MG FF: Journey of hate to love pt 19 pg 139 02/11 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome, brilliant emotional part
loved it
continue soon
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Note: Those who have in problem in reading Hindi, i have added English translation (colored them in RED)


Part 4:


Geet is sobbing and begging not to beat her. After some time she fainted taking only one name from her mouch' "MAANJI'"

Here maan who is holding geet's diary felt a sudden feeling that his geet is calling him. His body is electrified, a sudden urge to see his geet, he is feeling is some thing is terribly wrong.

Geet are you fine? Why I am having a feeling that you need me right now. Mujhe itna ajeeb sa kyun lag raha hain. God whats happening to me. Again he looked at the book which he is holding. Its 6 years before diary that means when they got married. He caressed those words which are written by geet and a smiled formed on his lips. This is the first time he felt so happy in these 2 years.

"MAANJI SHAYAD MAIN AAPSE PYAAR KARNE LAGI"

His heart started beating fast, he kissed and caressed those lines. He is not able to believe his own eyes, was he dreaming, no not at all. But then one question is lingering in his mind, WHY YOU LEFT ME GEET? But alas he don't have any answer. Will he get an answer? But how? But he slowly opened her diary and decided to read it. is he doing right by reading her diary because its her personal thing and no one has right to read it.

But in the case of maan its different, if he don't read the diary he cant understand anything about geet. The curiosity increased 100 folds, he took a deep breath and opened the book and started reading it. he want to know about her so he read all the 3 diaries which are on the study table.

When he completed one book, his eyes became red not because of anger but because of his own tears. Yes MAAN SINGH KHURANA is crying. After reading he want to take geet in his embrace and protect her from the whole world. He is not able to believe what all he read is true. He is praying to god that what all he read should be a LIE. But it cant be. He is trying very hard to control his tears but they are no where to stop. His heart and soul are paining. Is there any medicine to cure this pain. Yes, there is one and only medicine and that is GEET.

He want to take her away from this cruel world. He want to assure her that he is there for her. After what all happened in her life will she believe in him. By now his body is shaking and his hands are trembling to take the next diary. With the trembling hands he took another diary. For the first time he prayed to god that some thing good should be there in that one. think god has listened to him. Because the diary consists of only 10 pages written in that and the other pages are EMPTY.

Maan wondered why it is empty. But when he turned last page there is something written on it.

"LIKE THESE PAGES MY LIFE IS ALSO EMPTY, AND I AM SO WEAK THAT I AM NOT ABLE TO WRITE AND MY HANDS ARE PAINING DUE TO BURNT WHICH DID NOT HEAL FROM FEW MONTHS".

When he read that his heart almost stopped beating. Anger and pain are visible in his eyes. He can burn anyone with the fire in his eyes. At that time only one thing came in his mind and that is "HANDA'S BE READY FOR YOUR DESTRUCTION."

Its morning 5am by that time he completed reading those diaries. By reading the last one his anger on geet completely vanished and he has only love for her. And only anger for those handa's.

Maan (st): "Geet, now you need not face any pain. Geet kabhi kabhi dard baantne se kam hota hain, par tumne aisa kabhi kiya hi nahi. Par isme tumari koi galti nahi hain. Isme poori ki poori meri galti hain kyun ki main tumko kabhi samajh ne ki koshish hi nahi ki. Ab nahi geet, main ab tumko samaj payi hu, mujhe maaf kardo geet itne din tumko galat samajne ke liye. Kya kya socha main tumare baare mein, mujhe laga ki tum mujhe dhoka diya, par nahi tumne kuch nahi kiya. Ab aur dukh nahi geet main aaraha hu. Tumko aur dard nahi, you will get all your happiness and this time no one will come, isse pehle tum ko kuch karna hain geet, tum apna dard mujhe kahegi".

(geet, now you need not to face any pain. Geet sometimes sharing ur pain will reduce some burden, but u never did like that any time, there is no mistake of yours geet, I did wrong there is only my mistake I didn't understand you nad never tried to. But now I understood you geet, I am sorry geet these many days I thought you were wrong and thought u cheated on me. You didn't do anything of that type geet. Now I am coming geet to give you all happiness but you have to do one thing for me geet. That you should speak out and share your pain with me geet. )

"You have bottled up your pain in yourself. But its not done geet, you have to speak up, you have to open up and I will make sure that you will."

He closed his eyes and took a deep breath and his anguish on geet is now turned into love, but he is not able to forget the pain which she suffered from many years. Now his heart and mind are determined to get his geet back and let her live her life with him with all the happiness she deserved.

He then looked at her photo which is hanging on the wall and he caressed it. A small smile formed on his lips. He then heard someone cry. He immediately rushed to muskaan's room and saw her crying while rubbing her eyes. He took her in his arms and patted her back to sleep. She peacefully slept again on his shoulders. Maan too rested on the bed with his dool and kissed her forehead.

He so much want to get his back. But don't know how, he know where geet is? But what will be her reaction if she see him now after 2 long years. That night sleep is very far away from him, there are only 2 things lingering in his mind. How to get geet back? And how to destroy HANDA'S? absolutely he is not gonna leave them now.

"Princess we are going to your mom, hope she will be happy seeing us" thought maan.


IN LONDON:


Next day morning, the morning sun rays fell on her face, she slightly opened her eyes. She then saw herself cuddled up in the corner of her room. She thought again she had dream last night. Now she is used to it. No one is there to ask her, she then looked at the clock and its 9:45 am. Ohh she slept over long today, but she didn't bother. She got up brushed her teeth, prepared herself a black coffee, she then has shower and made her way to the hospital. Nothing new in her life.

She totally forgot that her sister is coming today. But pinky didn't care and she very well knows that she will definitely forget. PINKY is the only one in her family likes geet and wants geet to be happy. And she even don't know whether her wish will be fulfilled in this life. She sometimes tries to cheer up geet but geet never gave a positive response. Pinky tried talking with maan several times but she got only cold response from him. But today its not like that everything is gonna change in their life. Atleast maan is successful in making geet normal. This time PINKY and MAAN are not gonna let her live in pain. Lets see whether they will be successful or not.

Precap: maan ot to know few more things about geet..

Hello, hi, Namaste how r u all? Sorry for not updating yesterday, was busy with my son. Hmm how is the update? Liked it? *fingers crossed*

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part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60754538


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Chinni.

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Beautiful update..
she dint wrote diary b/c of burnt hands...she had suffered a lot..
waiting for maneet meeting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd d update dear but was emotional nd painful...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
awesome update di
OMG she didnt write coz her hands were burnt😭
still she bottled up everything inside her and didnt say anything to maan
she should have told him coz then maan would have healed her with his love fully
but i hope this time maan does this😃
continue soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
loved it...
thanks for the pm...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
awesome update..
geet suffered a lot..
waiting for maaneet's meeting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Beautiful update..
she dint wrote diary b/c of burnt hands...she had suffered a lot..
waiting for maneet meeting...


thanku.. 😊 she suffered a lot.
have to wait for that

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