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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ruchs
UPDATING TONIGHT!!!!

A looonnngg one!! Nearly double the regular update'.😳

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#632

SHAAYAD SAMRAT MIL HOGA...YEH TSR TOH ACHCHA HAI...👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Thank you dears for all the lovely comments and thank you for liking!!!😳

Thank you for bearing with me, me trying my best to update soon!!!

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PART – 12

"Yeh baat tab ki hai jab main apney 11^th standard ki school trip par gayi thi…"

Geet reminisced with a smile on her face…

FLASHBACK

Geet had come on a study trip with her schoolmates to Kerala… Today was the last day of their trip and all the teachers and students decided to visit some temple today…

Geet was not feeling so well so she requested to stay behind but on being insisted by the teachers she agreed to accompany them…

KADAVALLUR TEMPLE, Thrissur

They went to many temples but one particular temple attracted Geet a lot… It was the Kadavallur Sreeraman Temple located in Thrissur… It was a temple of Lord Rama with beautiful carvings but what attracted Geet was not its outer beauty rather it was some divine force which spread an unusual feeling of calmness over her… As she was going in, an old beggar lady came in front of her and said-

"Beta…"

Geet was quite taken aback as she didn't know why the old lady specifically stopped her… Moreover all her class mates and teachers had already went ahead so she feared a little as she was alone…

But there was something in the ladies eyes that compelled her to listen to her once..

"Beta… Iss mandir mein tumhe aise nahi jaana chaiyeh…"

Geet was stunned at this woman's audacity but still she listened to her… She was also a little surprised as there were not many people in this area who knew Hindi…

"… Yeh lo.."

The old lady gave her a red odhani… And made her wear it over her head…

"Abb jaao…."

Geet silently complied though she was thoroughly confused…

She marveled the interiors of the temple and actively participated in the aarti that took place there… There was a special occasion going on there at that time… According to it, each person had to take out an object from a well-covered Handi and whatever you took out gave a glimpse of your future…

(Guys I don't know whether such a thing exists, am taking my writer's liberty here…)

Geet was very excited to participate in it but due to time limitation the local priest was selecting only certain people…

One young married woman was selected… She put in her hand and took out an object… It was a ' 5 anna coin'… The priest exclaimed that the girl would soon bring lots of Lakshmi i.e. Money in her home…

To her utter surprise, Geet was the next chosen one… It seemed that the priest was choosing everyone with a red odhani… She mentally thanked that old woman a number of times… Slightly wondering whether she knew about this or it was just by chance??

Geet put her hand in the Handi and took out the first object which came in her hands… It was a 'Baal Gopaal'...

"This means that very soon you are going to become a MOTHER…"

All her classmates and even the other people present in there gasped and even the priest gave her a strange look…

"But this is not possible Pandit ji… She is just 16…" One of her teachers spoke up…

"This is Lord Rama's blessing and nothing can be done about it…"

Geet was under so much shock that she barely processed anything… All the others decided to call it a day, each in their own thoughts, some of them rubbishing all this as superstition and some of them wondering about it…

They left early next morning for Delhi… Throughout the journey, Geet kept on looking at the Bal Krishna idol in her hand… Staring at it intently…

Once everyone settled back in the hostel, Geet was dropped to her little apartment by the school van… Geet didn't have money to pay for the hostel fees, which unfortunately didn't come under the scholarship so she had to stay in a dingy apartment… She paid the rent for it by working part time as a nanny or taking some tuition…

Geet left her belongings there and then her feet automatically made way towards the local temple, which was quite nearby to her place…

Continued Below…..

Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago

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Ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#635

continued from above….

LOCAL TEMPLE

Geet stood in front of the Goddess Durga idol silently seeking answers of the thousands of questions going on in her mind to calm her inner turmoil… That's when, many offerings that had come for charity, for the Dusserra that was approaching in a few days, caught her sight… The priest who knew her well saw her looking at it…

"Arrey beta… Aapko jo kuchh bhi chiyeh le lijiye… Yeh sab Maa ka Prasad hai… Unke nek aur pyaare aapke jaise bachchon ke liye…"

Geet used to survive on clothing and food she got from this temple in charity… Everyone knew she was an orphan and the priest as well as the local people of this area looked upon her as a daughter, due to her sweet nature, helping her in every possible way…

Geet silently nodded and thanked Pandit ji and made her way towards them when she saw…

A little bundle of cloth lay stranded among the numerous offerings!! Curiosity got the better of her and she couldn't help but make her way towards the pile… It seemed that there was some unknown attraction that was pulling her towards it…

When she finally reached it at an arms length, she gasped…

The bundle suddenly moved!!!

As a reflex action, she jumped back but then due to mere curiosity, she approached the bundle and started opening it apprehensively, that's when a baby's cry filled the temple…

In it lay a very cute little chubby baby who had become very red, partially due to heat and partially due to suffocation since it was packed so brutally in that cloth…

The priest immediately rushed on the spot after hearing the baby cry, as it was afternoon and no one was there in the temple except him and Geet… He immediately understood the scenario…

"Hey bhagwaan… Kis nirdayi Maa ne iss bachche ko yahan chhod diya??"

The baby kept on wailing and Geet could not take it any more, She gingerly picked him up…

To her as well as the priest's surprise, the baby stopped wailing and his crying was cut short to little muffled sobs… It seems that he was seeking his mother's warmth which he had got in the form of Geet… He slowly opened his little eyes and that's when Geet fell irrevocably in love with those Dark brown hazels which looked so much like her own…

"Kamaal hai beta… yeh toh aapke haaton mein aate hi chup ho gaya… Parr yeh bhuka hoga… Aaiyee main iss ke liye doodh ka intezaam karta hoon…"

But Geet was completely oblivious to everything except the bundle of joy in her arms… The words of the priest in Kerala echoed in her mind…

"……very soon you are going to become a MOTHER…"

"This is Lord Rama's blessing and nothing can be done about it…"

The priest came up with a bowl of milk and a spoon… He offered to take the baby from her but was astonished when Geet sat down with the baby and adjusted him in her lap and slowly started feeding him with the spoon…

The baby kept gurgling and half of the milk spilled out of his mouth but still Geet fed him patiently till he was full and slept in her lap, contented with a full stomach… She slowly burped him and then again adjusted him in her lap….

All this while the priest kept looking at them, his mouth curved into a smile but then thinking about the little baby's fate his smile faltered… He gently took the baby from her and in the process the cloth slipped from the baby's body… giving a clear view of scratches and bruises on HIM, yes the baby was a boy!!

"Beta, bahut hi buri kismet le kar aaya hai yeh bachchaa… kaash issey tum jaise Maa milti… Bhagwaan jaane iss anath ka kya hoga… Log bete ki chaah mein apni betiyon ke saath aisa karte hain par iss baar toh aisa bhi nahi hai…"

"Pandit ji… Yeh bachchaa aaj se anath nahi hai…"

"Kyaa???"

"Jee yeh bachchaa aaj se mera beta kehlaya jaayega…"

"Yeh aap kya keh rahi hai beta… Aap to khud hi itni chhoti hai… Bhaavnaaon mein beh kar aisa faisla mat kijiye…"

"Maine yeh baat bahut soch samajh kar kahi hai… Iss bachche ko apni god mein uthate hi mujhe aisa laga jaise mujhe zindagi jeene ki wajah mil gayi ho… Uski aankhon mein maine apne aap ko dekha… Mujhe aisa laga jaise main apni hi rooh ka Aayinaa dekh rahi hoon… Aaj se yeh bachcha Geet ka beta ban gaya hai… Geet ki zindagi ka SAMRAT…"

FLASHBACK ENDS

Maan looked at Geet completely astonished… The respect for the woman in front of him grew with leaps and bounds… He couldn't believe that a girl of her age could ever take such a mature decision … He wanted to salute her…

While Geet was nearly in tears remembering the condition in which she found Samrat… The number of bruises on his body and how hungry he was…

Maan engulfed her in a comforting hug… Slowly she calmed down… That's when Maan realized that it was time to tell her the truth… Whatever the consequences may be, she had full rights to know about it… He slowly broke the hug and said in a quite voice…

"Geet, jiss aurat sey tum itna nafrat karti ho… Jiss ne apney bete ko uss tarah mandir mein chho diya… woh…"

"Woh kya Maan??? Aap uss aurat ko jaante hain??? Kaun hai woh?? Kya naam hai uska???" Geet became hyper at the mention of her…

"Uss aurat ka naam hai Nandini Khurana…"