke liye

Sh:nahi 'ye to bas plan ka 1 part tha

Sw:to chalo pura plan execute to karo

Sh:well '.she again start kissing him ..

He starts kissing her back with same passion ..she just lost her self in him ..

Just then swayams mom came in the room

SM: swayam tum waha kya kar rahe ho ..

Swayam gets startled his mom couldn't see Sharon because of his height..

She hides behind him the move in synchronization towards curtain & she hides behind it

Sw:mom aap..yaha

SM:ye kya bol rahe ho tum..

Sw:nahi wo mai

SM:chalo muze wo curtains nikalne hai'ramu kaka kuch aur kam kar rahe hai to socha mai he change kar lu

Sw:nahi wo mat karo

Sm:hah kya bol rahe ho tum

Sw:matlab aap kyu karoge mai karta hu na

Sm:ohh beta how sweet..but jaldi karo ..

& come fast for dinner

His mom left the room

Sw:oooph bach gaye

Sh:tum apne mom se darte ho

Sw:nahi

Sh:to phir'unhe muz se kyu nahi milwaya

Sw:milwa bhi deta but aise'look at you'your this look is only for me

Sh:ohhshe started blushing rally hard

Sw:chalo ab ghar jao we will talk tomorrow

Sh:pehele bolo tum ne muze maaf kiya

Sw:do you still want confirmation

He moves closer to her

Sh:ab bas karo..

She wears her over coat

Swayam kisses on her forehead.

Both came down ..she was hiding behind him..

Sm:beta khana kha lo

Sw:mom wait just coming

Sm:abhi aao yaha

Sw:ok

Both start moving to dinner table

Sharon hides under the table

Swayam starts eating..

Sharon sharts tickling his feet

Swayam text her :what are you up to

Sharon texts back :muze bhook lagi hai'muze bhi dinner karna hai

Swayam takes two parathas place on one plate & give her under the table '

Whole time Sharon was fooling around & he have to bear it all

Sm:aaj tumhara dinner nahi hua ab tak

Sw:mom bahot bhuk lagi hai

Sm:ok thik hai mai jaa rahi hu

Sw:ok ..fine mom

Sm:good night beta.

Sw:good night mom

Swayams mom left..

Sharon comes out

Sw:wo kya tha

sh:are muze bhook lagi thi

Sw:to iss tarah

Sh:ha my would be sasu mom is amazing cook'tumhe nahi pata

Sw:you '& he moves forward..

Sh:ab chalo muze jaane do ..is ke pehele koi aur aajaye

Sw:ohh ha

Swayam takes her out of house & she was about to leave

Sw:hai where is my good night kiss

Sharon moves closer & kisses him on his lips short & sweet.

After that she lefts

Next day in swayams room

Sm:ohh to curtains abhi tak nahi change kiye..

Sw:sorry mom aaj kar lunga

Sm:ohh aur ye earring muze mili shayad ussi ki hai jo kal curtain ke piche chupi thi aur baad mai dinner table ke niche

Swayams jaw drops

Sw:mom wo mai

Sm:ha next time use bolna ki dinner chair pe baith ke kare naki table ke nich

Sw:mom wo

Sm:Sharon right..kal use ghar mai ate waqt hi dekh liya tha acchi hai..ab kab milwa rahe ho.

Swayam gives goofy smile.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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woow..prachi..id is awesome..i always like ur write up..esp ur ff:just wanna spend ma life wit u...n ths is another amazin write up..loved it..even i was wondering u knw till the end hw cum his mom misd out seein sharon..but awww poor yammy was caught..hehe..i loved his mommy too..n aww SwaRon in full romance mood main woh bhi passionate hayee...kash epi main milta yeh dekhne ko..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bwahahaha Swayam's mom part was hilarious at the end...liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice.Loved it.You have to write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome os
Sharon at swayam place n swaron romance
Last part was hilarious swayam mom already knw about it lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PY the last part was hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww it was sooo adorable,cute,sweet,romantic and SwaRonlicious for sure!!
aww swayam's mom is sooo cool and sweet
hayeee loved your OS sooo much it was amazing keep writing more and do pm me wen u write any romantic OS on SwaRon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome... I just could not stop laughing... Swaron caught by Swayam's mom making out... poor Swayam... This sharon is also completely crack. 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Prachi, loved this OS.
Sharon was so sweet and she decides to cheer her boyfriend. Swayam's mom encounter with her future daughter in law was awesome..wondering how their next meet will be 😆
The hiding behind the curtains and then under the dining table was kewl..Loved the ending..poor Swayam..mom's are always too smart 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Praj I found this OS cute rather than being romantic but nevertheless I loved it... N I must say I loved Swayam's mom...

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