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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Dee very very cute update... loved anya in the update...😍

waiting for the next update dee...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
As usual,the update is really very nice👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
amazing yr plzzz plzzz jaldi jaldi se update karo na...i m eagerly waitng
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
nyc update...
w8ing 4 d nex chap...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
nice update dee...jaldi continue karo..m soo happy so many write ups are there in the forum nw..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Amazing update di 👏 👏 plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
thankq u all for yr comments and likes, i dont have enough time today so not thanking you one by one, but my thanks to all😊 have made an update continuing the earlier one, and updating it now.
as always fell free to tell yr coments.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Anant had thought that the presentation would be easy but here he was facing some problems as the situation given to him was a bit new. But he was ready to tackle it somehow, and he didn't realize that he had missed his lunch. He didn't notice the time . I t passed on, finaly it was about 4 in evening that he finished the work, by that time Mr rakesh also was busy with a meeting with board that he too completely forgot about anant. Anant once again went over through his presentations and then went to meet Rkesh, He was feeling a bit tired, he then looked at the clock and found that it had already been evening.

Sammay ka patha ni nahi chala, chalo , ab khana bhi nahi kha saktha, par muje bhoook lagi hai, kya karoo? Nahi pehle sir ke paas jatha hoon

And he went to meet him. When he knocked and came in, rakesh was getting ready for his food. Are anant tumare bare mein tho bhool hi gaya, mein meeting mei busy tha.

Anant- koi baat nahi sir, mei bhi iss kaam mei hi busy tha ahi abhi hi complete hua hai, sorry for the delay.

Rakesh koi baat nahi, meine socha tha kit um kal hi doge, par tum tho smart bhi ho.

Anant : tumhe hamara canteen acha laga, yahan sab food hai, kya hai na, mere employees ko mei kch bhi pareshaani nahi dena chahtha so that they do their work also well and happily.

Tahbi wo attendant rakesh ke liye khana leke aaya, are anant saab aap khana ghar se laye tha ,aapko canteen mei lunch ke liye nahi dekha

Anant hesitatingly told , nahi mei lunch karna bhool gaya.

Rakesh was surprised anant , ye kya kiya, tum khanaa !! are abhi abhi to teek huye ho aur, chalo, mei hi zimmedaar, muje bhi dekhna chahiye tha.

Anant nahi sir, mei kuch problems mei phass gaya ttha, presentation mei , issliye hool hi gaya

Rakesh: chalo acha hua, aaj muje khaane pe ek guest bhi mil gaya,

then to attendant: tum anant ke liye bhi khaana lagao, hum saath mei khayenge.

Anant nahi sir mei, canteen pe..

Rakesh ab meri baat ko nahi talo, tum yahan aao baito

Anant also joined him in his food and then they talked a lot while having their late lunch, anant was totally engrossed in rakesh's talks ki time ka patha hi nahi chala. He had started liking Mr rakesh and his way of behaviour, a big man but yet simple and satisfying, happy too. Rakesh spoke to him about his family snd business. He too was feeling quite free in front of anant.

After their food they discussed anant's presentation, rakesh was very much interested and satisfied with his work that he told it would be taken into being from next day onwards and also told anant to be a part of that project. Anant was also happy.

Dekha anant mene sahi decision liya tha, tumko iss ke liye chunke. Ok bye baatein kal karenge, ab tum nikalo, tum bhi se late ho, its already 8'o clock

Anant then only remembered the time, he felt very much worried for navya. He told haa, mei bhi, navya kya soch rahi hogi, nei chaltha hoon sir.

Tumhe chod doo.

Nahi sir mei khud jaoonga.

Ok anant I have one more meeting , sorry for today.

Nahi sir koi problem nahi.

To kal se tum as usal time pe aa jao, mei tumhe baaaki sab baad mei samjaonga

Ok sir.

Anant came out and ran to get an auto, he didnt want to waste any more time, worried of navya, he even forgot to make a call telling that he is on his way home.

Here navya was very much worried now, na jaane kya kya khayal aa rahe the man mein.

Navya was sure anant woud e back by 7 or 8 but now its more, what happened , call h nahi, she was thinking that I am simply worrying anant aa jayega

Phir bhi usska man itna tensed tha ki, khaana banana bhi bhool gayi. She was thinking about all that past experiences that she completely wanted to forget from her life.

It was lamost 9:30, she heard a knock at door, she ran to open that her foot hit on the side of point of the wall that was there at the wall.

She stood still for a moment for her toe pained very badly ,but She didn't bother , she opened it , a bright smile lit up her face when she saw anant there. Anant too was worried when it took time for the door to open.

He steped in , navya hugged him tightly ,anant itna late kya ho gaye, patha hai , mei kya kya soch rahi thi, sach mei dar gayi thi. Subah tumse number lena bhi bhool gayi

Anant: sorry sorry ,lo kaan pakkadtha hoon and hold his ears, mei kaam mei thoda zyada hi ghul gaya tha, jo work diya tha usse complete karne ke chakkar mei , sorry yaar and tightened his hug.

Muje patha hai meine tumhe bahut tension diya na, aur ohie rakesh sir se baatein ho rahi thi , issliye

Navya: koi baat nahi anant , kaam pe jaoge tho aisa hi hoga na, par mei hi bhudu hoon , kuch zyadaa hi soch gayi, sorry

Anant: agar tum meri phikar nahi karogi to hi mai naraaz hoonga, par tum phikar mat karo aainda se late nahi aaonga.

Navya: acha bolo , office kaisa tha.

Anant wanted some water and to change his dress too, but navya had hugged him so tightly and was talking , he understood her concern for him, she had missed him a lot that day. No calls , nothing, itne der tak, anant just stood there hugging her.

Haaan office acha tha, aur log bhi , mera presentation rakesh sir ko pasan hi aayaa, aur kal se kaam sambhalne ko kaha hai.

Navya: wow, congrats annat, leaving him chalo tumare liye kuc hmeeta lathi hoon, and left her hold, anant was smiling at his jhalli and her ways . intnaa tensed thi, aur ab ek moment mei lo

Navya kitchen jaa rahi thi, ki ruk gayi

Anant: kya hua navya?

Navya: anant daatonge tho nahi na?

Anant kya hua?

Navya: tumhare bare mein sochte sochte, tumhe aane ki der mei itna tensed thi ki khaana banana hi bhool gayi.

Anant: he gave a wide smile , tum bhi naaa . mue ahi khaana paroso. Tumhara pathi thakka hua hai, aur tum yahan maze le rahi ho?

Navya was now totally at the verge of crying, she was cursing herself for her deed , why did she forget to make food, anant itn thakka hua hoga ki bhook hi laga hoga

Navya: anant tum change kar lo, fresh ho jao, mein abhi banathi hoon.

Anant: understood that she was more tensed now, ) nahi muje nahi chahiye

Navya : anant please naaraz math ho and went to kitchen.

Anant : went back of her and hugged her and told her : madam mei naraaz nahi hoon, waise muje sorry bolna chahiye

Navya looked at him questioningly.

Anant: wo jab mei presentation dene gaya tho rakesh sir khaana kha rahe the, tho muje bhi khaane pe bulaya and we had it together, abhi kuch der pahle, muje bhook nahi hai. (he didn't tell her that he forgot his lunch ,nahi tho phir se tense ho jayegi. Usse patha tha navya usse kitna pyaaar karthi hai.)

Navya: ok , tum sach bol rahe ho na? ya phir muje happy arne ke liye?

Anant nahi baba, sachi muchi. And they both laughed together.

Par tumare liye kya he khaane pe?

Navya: mei kuch khaa loongi

Anant : nahi, chalo bahar chalte hai, wo chaat wale ke paas , tunhara pasadida chaat bhi ho jayega.

Navya: nahi anant, tum thakke ho, fresh ho jao aur so jao.

Anant: mei khaana soona isske alawa kuch aur nahi kar saktha kya? Chalo abhi chalo, tumhare pati ka order hai.

Navya: ok ok , mei chlathi hoon

They both went out to chaatwala round the corner of their street, had their favorite chaats fed each other and was on their way back. Anant was quite happy that day ki jab ussne ek chota sa park dekha to wahan chala gaya

Navya: ab kahan jaa rahe ho anant:

Anant: are navya, ye park tho yahan nahi dekha pehle

Navya: tha , par tumne notice nahi ki hogi. Chalo ab ghar chalthe hai.

Anant: nahi chalo pehle and went in holding her hand. Anant was tire d too , he went and lay down on the grassy lawn , people were taking their small night walks inside after dinner . kids were there too.

Navya: anant tum kya kar rahe ho? Ghar jake so jao na. tum bahut thakk gaye ho. Tumhari aankhen dekho

Anant: nahi , iss tarah khule aasmaan ke neeche letna kitna acha lagtha hai

Navya sat besides him. She was feeling happy that anant was happy .

Anant: kitnaa acha lagtha hai na jab saare tare aise hume hi dekthe rahe tho.hai na navya ?

haan she told and was caressing his hairs .he was looking at navya. Navya was feeling more shy now, she couldn't look at him. Anant was just staring at her and he held her hand and gave a soft kiss on her palm

Navya : blushing, anant ye park hai, log hai yahan pe.

Anant tho? Mei unhe thodi na kiss kar raha hoon, mei tho apni pyaari si bivi ko hi pyaar kar rah hoon, and slowly pulled her towards him. She too wanted to be with him as she missed him very badly today.

Itne mei navy ka phone baja\;

Anant : yeh jo bhi invent kiya hai na, ussne pyaar hi nahi kiya hoga nahi tho isse invent hi nahi kartha, har waqt beech mei tapak jaatha hai.

Navya gave a hearty laugh and attended the call. It was appy: are itne jaldi so gaye kya, yaa phir ghar pe nahi ho? Kahan ho tum dono?

Navya: kya hua appy?

Appy : hum teeno tumhare ghar ke bahar hai, kahan ho?

Navya : hum yahi hai, bahar paas mei, ruko, abhi aate hai and she cut the call. Anant understood now it was them. Lo ab haddiyon ko bhi aana tha. Mere saath hi aisa kyun hotha hai.

Navya was laughing: anant: haso haso, wo theeno yahan rukne ke liye tho nahi aaye hi na? tumhe raat ko soothe waqt bathatha hoon. Chalo nahi tho appy nahi toofaan aa jaayenga. And they went to their flat

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
such a nice update and you finished this update at a very interesting juncture, eagerly waiting for the next update dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
superb update di. 👏 loved it. u tuk care of everythng except one. 😭 no anya scene. bt y d gang came at ths tym! 😕 intersting stop hanh di. i juz cant wait long to read next chap nw.. update asap.. 😛
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