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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amanda_18

This is awesome...😉

Thanks amanda...

appreciate ur efforts in still continuing wiht our home forum 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot anu, Glad that u liked the update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seema12345

good update !!!!!!!!!!

Thanks a lot seema ji 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chayya55

good update waiting for next one

hahahha I wonder that there are still people who wait for my bak baks.

But really loved to listen it dear and I will update today
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: goolab

nice update wait for next one

Thanks a lot goolab,

missing u all a lot. 😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u usha ji.

How are ur studies

Missing u a lot...😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Great One!!


Update Soon😉

Thanks a lot li...

always love ur efforts in coming here reading my ff and commenting .

Hope u keep ur relation wiht radev in the same way...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Friends , Missing u all and haan please please, forgive me for not updatign for a long time, First I had a connection problem and later my computer crashed from Now I will be back... and will try to update all my updates weekly twice , as much as i can, by the way I am inot my medical school and classes start from august first so u should congratulate me.😉 and haan be ready for my tortures as I will give only long updates from now, becoz I my self gets lost and keep on typing when it comes to radev... Hope u like this part, this part continues from where Radhika faints in Bharka's b'day party and the convo between RB and Radhika, upto now u see radhika having small troubles, last update did give u people some clue about Radhika's sufferign and this update will give more clues.


Part-17

RB continued to stroke the hair of Radhika and Radhika closing her eyes relieve said "U didn't leave ur this way RB"

RB smiled and said "How can when its Radhika"

Radhika:Sorry RB u might have tensed a lot na

RB:Kya hua, aaj kisne daanta meri bubbly ko(What happened, who scolded my bubbly today)

Radhika now moved her self into the lap of rb she was feeling the relief which she used to in the lap of her mother " RB kya main itni buri hun"(RB am I that bad)

RB remained silent stroking her head...

Radhika:Kyun RB kay main itni buri hun. Why every one hate me RB. Badi maa , maamaji, Bharka , why every one hate me.

RB:aisa kuch nahi Radhika(Nothing like that)

Radhika:Aisa hi hain Rb, u know yesterday Badi maa scolded me for coming vrindavan today mng maamaji scolded me for coming here. Why can't I decide a thing, why don't have that freedom which I should have. Even If i smile they can't bear Why?

RB: They are jealous of u Radhika, they are jealous of u that u smile despite of their baffling on u, they are jealous on u because u try to search happiness in their scoldings too. Nahi Radhika u should not be weak like this, u always had been strong and u used to. There were much worser times n ur life then also u are strong. Today I am with u, vishaka is with u, ur shanthi is with u, ur amma is with u, these many people are with u. Every one loves u Radhika. U can't be hated by any one.

Radhika:But they does na

RB:chodo, leave them and think that they aren't worthy. U said me that these are not worthy to see u in ur beautiful dresses na, in the same way...

Radhika:But they are acting RB

RB:U too scold them show them what the hell will be. U are independent dear, ur mummy left u independent be that and show them what u wanna show.

Radhika: Kyun RB kyn mujhe aisa lag raha ki main humesha haarungi(Don't know why, but it feels like I will loose). Today even Bharka also scolded me RB

RB:Kyiun vusko kya hua.(What happned to her)

Radhika:She scolded me becoz I wore a good dress and looking a bit beautiful.

RB: I will see her.

Radhika:Nahi RB chodo, I am feeling all alone for once, don't know why. Aaj mujhe mummy bahut yaad aa rahi hain(I am rememberign mummy a lot) . I wanna cry, I missing her but I can't

RB: Radhu aisa nahi, teri mumma humesha tere saath hain. Main kya bolti hun tumse dekho teri mumma tujhse bahut pyaar karti hain, shayad vutna pyaar vo apni pati se bhi nahi karliya hogi, vutna pyaar karti hain(Nothing like that radhu, see what i say u always, ur mumma love u a lot, she loves u more than she does wiht her self ir her husband. ). She will never leave u, at least as long as u find a substitute for her and ur ddji.

Radhika remained silent...

then Rb heard a bang on door, Radhika immediately moved herself on to the bed and RB opened the door. Radhika closed her eyes as if sleeping. RB looked and it was soniya.

Soniya came in and said "Jaan come out, they wanna see u, why u are wasting u time here."

RB:Kya

Soniya:Nope this girl a normal ladki, why u stayed with her, u should have left a servant.

RB gave a mocking smile and said "I can never expect any thing much more than this from u, any how her mother is my class mate and I know her. and for heaven sake please leave me alone, "

Soniya: RB called u she wanna speak to u.

RB:Tell her to call for my mobile and now can u leave,

Soniya:I don't had any interest to stay over here, I am however leaving. Please attend her warna she will become a devil.

RB:tum meri beti ke baarein mein, achi tarah bolenge(U will talk good about my daughter)

Soniya:Remember she is my daughter too and I had every rihgt on her as u have.

RB:NO she isn't ur daughter and u had no right on her, u lost it before 15 years itself ,. Now please leave

Soniya growled at him and left off.

RB again closed the door and Radhika woke up sitting and looked at him "Kyun Rb vusko humesha aisa daant te ho, vusko bhi ek chance de do na:"(Why u always scold her, u can give her a chance right)

RB:U know what she did to ruby and vishaka, I can never for give her. U don't tense abt all this and u sleep I will call RUBY and come back.

Radhika:RB kya mujhe mera ghar tak chodoge.(Will u leave me at my home)

RB:Kya aisi haalat mein. (What? In this condition)

Radhuika:Nahi Rb I can't even stay here a minute. I am feeling worse of my self. Please...

RB: Okay I will talk to RV and will take u. Don't worry.

Radhika smiled and stayed there on her bed/She soon fell a sleep,

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The party was on full swing...

Rohan went near RP

RP looked at him and said "Bolo Rohan"

Rohan:Ddji I think ...

RP:Rohan aaj tere shagun hone waali hai(Rohan today, is ur shagun)

Rohan:Kya

RP:Haan ur surprise, U like it right

Rohan:I hate it. I know u will do some thing like this

RP:Kya hua(What happened)

Rohan:I will marry the girl u show me., but actually today see that girl felled down and see Raj uncle he was looking disturbed, He won't like it now.

RO:Fine I will ask Raj If he agree u shouldn't deny

Rohan:Okay ddji

RP went near RV who was standing there and kept his hand on his shoulder.

RV looked around and said "Boliye RPJI"

RP;Kya socha aapne. Shaadi ka announcement kare(What do u think, will we announce marriage)

RV:Uncle I am really sorry but can we post pone it. actually aaj mujhe kuch jyaada hi apshagun aaya hain(I think today I have some bunch of bad omens)

RP:Okay RV I know u will say it.

RV;Thanks uncle.

RP:Good Now I will leave and what abt that girl

RV:She was sleeping. She had some serious head ache I think

RP:Careful she is a stranger to u don't forget that.

RV:I left jeeju there.

RP:Koun vo rishikesh.

RV:Uncle I think I can believe him.

RP:if u think okay. But have a look on her

RV:Sure uncle.

Some one called RV and he left...
RP went to Soniya who was there and talked to her "Hey soniya"

Soniya:Uncle boliye

RP:what happened to ur bro

Soniya:Don't ask me, aap jaante hain vo pooja ghar mein ek kanha ki madir ko sthapith kiya(U know, he kept a Kanha mandir in our house)

RP:What the hell happening, he didn't tell me

Soniya:He didn't told us to, and the most surprising part was mumma supporting him

RP:U are giving me shocks. She was always supportive, but now a days looks like some realization striking him which shouldn't

Soniya:I know, that's why I am using Bharka. If ever he bring back that girl sure Bharka will be the one to murder her.

RP:And that girl some name. Radhika like that, what with her. Teri pati toh vus par kuch jyaada hi concern ho raha hain

Soniyta:I don't care for him.; I am happy

RP: I know, but what if ever she was the one. U know ur husband know who was that girl and every thing abt her. She was in only touch with ur husband

Soniya:I know, but she can't be this girl was more innocent but that girl u know she made us drink gallops of water at age of 11 it self and also she was Physically handicapped

RP: Ph yeah I remember, I forgot that and doctors told then itself that it can't be cured. She can't be

Soniya:Agree but Rohan was more concerned than RB, u see with ROHAN

RP: she was his class mate, and he was more concerned for his friends na, that's it.

Soniya: She studied with him only till 10th if what he said was right. But till he remember abt her and her disease, isn't it odd.

RP:agree I will try to know abt his friends from Padma, she knows and she will say me

Soniya: I know u are using Padma indirectly, please don't spill ur beans.

RP:U too don't spill ur beans with Bharka,

Soniya smirking and said :Wo toh aap mujh par chodiye, Bharka can never got out from my hand

RP:over confidence isn't necessary

Soniya:I am n't over confident, but u see, what I say is right

RP:hope so...
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The party completed and all left off including Rohan and Dev. Dev got a key to the house from Rohan and Rohan left off along with Padma. RB insisted to leave but on demand of RV he stayed. RV and RB are in lawn with a drink bottle and two glasses in front of them

RB:Vishaka aur Ruby kaise hain

RV:Thik hain

RB:aur ...

RV:aur...

RV:U know what I am asking

Rb: ohhh she was fine

RV: Where is she now.

RB:RV u know I won't tell u how many times will u ask me.

Rv: I will ask u even infinite times for my daughter

Rb: She doesn't think , she treats u as her enemy. Let her be

Rv: I know I did a wrong but why is she punishing me in such a drastic way. any how she had to some to me

Rb: U are hell bent? why can't u let her in her peace

RV:What are u saying RB? and p[peace where is the peace in her life? Getting taunting s and unrealistic rumors form her mothers sisters. I know abt her she can't even bear a wrong word abt her, then how can she bear all these.

RB: will She bear u? She even can't bear u too and if ever u take her here na, she will die for sure.

RV: I love her and u know that well, I am even ready to kill those bas***ds for torturing her.

RB:RV it may sound harsh but then u had to kill ur self first than any one

RV:what are u saying?

RB: Yes Rb, she stayed there for 11 years even before she know u., she dreamed every day that her father is like this, like that and so on... but when she met u reality came to her, she came to know what type of a person are u.. Then she cried, cried a loud. crying from then till today every day becoz of u. even with them she may not cried for one day, but with u she was crying every day. She was crying for her mother becoz f u...

RV:Its not becoz of me... Vydehi didn't die becoz of me. I didn't kill her,

RB:BUt she thinks u did, Even if she know it wasn't u that makes no difference to her. becoz Vydehi died for u.

RV:But I was the one who gave birth to her.

RB:what birth RV, what birth? u didn't even brought up her for one day. what u did for her. U don't know what is her aim, or ambition or what is she, whats her behavior, and what she likes. U came to know now that she likes Kanha. that too becoz of me. what else u know abt her. When ever u ask abt her u ask where s she? but u never ask what is she? U say u love her but U never even bother to know abt her. agree one day she come to u, but will she adjust with u. U didn't even know what she eats and what she doesn't eat. then what with u RV then how can u claim a right on her.

RV:But I am her father. She didn't give me a chance

RB: Did u know she wouldn't have given u a chance. did u ever try. If u really love her u would have tried every day to reach her but no RV, U need a girl to say as ur daughter. U need a girl to mention as Princess U had Bharka right, no one even knows that u even had a daughter on ur own. So please leave her please leave her in rest. She had a beautiful world, don't try to enter into that. She may not be happy always but she was happy some times there, but here she wasn't happy not even a day. Please RV I plead u leave her.

RV: Can I ask u a thing

RB: Did I ever stop u?

RV: what if one day u know that Ruby or Vishaka doesn't love u and they wanna come back to Soniya, will u leave them off.

RB smiled and said "If ever they think I will let them off, despite off maintaining all my responsiblities as a father. RV don't foget, Ruby aur Vishaka ki bach pan mein vun logon se pooch kar hi maine mere saath lekar gaya. If they even come to me today and tell me "Dad, We don't want u , we want mumma. I will let them go off.""

RV: Bolne ke liye bahut aasan hota hain.

RB: don't forget yaar, jolly ko vuski 5th year tak yaha hi choda maine. Becoz he wished to, but when he wanna return off I took him off with me.

RV: how is jolly.

RB: trying to learn Indian culture

RV laughed : Tera beta aur Indian culture,

RB: kyun RV aren't they worth

RV: no no, I saw Vishaka once she was just like a girl imported form america.

RB smiled and "RV! wearing parikini or ghagra or sarreee it self doesn;t make a girl Indian. She has to know our culture our traditions, whom to respect and all, In that case I can proudly say that Vishaka was best. Wearing a middy doesn't make her american. "

RV: I am sorry

RB: No RV u needn't say me sorry, u are that 11 years boy who fought wht me for his bat for ever

RV: U still had that

RB: yeah that bat brought me a good friend and 3 beautiful and good children can i ever throw that off.

Rv smiled with the slowly getting subconscious state of the alchol...

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Dev was sitting in his room...

He was looking at the moon in the sky.He was talking to himself "Kyun Radhu, kyun . Kya hua tumhe. Why did u feel like that"

"Radhu, I saw a type of anger in ur eyes, when u had to talk with RV ji which I saw in the eye of Rohan when u fall down. Whats it."

"Is that what Vishaka said was right????????/ No I always prayed god let it be the story as u said one abt me. Please I can't bear if it come true."

"Becoz if it comes through, one day u will never be a normal girl. U will leave leave from ur world forever. U can't be that simple radhika whom I adore, U too will become another bharka. I wanna always u to be Radhika not Bharka."

"Please Kanha. Even though if it was true never let her go away,,,,, please let her be happy in her beautiful world."
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Radhika woke up in a jerk and she watched the clock to find the time to be 3:am in the mng. She came out to see RB and RV sleeping in the lawn itself with bottles in front of them. She went near RB and woke him up.

RB woke up at a jerk "Radhu tum, " and saw at the bottles and said "I didn't drink a lot, but felt sleep early. I took only 2."

Radhika glared at him and said "Mamaji aapki gaadi ka keys de do na, kal mng vrindavan aake collect karo"

RB:tum lekar jaavungi.

Radhika:Koi shaq

RB:nahi Radhika, teri tabiyat.

Radhika:U know abt me, will u give or shall I call Rohan

RB:nahi don't call him, it will be a problem, but u don't know driving

Radhika:I learnt car recently, don't fear. Give keys.

RB hesitatingly gave her keys and taking them she smiled.

RB: acha suno, teri phone and cover waha hain

Radhika;I know, and haan if ever any one ask say that I left in boat early mng.

RB:okay, be careful

Radhika:Sure.

Radhika left and RB looked at her and thought to himself "I know u can't stay here even for a miute, but why I doesn't know u stayed to day for 8 hrs. Its strange."

Radhika started the car and left on the highway road towards vindavan,. In way she saw the place where the mela was there, and thought to herself "what the variety this life was, I like u a lot, but becoz its in Rawal I didn't agree to come here, but today I am leaving the very rawal after staying a night here."

Radhika increased the speed of the car and left...

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Thank u all for liking my updates 🤗 Hope u are not feeling bored, i am trying my best to keep up difference in all the three ff's I am writing at a time. But still I am fearing wether people are liking them or not. feel free to yeel at me ur things becoz I would love to read critics.

and haan many are asking me regarding relation between Rohan and radhika.. Their relation may be considered as love by some one, but no way its only radev love and radhika-Rohan friendship I promise it. Every individual needs a best friend in their life along with love, and that best friend for Radhika was Rohan.

I will try to do nest part in 4 or 5 days in between I may come up wiht an update to Intezaar and Pyaar ki ek kahani

With love

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Posted: 13 years ago

where were anju? missed ur update alot. i juz lovd. so cute. continue soon! it was amazing. gud job👍🏼

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