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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey everyone😊

Inspired by Nimmo's current situation😭, I wrote this little poem that sort of describes her current situation. Please do leave comments and let me know what u all think...since this is my first attempt😳...Here goes...

My heart is broken again

You are leaving, I can see you go

O how dearly I love you

If only, there was someway you could know

Why does this always happen to me?

I love someone...But I am told "we are not meant to be!"

I try to explain to my heart again and again

That I should be happy for you and not feel this deep pain

To the world I am ur wife

But, I know only by contract and not for life

Soon we will separate and be apart

We both will walk the opposite way

But you and your love shall always remain in my heart

And the memories of you will never fade away.

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ritu29 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey nice poam...it was gr8 for a first attempt.... 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG! OMG! that was so beautiful! I love the poem a lot 👏

Great job 👏
Pls do write some more for the forum 😊

Naina

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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyy it is reallly nice and soo true 👏

devi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey nice simple and sweet. ur poem is as beautiful as the feeling nimmo has for his love.
so 3 cheers for u,hip hip hurray
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice yaar.awesome 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its a gr8 peom...suits her situation perfectly
...i just luved it
😛 😳 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwww dats a cutest poem i have ever heard 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks everyone, your comments are really encouraging...I will definately try and write some more poems for nimmo as the show goes on...THANKS ONCE AGAIN 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really awessome......
gr8 even i kyk writin 'em

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