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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update...
good to read ur upd afta a long tym
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi friends thanks to the one who still wanted to reade my ff 😊

special thanks to the people who help me in this pm work and also to mayapari😊
Chapter- 13

A strong voice came

Stop it

As every one turn their head to see who is this

Arman said – maan

Maan wink at them and said

Maan to the student in corrider – guys is this the way u all help the new student , and u arman and mayank I know that this prank must had been played by u but guys u r my friend & I never thought that u all will behave like this with this new girls , come on guys say sorry

Sam – par tu na hi to ….

And not letting him complet maan said

Maan – ok as u wish I am ur friend so I should had stoped u but … any ways

Turning to girls

Maan – sorry girls I am realy sorry behafe of my friend

And in back arman said to mayank

Arman – mai phala hi jan tat ha ya kamina huma dhoka jarur dag a phala sara plain khud banaya aura b in larkiyo ka samana sata savatra(good boy)ban raha hai

As maan asked sorry a sweet voice came

Its ok

When every turn to see who was the one

Nupar said – geet

Geet – its ok ,sorry what ur name

Maan – maan

Geet – its ok maan I know we r new so ur friend played prank with us but I think it was not that lets play some aduld game

And she wink at her confuse friend and they under stand what she was telling so they also egared

And the whole collage started to shouted – yes yes

And sensing that if maan said no then thjier pried will go low so they also said yes to play

Maan – ok we r in but what the name of the game

Geet – ok the game name is honey, if u love me smile

And every one shouted wooo

Sam – what kind of name is this

Geet – u will understand soon

Geet – ok the ruls r simple a persone will choose some one of opposite sex ok the who is picked will be sitted on a chair In the middle ans once the preson is seated the persone who chooesed them will say phrase honey if u love me then smile , after they say the phrase the persone has one minite to makethem crack a smile,anything gose,they can do what ever they need to,to make the personereact to them

As geet explain every one thought it would be fun

Geet – as I think we should make it more intresting I add a new rule , if a person in the chair has any kind of reaction to what the person trying to makr them smile is doing then , then that will count and theywill loss the game. However , if the person in the chair dosent have the reaction of any kind then they will say the phrase,honey,ilove you but u did not make me smile and then the two will change the position and it wqill be the other persone turn to try.since its girls v boys, the group with most people still in the game at the end wins

When geet finishedsaying all the rules maan said in his mind

Maan – I will make u loose miss geet

Geet- so lets sart , ok we will flip a coin to see who getsto chose their opponent for the hole life sorry I mean hole game

As geet flip the coin boys said tail and the toss was win by girls

As all chose each other the copel was like this

Ridhma V arman

Sam V gunjan

Mayank V nupar

Geet V maan

As the partner was decided each one gave each other a dangreoyus look

As every one was giving look to each other maan whisper in geet ear huskily sendind shivers ,I am ready to win and moved back living a sken geet by his husky voice

As geet start the game ridhma and arman was first

As ridhma tried to make his move but he was not even moving is eyes and as 10 sec was left and seeing nothing happning she gave a pick on hid earlobe as arman was not expecting this he was shoked and moved his hand to his ear to feal it

And the girs win the first round

After their round gunjan and sam was their gunjan was sitting and sam was tring his luck

But he do not had to do much because as soon he said the phrase gunjan started to blush

So boys win the second

As mayank sat nupar did a sexy lap dance or some short of that which made mayank push her as he cant control

Asmaan and geet came in front every one nstarted to shout maan maan maan

As maan sat giving unnerving smrik to geet

Nupar said coman geet one and we will win

Awe,is the new girl scred ,she will lose ? it wa said by arman

As geet listen this she rolled her eyes and reorted , no

As geet tried every sexy move and what not but nothing bugged him and as thy chane their place maan said – I love u , but u did not make me smile

And again game started and this time geet was sitting and maan was going to try

Maan move little forward and here geet can feel some thing big is coming

Sencing her discomforte maan said – don't be scread u will enjoy this as much as I will and saying this heput his hand on either side of the chair

And tring not to show how nevers she became suddenly by his proximity se roared – don't be so cocky I may surprise u

What ever u say new girl said maan and he lean forward and whispered in geet ear – I will try not to make u much embarreass

Before geet can move back maan said honey if u kove me…. Smile .his voice sounded so husky.determind not to recate geet heald her breath

Maan just gave her a mischievous smile , then sloy started to come inch closer to geet face tilting his head to side he look in geet eyes before putting his nose on her neck took a breath and said u smell so good, so ….delicious. he said huskily;y

Geet prov ;

I could feel his cool breath on the warm skin on my neck and I had to close my eyes to keep my self from shvring

Geet prov finished

Maan – I hope u don't mind if I teast u little a new girl

And saying this he again look in her eyes before keeping his lips on her for little while and then movind his tonge on her lips teasing her

Sensing the hotness in atmosphere mayank said- maan only 2 sec is left u need to do fast

Maan – will do

And he told

Maan – open ur eyes geet6

As geet open her eyes maan kissed her and in ruttern not been able to controle geet loss her sef and kissed him back in reasponce

Precap - ??????? 😆

im p note - guys i think i am not a good writer to entertain u all so i try to fnished this ff fast and will not make ur head pain more by my written story😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome dear...

loved it...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks guys for giving so lovely comment😊

missing u mayapari😭

spacial thanks to spvd 😊

Chapter - 14

Not able to control her self she kissed him back

As whole collage was their and to control the situation mayank said ' ok guys we won the game

As every one started to clap and by the sound both maan and geet came in their sence

As they both parted geet with a shock face and maan w ith a smirk

As nupur came to geet side geet went from their giving maan a dead look and seeing the look maan was knowing that he had to work hard this time

Maan was thinking when a girl came from the crowed and said ' maan how could u do this from 6 month we r in relation u never kissed me and here u kissed a strange girl.how can u

Another girl ' no maan was with me from 4 months

And one after another girls started to come

Syncing the problem maan said ' girls relax I never told u all that I love u orsome thing I think u al had misunderstood me,soory

Saying this maan turn onlyto se his friend laughing holding their stomach ,giving them a deadly look

Here geet was busy cursing maan

Nupar ' geet tuna usa tapar(slap) kyu nahi mara

Geet ' mai aur tama nai chati(want).chore na gunjan tu itani chup kyu hai

Gunjan ' geet tu humsa kuch chopa to nahi rahi hai na

Geet turning her face to wall said ' nahi

Gunjan - r u sure

Geet ha baba.abb ya sab choro hum abhi ghr jana hai tum logbhi cholo

Redhima 'ha tu thik kha rahi hai cholo (come) ghar chalt hai

Here maan was with his friend

Arman ' I cant believe that because of a girl maan sing khurana lost his imge of a sidha sadha boy(laughing)

Sam ' (laughing) I cant belie u stay ad rome with so many girl but not even kiss a single girl, haa ha haaa

Mayank (tring not to laugh) the new title achive by maan sing khurana a play boy

Maan ' stop it guys I am already in so much tr0ble and instied of helping me u all r laughing

Sam ' ya I know when the girls boyfriend will come to bit u ,u will need a space to hide

Maan ' setup I have more think to worry (shouting)

Mayank 'relax man ,kay hua tu itana tention ma kyu hai

Maan ' nehi ,bas mugha ghar jana hai

Adi ' kya hua maan tu humsa kuch chupa raha hai kya

Maan 'nahi yar chill ma bus jaan sa mil la jana chata hu

Mayank ' tu asa bol chal hum bhi chal ta hai

Sam ' ha pura 2 din ho gay us ki mithi awaj nahi suni

Maan ' nahi ajj nahi ajj mugha usa kam hai tum log kal ana

All together ' okk

Present''''.

Adi ' maan ka is thraha jana mugha pata thaw o kuch jarur chupa raha hai

Pinky ' par ya jaan kon hai

Adi ' jaan to maan ki jaan thi aur srif uski nahi hum sab ki thi

Pinky ' to wok kha hai

Adi - ''''.. wo mai thuma bad ma batao ga par philal mugha bhuk lagi hai so plz khana mila ga

pinky - jarur milaga 😊

precap - 😭😡

guys i realy think u all should give me long comment because sitting in train and taking a laptop from beside sitter then sitting for 3 hr typing is not so easy but i did it just because i dont want u all again had to wait for my update

i dont mind if u all give me gali for late updating or for the mistike i did but i do mind when the comment is short

ps - plz do comment and like😃

Edited by anvashakhurana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


It is very interesting FF...

who is Maan's JAAN...is Geet his GF already...

when u are writing Hindi dialogues in English I am not able to read and understand properly...because of it I loose interest to read...sorry for saying this...if u can please write dialogues in English...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - u are welcome honey...

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