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Posted: 13 years ago
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To whom it may concern:

First of all, I would like to thank you for making this show interesting enough for the first 6 months for us to enjoy it immensely. Now getting to the real business, firstly I would like to request you to please give us what we were promised before the start of this show - Kunal Chopra's Parichay. When the initial Promos of this show were aired, we only saw Kunal in all those promos indicating this show being different than all the other shows and being a male oriented show. However, as the story progressed, the show started to become more of a female oriented (Nari-Shakti) show when there was no female was shown in any of the 20 promos that were aired before the start of the show. So I am curious to know how did writers focus shifted from male lead to female lead's character being the prime character? Why is it we see that, whenever there an issue or problem in Chopra family, it is the female lead who emerges as the savior making Kunal seem like a brainless, insensitive idiot? I request you to please always remember that this show was advertised as Kunal Chopra's Parichay and as long as the show runs Kunal should be the object of prime focus.

Second, this show has become so illogical and intolerable of late specially from the writing point of view that it's hard for us to even turn into this show at 9:30pm on daily basis. I must say the makers of the show are really lucky to have Samir Soni in this show because of whom most of us are still tuning in to the show or else we would have said goodbye to this show long time ago.

Coming to the illogical track that irritated us the most was Siddhi's illogical pregnancy. I used to wait for this show anxiously until the day we heard the announcement of Kunal-Siddhi having a baby. You folks are writers hence very intelligent individuals so tell me one thing, how can someone's pregnancy survive after going though all Siddhi went through during her the kidnapping track? having taken the bullet, falling from the mountain cliff, and going though a major surgery hence loosing substantial amt of blood? To top it off, in this time and age her pregnancy was being confirmed by a Dai ma instead a proper medical professional?

Thirdly, I haven't enjoyed any of Kunal-Siddhi romantic scene after Siddhi's pregnancy because I was anticipating to see an intense and passionate romance between Kunal-Siddhi immediately following Kunal's confession and then the pregnancy being announced If it really had to be shown😕. Anyways, what was the need of showing Siddhi pregnant so soon in the story? Kunal doesn't have any job at current in conjunction with supposedly bearing the responsibility of his entire household by himself, so at a time like this is Kunal having a baby really a wise move? I don't think so😒.

Talking about Kunal's job, why is he being shown jobless for so long? Post Gaurav's departure from Chopra household, Isn't Kunal the lone bread earner of the the Chopra family? Yet he has been jobless ever since? Does it even make any sense writing wise? We have seen Kunal making big promises to so many people at many occassions, but has never lived up to his promises why? When Gaurav left and Seema's father and brother came to fetch her, Kunal stopped them from doing so by telling them that he will take care of Seema and her children - how is he really taking care of them being jobless?The worst part is Kunal is taking charity (House Rent and Kids' fees money, bail money etc) from the same person (Vikram) who he made the promise to take care of Seema and her kids😉. I must say, this is very weak characterization of Kunal and we are not pleased with it at all. Please show Kunal Chopra a man of his words and a person who keeps his promises. We want to see Kunal as a dignified and self respected man.

Last but certainly not the least, please show Kunal's professional life as part his second chance in life. We have seen his love story as a part of his second chance - how the new woman in his life changes his life completely, but now it's time to move on from that as his wife shouldn't be shown as the only thing as his second chance at life, but that should also include the rise of his professional life yet we are still seeing him jobless😒?

We enjoy Kunal-Siddhi nok-jhok, but please use them only at places where they seem to fit and not at places where they sound irritating and seem unneeded. At this point of Kunal-Siddhi relationship, I would like to see some maturity in their relationship as appose to always showing their silly nok-jhok specially from Siddhi's side. Prior to their confession, the nok-jhok seemed natural, but now showing Siddhi always unnecessarily arguing with Kunal just for the sake of it is irritating and that also makes Siddhi's character less likable.

Thanks for reading all my complains and suggestions and hopefully you will understand our frustrations with the few of the recent tracks due to them either being illogical or pure silly. Hope to see much better writing from an incredible team of writters of Parichay in the coming episode as I know you are much more capable than what we are being shown in Parichay of late because I have seen your amazing writing in the first 6 months of the show.

PS: During some of the court hearing, Kunal arguments and counter punches are great piece of writing👏. Also the ruko-suno bit from Kunal-Siddhi's consummation night was one of the best we have seen on TV thus far👏. Finally, D K Thakaral is one of the best and consistent characters written on TV; we enjoy watching Kunal-Thakaral face off with immense pleasure👏.



Edited by -Rani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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To the supposed writers of parichay 😆

I had made a long list of things which I wanted to write but after seeing the segment about kunal's up coming cancer track, I threw the list & am writing only this much. 😡

Parichay is the only daily soap I watch & I enjoyed the show till jan end. After that it took a reverse gear & started going down-hill. The day the pregnancy track was introduced I stopped watching the show on TV & only started watching it again 2 weeks ago coz the new track looked interesting.

Alas, how could I have expected something different & interesting form a show which has been making a mockery of medical, law & police profession from the past few months. Not to forget showing the middle class people who possess pea brained mind & are showered with miracles like nobody's business. 😡

Except the cast who have been giving awesome performance & the dialogue writer who makes the actors mouth reasonable dialogues, the rest of the team is just pathetic in their job. Giving a pink slip to these people is an insult to the profession. The sloppy technical team, sleepy editors, the un creative Cvs etc are stifling the show for no reason what so ever. 🤢


The PR team takes the cake among the team for sending out false updates. Mis-leading promos & shockers to audiences thinking by doing this they will get the viewers hooked. here is a flash news 😡 these are the major factors contributing to the drop in TRPs, the latest news about kunal having cancer & going to jail is the most frustrating & ridiculous news which we've heard till date. The good news is that if you people carry on doing such sloppy copy pasting job like there's no tomorrow, the day will dawn soon when you'll get a boot on your distraught derrieres for scaring & scarring the audience for not watching the show ever again. 🤣

Edited by rainbowgirl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Writers,

Give us what was promised...this is the story of Kunal Chopra - the gold medalist who was forced to be jobless when he decided to stick to his principles...but the real gem of Kunal was never shown. I wonder why the show shifts to Nari Shakti everytime. wasnt this show supposed to be different.

Please stop using the ages old formulas and bring up new thoughts and tracks..

Please avoid supernatural things like Sidhi being pregnant after the falls and such a huge blood loss and medication dosages...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I edited my post hoping the cancer news is fake.
Edited by Shehnaz.K - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here's my message:
1) Stop the story from going around in circles (copy and paste tracks)- we have already seen Siddhi save Kunal in the Rape case. Change the story around bail him out of jail and make Kunal do all of the leg work even if Siddhi is repesenting him in court. This will show how close Sinal are, how they can work together effectively and will also show Kunal's gold medalist brain at work which is something we all want to see.
2) Make Raveena and Vikram help in the murder case as they too have some involvement.
3) Where has Gaurav gone? If he helps it will improve his credibilty in the show as well as his family. Seema has already told him to support the family despite their seperation. Why is Gaurav not acting on this??
4) Give the case a twist and introduce someone new that can help with the case. He could also be an admierer of Siddhi from college days and this will make Kunal jealous which is can be another side too see of Kunal's personality. This person can also help Siddhi reveal that Rohit is alive.
5) Make Raj confront Veena about the pressure she is putting on Siddhi. Raj should tell her to keep away as Siddhi is already under pressure.
6) Seema is a great charcter so there is not need for change there but I think that she should help Kunal and Siddhi a lot more.
7) The judge should be shown doubting the case as it has the same players as the rape case which was proved wrong. At the moment I feel that the Judge is acting stupid. He can link both of the cases in his mind - self talk. There is no real proof or evidence provided and it could be clearly seem that Takral was badgering the witness and forced him to say the wrong things.
8) Once the case is over Takkral should be debarred based on giving false evidence. Ritcha and Rohit should be jailed for giving false evidence and contempt of court. Then a new evil character can be introduced.
Aditi
Edited by Adishams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz end this pseudo murder track soon.Enough of showing forensic stuff to prove yr intelligence.It's so slow n boring-no suspense as rohit is alive n acting odd.N now with nari shakti n kunal in qaidi's dress it has bcm worse.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm actually really liking the show currently because everything is being handled well. But I also really hope that this is the last court case we see where the Chopras and Thakrals are duelling with each other. I'm sure real life lawyers don't spend all their life fighting cases for their own family members and themselves. The current track is being shown well so its alright but hopefully the next track will not involve the entire cast of the show sitting in the court room bawling their eyes out. And even if it involves the courtroom show Kunal and Siddhi as qualified lawyers who are capable of handling other high end cases successfully. Some things I really like about this show is that it steers clear of the many things that Ekta Kapoor shows are plagued with like the evil saas torture, phenomenal accidents, plastic sugeries, amnesias, leaps, separations...blah blah blah...so please maintain this general level of sanity in the show. The day this show starts stinking of such Kektaness is the day this show will start its downhill journey but I'm hoping it won't ever go down that way. The dialogues and screenplay is also very good so I hope this good work continues 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lage raho CVs...👏 kuch be bakwaas dikhado kya fark padta😆...we watch this show only for sameer and keerti...😛
Edited by shumi. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nobody listening 2 us ????😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not sure whether the writers read our outpourings and BT will care enough, but here is a list of things I would like to see in this show.

1) End this Thakrals VS Chopras feud.Need new villains asap. I like Daddy T and Thanal scenes are at times lot more interesting than SiNal scenes IMO.So would love to see him longer, but please push the Thakral kids behind the bars.

2) I am a Keerthi fan but I want to see a strong Kunal, that's what the story is supposed to be, so stick to that.Keep your Nari Shakti natak for other shows, this show needs some manpower.

3) Give the hero a damn job.He goes mouthing bombastic dialogues about shouldering responsibility to his errant brother and he is being helped by his BIL, still?Pathetic.

4) Need new characters too.Though I love the most of the crew and they are doing a terrific job, we hardly get to see Kapil,Shilpa and other minor characters.Spend some time developing them, otherwise it's just Seema, SiNal ,Raju.

5)Gaura vanished.I liked his lollipop girl friend, she comes across as a manipulative child.Resolve his totally unwarranted affair or get a new man for Seema and develop a parallel track around Seema & Gaurav,kids.

6) This new Richa freaks me out.Makes me wonder what kinda man was Kunal to have loved this woman once.Mona had a certain vulnerability and i could at times forgive her for doing all that she did, this lady nah.May be she should stare less and wear softer eye makeup, IMAO.

6)Yeah, please keep Kunal clothed in casual Tees and throw away those hideous kurtas. Raju is more smartly dressed than Kunal at home.

7)WANT TO SEE THIS SHOW DEVELOP AROUND KUNAL AND SIDHI'S PROFESSIONAL LIFE, SUPPORTED BY OTHERS NOT AN OBSESSIVE LOVE STORY WITH THE THAKRAL KIDS.
Thanks.

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