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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update..nd dont worry we r already besharam..i wanna take risk..so continue SOON..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update...😍waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: wendy25

its beautifully written.
shivani, i am feeling bad for akash. please set him up somewhere and UV and manyata together. Waiting for next update

ok on ur suggestion i will def introduce a new character for akash then. 😉
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update!! And you left it at such point!!!! Bad bad move!! Lol!

Waiting anxiously for next update! Pls pls update soon n do pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please update soon i am so curious to read the besharaam part please update soon
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U.P.D.A.T.E.7/4/12

Manatya looks at uv with a sneaky ye but he has her back on
her. She instantly goes inside and her heartbeat is getting fast. She closes her eyes for a minute and decides to change into her night clothes and it will give her time to relax as well. Manatya brushes her hair and puts in one side. She takes a deep breath and comes outside. She taps on uv's shoulder and uv turns around but he is mesmerized by her beauty. She looks at him and her heartbeat starts to beat fast again. Instantly she turns around and closes her eyes with her hands on her face. As she turns around her hair hits uv's face and he is completely lost in manatya. There is a silence in the room and finally manveer decide to break the silence. Both of them have their back on each other and turn around at the same time. Manatya looks at uv and tells him to put on his t-shirt but he refuses and starts walking closer to manatya. Both of them have a eyelock but manatya starts moving backwards without breaking the eyelock. Finally she hits the wall and uv puts his arms around her. Manatya starts blushing and uv holds her face in his hands and kisses her forehead. Manatya kisses him on the cheek and uv lets go off manatya and manatya runs off and shuts the lights. Uv looks around and he couldn't find manatya. After few minutes he sees someone lighting the candles and it's none other manatya herself. After she is done with lighting the candles. She holds uv from the back and uv hugs her. He tells her to turn on the lights but manatya refuses. Uv pulls her closer and they could feel each other's breath. For few second there is silence and uv gives in. he lets go off manatya and she turns on the light. As the light turns on flowers starts to shower and uv is looking at manatya with a smile. He says achhaaa toh yeh surprise tha manatya starts walking towards him and tells him so you think only u could give me surprises not me huh. Uv says challoo come closer and I will give you a surprise too. Manatya teases him but uv gets hold of her and manveer gets closer and uv turns and plays music "beheke beheke" plays. Uv asks manatya to dance and manatya agrees, uv turns manatya around and they do some salsa moves. The dance gets intense and manatya hugs uv tightly and then kiss him. Uv also responds back as a kiss but he stops himself and turns off the music. He tells manatya it's not right. Manatya says nothing is happening so lets have another dance. Uv agrees and they dance on (tum mile). Manveer is doing a slow dance and they get closer to each other. Uv looks
into manatya's eyes and tears starts to roll down manatya's eyes. Uv ask her what happened and manatya says nothing. Uv insists and manatya breaks down. Uv holds manatya's fae and kisses her on the forehead.
She hugs him tightly and strats talking. She confesses her feelings and how much she loves him. Uv gets teary eyes as well. He starts saying princess you are my life and I will do anything for you. Manatya starts to fall asleep and uv carries her in her arms.


Uv carries manatya to his car and he puts the seatbelt on manatya and drives the car away. He brings manatya to a dark place and there is a river. Uv smiles and brings manatya inside a house. Next morning manatya wakes up and ther are flowers everywhere and as she goes outside her room she sees blue water everywhere with mountains surrounding. Manatya looks around and smiles to herself thinking its a dream. Uv comes in with a tea and she realizes its not a dream anymore. She looks around carefully only to realjze her dream is a reality and she is in a boat house. Uv greets her and she looks surprised. Uv explains everything. Manatya hugs uv and tells him thank you. Right then she receives a call from akash and akash sounds worried. Manatya tells akash that she had to go out for work and she will be home a day after tomorrow. Akash doesn't believe her but she doesn't say much after nd hangs up. In anger he calls his good friend rhea and decides to have lunch with her. On the other side uv and manatya are lost in each other. Manatya gets ready in a sequined red sari and uv is wearing white shirt with blue jeans. Both of them romance for a bit and slowly it starts to get intense. Manatya feels uncomfortable and uv stops but manatya starts to play around n tease uv on why he stopped. Uv holds her hand and tells her we are rajwades princess... We don't leave anyone if someone challenges us ok... Manatya nods her head with a smiles and says achaaa...toh ab mujhe padko tohum bhi maane u are a true rajwade. Uv accepts the challenge. Manatya runs around and uv chases her. They have a cute moments andmanatya picks up a camera and starts clicking pictures of them together. At the end both of them get tired and manatya gives in. Uv asks if she needs help,manatya refuses saying she is a royal too so she will help,herself. Uv nods and tells her acchha. Manatya turns around and smiles but as she turns back uv is nowhere to be found. She looks around and goes back inside to see a cake and flowers. As she got closer something was written on the cake i love you and in the flowers there was a note from uv saying i love you my princess...we have been thru soo much and our relationship has only gotten stronger with every hardships...so this is my way of saying i love u my princess who stood by me when i had no one and sacrificed herself just for,me. You are truly my soulmate and soon to be wife. Our relationship never needed a name or never will but marriage will make our relationship eternal infront of world. Don't worry you don't have to say yes because i will always wait for your answer...

your prince,

udayveer

Manatya starts to smile and crying at the same time because reality was diff than her dreams. The dreams she had for uv had shattered but still she had a hope that her love will find a way and manveer will never be seperated because they are and always will be true soulmates. As she got out of her thoughts she closed her eyes to cherish this moment in her memory and never letting go of it. Uv comes and wipes Manatyas tears and she opens her eyes. Their eyes meet and no words were said. Enough was said and done by now. Their relationship was at another level where their heartbeats were enough to undertsand their feelings. Manatya came closer to uv and putted her head on his chest. She could feel and hear the heartbeat of her prince. She closed her eyes as she listened to his heartbeat. It was the most soothing sound in the world. Uv stayed there for a moment and slowly moved manatya so she could face him. He asked her what she was doing. She answered listening to the most beautiful sound in the world. Uv asks what and she answers ur heartbeat because it will always tell me that my uv is with me all the time and no matter what happens my love will be always there for him like a heartbeat for his heart. Manayta has teary eyes and uv puts his finger on manatyas lips. They share a eyelock. Without saying anything uv takes manatya to a room where roses are everywhere with candles. As they enter manatya shuts the door and uv slightly puts mantya on the bed. Both looked at each other one and thinking how all this time they were ignoring the feelings they had thinking about right and wrong when their love is beyond all the materialistic things.uv came closer and manatya moved back a little a bit shy...for few second manatya didn't know how to react but uv held her hand and give her a kiss with a smile. Right then manatya looked into his eyes and all her shyness was going away slowly. Manatya came closer and kissed uv... And uv kissed her back.they hugged each other tightly. Uv pulled the blanket over and the doors were closed.


Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Love it already!! Can't wait to read the rest!! Update soon 😉

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