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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue
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awesome prologue
plzzz do continue soon
will be waiting
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very interesting concept.
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Part 1:


That man smirked and thought "whoa.. that's cool. Wait and watch the game MISS. Oops sorry MRS. GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA. Now no one can help you from me. I am coming just few more days baby, u will be in my arms."

"Thanku adi, you may go now" told maan.

"Sir are you sure that what you are doing is correct?" Asked adi.

Maan looked at him and told "no one should mess up with MAAN SINGH KHURANA, if they did so then they have to face the consequences too."

"But she is your wife maan" told adi.

"She was my wife corrected maan. Now go and do your work, this is office and you are not here to discuss my personal works "told maan rudely.

Adi sighed and left from there defeated. How can he convince the great MAAN SINGH KHURANA. MSK the most stubborn man in the whole world, he does what he likes and he don't care for anyone except his sister who is his world. He don't have any family. He pampers his sister ANJALI and he does what she wants. But for anjali parties and friends are world she don't care for anyone. These two are quiet opposite.

Here maan is engrossed in the file and making some changes. Its been 3 hours and its lunch time. But he didn't care he is so lost in his work. He heard a knock on the door. He got frustrated as who is disturbing him now.

"Come in" said maan angrily.

A cute little 2 years old girl entered into cabin smiling cutely with a lunch box in her hand. She is so small that maan didn't see the girl and wondering who knocked the door, then his eyes on a little doll who just tugged his pant. He smiled at her and took her in his arms. He kissed her cheeks and the doll too did the same wetting his cheek. She then showed the lunch box she brought for him.

"Baby this is for me?" Asked maan and baby nodded and told "yesh pa.. thi ish fal you" (yes papa this is for you). Maan smiled and took the box from her and she settled comfortably in his lap. Maan closed the file and opened the lunch box.

He found his favorite pasta init and smiled. He took spoon and fed his little doll and after that he too had his lunch.

The little doll is MSK'S daughter MUSKAAN MAAN SINGH KHURANA, she is 2 year old and princess of maan. He loves her to the core and can do anything for her. After geet left him, muskaan is everything for him. He is living for her, but she is same like her mom, same eyes, same lips but attitude is of maan's. a smile appears on his face when he sees his doll.

After lunch she is playing with him on his lap and messing up his things. Even maan is also enjoying with her.

"Pa.. I wan ichecleam" told doll looking at him. Maan told "doll evening we will go to ice cream parlour and buy loads of ice cream for you, now papa has work na."

Doll made a sad face and nodded. He felt bad seeing her sad face.

"Eve plaka" (evening pakka) asked doll. Maan nodded happily and kissed her cheek. Muskaan rested on his chest and slept peacefully as this is her sleeping time. Maan smiled seeing her sleeping and took her in his arms, he made her sleep on the couch and he is back to his work.

After some time he called sasha to his cabin and asked her about kapoor's project.

"Oh.. MK I will complete it by evening" told sasha. Maan is angered with this and roared like a angry lion. "What the hell sasha, I told you to complete it by today 10'o clock, and its almost evening. I didn't expect this from you."

"So.. sorry MK, its my mistake" told sasha. But here due to the noise muskaan woke up and started crying. Maan closed his eyes and scolded himself for shouting when his doll is sleeping.

He ran to her and took her in his arms and told "nothing princess, u sleep. Now papa wont shout." Doll hugged him tight placing her head on his shoulder and she slept again. Here thanked muskaan for crying and she helped her from msk's wrath.

"Can I go MK?" Asked sasha. Maan just nodded not disturbing his princess again. Sasha immediately left from there and sighed in relief. Maan continued his work with muskaan in his arms.

IN LONDON:

GEET just completed her meeting with the senior doctor and she is back to her cabin. She closed her eyes and thinking about her sister who is coming tomorrow after 4 years of her studies. How she should face her and what should she answer when she ask why she is here?

How can she tell what all happened there. But she don't like her sister coming here and staying with her. She loves to live lonely, away from all relationships. She wants her life as she needed, no one should order her to do this and to do that.

What will be her future, no one knows not even she herself.

After some time she got busy with her patients and she is a GYNECOLOGIST by profession.


This is part 1, how is it? 😕 did u like it?😕😳 will be waiting for your response. 😃

Thanku so much for your likes and comments😃. I am very happy. 😊

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Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3072042/mg-ff-journey-of-hate-to-love-pt-19-pg-139-02-11?pn=6

Thanku 🤗

Chinni.

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update.
so maaneet have a daughter. what is the reason of their seperation curious to know that.
update next part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Nice part
i'm really eager to know more about the past !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
awesome part
so geet left muskaan with maan n went away to london
oh loved how maan took care of muskaan n loved maan n muskaan's bonding
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
fantastic update.
loved it to the core
keep writing
and thnxxx for the PM😃😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Awsome update
loved it
maan nd geet living alag alag..nd dey r having a daughter which is wid maan..loved it wht happen dat dey r not together interesting
update next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
first of all

congozz on starting an FF 👏 👏

the prologue was interesting and

the part is wow 😊

liking your FF

wanna read more

cont soon

don't forget to pm me 😉


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