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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey

We all know that many are upset about how the current storyline is going.

I request u all to post your message for the writers of the show here as this will be shown to them...


Regards I-F DEV TEAM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nadii...thnk u very much for this thread...
we needed this...
acha...is there any Time limit or so...i mean...by when should i post my msg...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Writers,

Thanks for reading our suggestions. I was very happy to see Kunal starting to take center stage again. However I have been very disappointed with the way he has been investigating the case. He is repeating the same mistakes he was making before. He is being over confident and careless while preparing and not doing due justice to the case. Thakral is always one step ahead of him and he seems to believe things will fall into place. As a result he is now in a situation where he will end up in jail and Siddhi will have to bail him out. This seems like a repeat of the rape case track and is very disappointing. That may very well be the reason for the falling TRPs.

Rather than showing Siddhi take center stage again, please show this as a temporary setback to Kunal. Let him get out with Siddhi's help and then let them together investigate and get to the bottom of the "murder" mystery. We want to see husband and wife as a thinking team rather than one which is constantly bickering.

I understand that Siddhi has promised Veena to take care of Kunal and Veena will feel upset about Kunal ending up in jail and blaming Siddhi for it. All this stress in Siddhi's life may cause her to miscarry. If that's the case, please show Kunal supporting Siddhi in this difficult time and the two of them staying together despite difficulties, rather than the usual track of misunderstandings and separation/divorce.

Thanks for reading.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for this thread,...

I would like to appreciate CV's for having shown kunal chopra in full swing for the past few weeks...
I must say Parichay has been more realistic... The dialogues are awesome and all the cast and crew have been doing a wonderful job...
My main concern is
I want KC to take care of everything in his life...
He has got his identity back in the form of Siddhi...
Now let him drive the way and let siddhi just be the support he need whenever he is out of track...

Now let him show the takrals that he can gain all what he had lost in the past especially in the professional front...

Let SINAL work together... and sort out all the difficulties in their life...
They have been shown to understand each other so well that we will not be able to tolerate any kinda separation or miscarriage...

There can be many more beautiful tracks that can be shown other than richa always wanting kunal back in life...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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please please CVs ,want to see Kunal fighting the case and winning it with the help of Sidhi and don't want to see the rape case being repeated again, it was illogical and enough of naari shakti.. ..Want Kunal out of the jail and investigating and fighting..Please Cvs don't let us down..You gave us hope with what yo showed us in past 2 weeks , keep the good work ..don't forget it is a male centric show, that's what you promised..Let Kunal take charge of the situation..please Cvs..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I belong to that segment of the audience who welcomed female oriented soaps a decade back when it was first introduced but today 10-12 years later are exhausted from seeing the same story , same tracks being repeatedly enacted by different faces under different banners.So my first plea to you would be please do not tread that path.🤢

EK made 'The Dirty Picture' which was a thoroughly woman oriented flick in an otherwise male dominated industry and had phenomenal success too , so why can't we have something similar on television, at least an humble unadulterated attempt?😕

Expectation from Parichay was , is and will always remain the same "KUNAL CHOPRA" , we adore the character so it's immensely disappointing to see him not get his due.If it was to see 'NARI-SHAKTI' we could just tune in to any one of those other numerous shows but we tune in to Parichay because we want to see that man bask in his deserved glory!

The serial did have its bad days with the illogical and not wanted pregnancy track , poor handling of the rape case, when talking about the rape case I would like to clarify something , I have seen many articles say it fetched good TRP's , it did but it was not because Siddhi was pleading in court rather than presenting the case, it was because we kept waiting for Kunal Chopra to step in till the very last minute and play the final stroke but that was not to be and we were mighty disappointed.What also made us sit through the track was how beautifully Kunal-Siddhi relation was handled at that stage.So please do not presume Nari-Shakti got you the numbers.😕

If you look at the dip in TRP's you will realise that happened when Kunal was shown jobless and also least worried about finding a job or keeping one and focus was shifted from Kunal to Gaurav's extra-marital affair.Well it did make Kunal accept responsibility verbally but we saw less or no action.

Then you started bring the show back on focus, the murder mystery track even though Kunal was jobless was accepted because Kunal donned his black robe again , Kunal supported and handled his hormone wrecked wife .That week the TRP's did not dip it stayed put even though it did not climb .Many viewers who left the show have been known to be contemplating a return because finally sense seemed to prevail.😊

I won't say Kunal's investigation has been shown up to the mark , I sometimes feel Kunal is being shown a bit careless and over confident which does not sit right with the character evolution that should have ideally happened.Just to show Thakral smart please do not downplay Kunal's brilliance.

We know Kunal is going to be behind bar's soon enough but what I hope to see is Siddhi perhaps help him secure bail and then Kunal should take up the reins once again with renewed vengeance and a pledge to be intelligent !Veena going bonkers over Kunal's incarceration , Siddhi's already complicated pregnancy and stress could lead to a miscarraige , which I have no issues with as long Kunal-Siddhi braves it out together.Them being separated , divorcing or having misunderstandings is not acceptable , for a change we would like to see the husband and wife work together as a team and live their life!!😃

We still have hopes of seeing Kunal Chopra's Parichay out in the open and not hiding behind cute Siddhi Chopra!!!😉 Hopefully we won't be disappointed this time around!!!😃

P.S:Get rid of the new Richa!!! Can't stand her😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Writers,

First of all...we'd like to thank u all for creating d characters Kunal and Sidhi. Thank u very much for portraying different kinds of family relations(brother-sis, sasur-bahu, chachu-bhateeji,jhethani-devrani) in a beautiful way

Coming to Point...post EMA Track...you have started to focus more on KUNAL CHOPRA.Thank u very much for that.But as per the latest promo, we feel that CVs are trying to use to Naari Shakti Concept once again...Please dont introduce this track..just for the sake of TRPs.
Instead of Sidhi using her brains, you can show Kunal guiding her to collect Proofs and help her in the investigation. Seema-Gaurav and Vikram-Raveena can also be shown helping them.

Since past two weeks, we all have been enjoying each and every bit of this current track.So don't disappoint us..

And ya, i wish you dont bring up unwanted twists like the Cancer track, Miscarriage ans kunal-sidhi separation...plz show something logical. the masses may not accept logical tracks in d beginning but later if u handle them properly...then every one would love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Given that I am not trained in the art of scriptwriting, I will refrain from telling the writers how to do their jobs, however, as a viewer I will tell them what (IMO) is lacking & what I would like to see.

What I find lacking...

1) There is no story, not even a basic "road-map". Next weeks episodes are based more on this weeks ratings than on the subject in question.

2) The main characters are not fleshed out. They lack a consistent "voice" or a "persona". Kunal stealing evidence from the lab & hitting a woman does not fit in with his transformation.

3)There is no depth or fluidity in the writing. Lines mouthed by the characters, appear shallow & trite & often have no bearing on future episodes.


What I would like to see...

"At first there is a problem"... all great stories are about problem solving & transformation, but creating a fresh metaphor, to explain an age old concept is the crux of good story telling.
What I would like to see is something you have not written before.

D.K Thakral professionally & Richa personally, posed the overt threat causing the problems that led to Kunal's misfortune. However, the original promos suggested the story of Kunal fighting his own internal demons to resolve the crisis within. How Kunal fights the Thakrals should only be part of the story, not the story itself.
The key to a fresh metaphor is the angle you tell the story from. tell it in any sequence, so long as you stay relevant to the larger story.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Creatives plz do justice to yr proffession -dnt just thrust tracks with no links just 4 the sake of trp z.U Know yr wrk well n various suggestions hav been given earlier but all in vain.Even though k.c is brought to centre but the reasn was falling trp's.Hope our suggestions wrks this time.Hoping,waiting n watchng is what many r doing 4 parichay.But wnder for hw lng it will last.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You promis story of gold medalist kunal chopra an then show story of stupid kunal. how will show do well? it has become without head or tail running aroun in circel same case wti thakrals again an again. an always kunal is showed foolish. wot journey they showed of kunal? in first epi he was jobless today still jobless. for saas bhau audience they must show gr8 wife siddi, ok I dont mind but why kunal can also not be gr8. out of couple only wife can be clever not both? feel like laughin wen Kc say Kunal chopra yeh karega woh karega an all, an then he does nothing.

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