Poem#3 : My Dark Journey ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guy's here's my third try !!
Do tell how's it ..??

@ Vinita di ! c me chotu oly ..

Love ya all
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Poem : My Dark Journey ....

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I walk ahead ...

With my crumbled heart ..Having numerous folds..

Each was filled with pain and sufferings..

On a never-ending...long and lonely road .. only pain it beholds ..

Bathed in evil darkness..Not a single respite ..

High hope's are crashing ..so precise ..

Am I still alive ..???

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I walk and walk ...



So uneasiness..

Am I afraid to step further ..???

No never ..!!!! i decided..

Just keep walking ..! there will be an "End "

End to this quest ..end of this war ..

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My eye's are paining now ..

The only thing which I feel is the stubborn ground beneath ..

Those chilly flakes of wind are embracing me ..

It's cold , too cold ..

Making it hard to breathe , hard to beleive ..

Am I still alive ..???


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I walk unconditionally , undirectionally ...

I cry for a touch ...

There's no body ..just me and this darkness..

It's an hour now , and still it's dark ...

I wander ...
Am I still alive ..??

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My eye's are heavy ...My lashes now hurt ..

My heart ..??? it's still ..motionless ..

" C'mon at least you don't stop .." i prayed ..

No reply yet again ..


The emotions are full ...I need to cry out ...

This darkness is now bugging me out ..

Drinking every blood drop I had ..

Will ever this quest end ..??

M alone ...All alone ...

Wait .!! " Am i really all alone ..." i questioned ..
No you aren't ...!! , This sweet darkness is with you ..!


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Ohh!! how i loved it's company ..

This darkness eat all i had ..

My love for life ..my patience ..

My muscles, my bones' , my faith . my nerves ..
everything ..

I'm left with nothing

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My sobs went unheard ..

Lost somewhere in the air ..

Can ? anyone suck this air out of this place now ..?

I need to experience , the pain of suffocation ! Does it hurts , how .???

All my cries are lost in air ..

Each scream , Each cry ..

Where they went?? ..

I want to scream loud ..

To make my way out ..

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But with a sudden flash my quest for light finally end's..

Oh !! finally i'm heard ..


"C'mon girl wake up " my mom said ..

I opened my eye's ..

Still pounding hard ..

Those sweat droplets on my forehead were real ..

My cheeks they were wet ..
Really ..

It was the worst journey i ever had ...

**
Upasna


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...

loved it... u know the words u described they were beautiful...

the journey undertaken ... u know i felt like woh split screen mein tv pe dikhate hain na bilkul vaisa...

teri ek strip ki yaad dila di,... u ska naam nhi yaad aa rha...

awesome writer u are yaarr...

sahi me coming for classes...

thought ki its from both pov but thne ma waking up so kria's pov but it was both...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭abselutely minblowing poem beautifully written!!👏it make my eyes wet😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome yaar🤗
abhi me tera wo wala naam nahi le rhi warna teri yaha beizzati ho jaati🤣🤣
i loved ur poem yaar😃
keep writing more😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maha_Naksh4ever

😭abselutely minblowing poem beautifully written!!👏it make my eyes wet😭

maha !!!🤗 roi roi kyu ???? 😆:P

Tenkew !!!! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: srkfan4ever

awesome yaar🤗
abhi me tera wo wala naam nahi le rhi warna teri yaha beizzati ho jaati🤣🤣
i loved ur poem yaar😃
keep writing more😃

HEHHE!!! yahan lena b mat 😡 😭 me itni innocent si bachchi ko badnaam kr rakha h wahan !!!!! 😳

tenkew divi
!!!! bas aise hi raha kr ..us name ko use kare bina teri posts kitni achchi lagti h !!😉 😆 🤣

Tenkew !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasna_mishti

HEHHE!!! yahan lena b mat 😡 😭 me itni innocent si bachchi ko badnaam kr rakha h wahan !!!!! 😳


tenkew divi
!!!! bas aise hi raha kr ..us name ko use kare bina teri posts kitni achchi lagti h !!😉 😆 🤣

Tenkew !!

arre me tujhe iss forum pe badnaam nahi karna chahti🤣🤣
kis innocent bacchi ki baat kar rhi hai tu😲🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: upasna_mishti


maha !!!🤗 roi roi kyu ???? 😆:P

Tenkew !!!! 🤗


mai samjhi tum mar gayi😭🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maha_Naksh4ever


mai samjhi tum mar gayi😭🤣

🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: srkfan4ever

arre me tujhe iss forum pe badnaam nahi karna chahti🤣🤣
kis innocent bacchi ki baat kar rhi hai tu😲🤣🤣

ahem ahem !!! 🤣 ab ma kya bolu !!

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