||Unchained Melody|| : NOTE - PG 89

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another DMG FF - this is NOT a Armaan/Riddhima FF.
To all my regular readers, please dont whack me with your chappals...I know you guys are waiting for an update of Beautiful Sin...which I assure will definitely happen...this is just a short story that I have been writing since a long time alongside my previous FF. Wont be too long...just a few chapters. Let me know if you like the prologue and if I should continue...




~Index ~

Prologue - Pg 1
Chapter 1 - Pg 2
Chapter 2 - Pg 4
Chapter 3 - Pg 6
Chapter 4 - Pg 9
Chapter 5 - Pg 11
Chapter 6 - Pg 12
Chapter 7 - Pg 14
Chapter 8 :Part 1 - Pg 16
Part 2 - Pg 18
Chapter 9 - Pg 21
Chapter 10 - Pg 22
Chapter 11 - Pg 24
Chapter 12 - Pg 27
chapter 13 - Pg 29
Chapter 14 - Pg 30
Chapter 15 - Pg 32(two parts)
Chapter 16 - Pg 34
Chapter 17 - Pg 37
Chapter 18 - Pg 39(two parts)
Chapter 19 - Pg 42
Chapter 20 - Pg 45
Chapter 21 - Pg 47
Chapter 22 - Pg 50
Chapter 23 - Pg 54
Chapter 24 - Pg 56
Chapter 25 - Pg 59
Chapter 26 - Pg 61
Chapter 27 - Pg 65
Chapter 28 - Pg 69
Chapter 29 - Pg 78


Unchained Melody

Prologue

The glittering moonlight washed in through the open windows, illuminating the otherwise dim room.
Sitting on her bed, she lazily watched the curtains as they rustled to the beats of the cool breeze sweeping into the room.
The moonlight travelled further into the room and fell onto her feet making her anklets twinkle like stars.
Pulling her feet closer, she removed the anklets and set them beside her on the bed.
Yet another supposed 'gift' from her husband for their third marriage anniversary...which happened to be today.
Unlike other marriages, this was not an occasion that was celebrated.
This was a painful reminder...a reminder of that day which had killed all her hopes, dreams and wishes...when things had spiralled so horribly out of control that to this day, she was still reeling from its effects.
Her fingers reached for the small diamond pendant resting on the hollow of her throat... all gifts given to her for their previous anniversaries...gifts she had never personally received from him...gifts she knew, had been arranged by her mother-in-law.
And yet she still wore them...because she knew it made her mother-in-law happy.
Because even though her mother- in-law had tried to hide it, she knew very well that it was her who had gotten those gifts, not her husband.
Resting against the headboard, she pulled the covers over her legs and glanced around the room which was barely illuminated by the moonlight filtering from outside.
Her haven...the only place she could let go of that strength that she had to carry with her at all times...the only place where she could let go.
Her mother-in-law always chided her for shrouding her room in such dim lights ...but how could she ever explain to her that the darkness always cloaked the harsh truths that always glared at her no matter where she looked.
Pushing herself lower, she lay down on the soft white sheets, her fatigued body instantly relaxing.
In a bid to forget what had happened on this day three years back, she usually made it a point to visit the children's orphanage. Surrounded, by the untainted innocence there, always instilled peace within her.
For those few hours, she could forget everything about her life and its complexities.
Today had been a particularly exhausting day.
Her eyes were aching to shut but she resolutely kept them open.
She couldnt sleep...not yet.
Not till she was sure he had reached home safely.
No matter how tired she was, she would never sleep without making sure he was safely home.
It had been that way since three years.
It didnt matter to her that they slept in different rooms...it didnt matter to her that he never checked on her like she did.
What mattered to her...was...him.
Her gaze was pulled towards the window as she heard the sound of tyres being against the wet ground.
Instantly she was on her feet heading to the window.
Standing hidden in the veil of the curtains, she peered out and her attention was immediately drawn towards the tall man stepping out of his car.
She watched him knowing his every movement by heart...he would first lock his car, then head over to the gates to talk to the security guard and then back to the car to check the locks again.
He walked towards the house and she moved away from the window as he entered inside.
Sitting on her bed, her ears picked up the sound of his shoes moving over the wooden staircase as he climbed the stairs.
She switched off the bedside lamp when she heard the soft sounds of his footsteps moving against the carpet in the corridor outside.
Lying back down on the bed, she closed her eyes when the sound of a door, being opened, reached her ears.
After a few seconds, the door shut with a soft click and she was instantly asleep.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg me frst...*sigh*its lyk a dream cum true!!😆
sidra i kno u shd hav cont ur old FF,,,cant tell u hw much im missing tht FF..

,,, bt nevermind sumthng s def better den nothing,,, n i must say u ve written it so beautifully i kno i cannot praise u as much as u desrve bt im so so happy to see ur writing again,,,,😊😳
oh dear i missed ths beautiful writings so much...
hope u continue soon n dnt frgt to PM me!!😳

wese i think d her is shilpa n him is sid here!!!*fingr crossed*actually i want thm here in ur SS!!😳
Edited by docnuss - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wndrful start..is it a sid riddhima ss?! Hope so:))thnx fr d pm,do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sidra YAY! You are writing again!

I love it... I want to know who it is the guessing is killing me but I feel it is a Sid and Shilpa SS 😆

Beautiful Sin does need an update but this has me hooked!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sidra I loved the start! So beautifull written!
And so mysterious...😳
Im so looking forward to reading the next part.
P.S. If I had to guess, then I think its an SR FF starting from the moment Ridhimma tried to kill herself on the day of her marriage. But then again I could be totally wrong! 😛
Edited by -Farrah- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazinggg sidra di
i hope its sid shilpa ff
i want them here n ya plss update beautiful sin ff
love the ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sidra.
Oh my god.


Thank you for the PM. I can safely say it is an absolute PLEASURE to have you back!
No word of a lie, I can't describe how happy I was when I saw your PM in my inbox, I've missed you so much.
Reading the SS and you can see why, brilliant start. As everyone, I would say Sid/Riddhima FF? Beautifully written, wonderful descriptions and settings with the moonlight room and the twinkle of the anklets. The concept of such lovely gifts which actually traumatise the female protagonist and represent a nightmare for her was so well developed. Yet she cares for her husband...it was a very interesting/exciting read! Loved every bit!

Love the title 'Unchained Melody' , and ofc missing updates on Beautiful Sin (I don't need to tell you that 😳)
Please do continue, no chappals, big hugs and a very warm welcome back!
Lots of love my dear! Hope you're well! xxx


P.S. I ADORE your dabba :) <33 xx
Edited by nm21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i guess it is SR ff...beautifully write...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow loved this first part really good please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayy ur back :D missed ur writing :(( Love the SS so far <3 Its quite interesting ;) hmm I guess its a SR SS :/ but then I could b totally wrong :P I want to know who it is so continue superrr soon ..

PS - Beautiful sin needs an update too :P

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