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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nkp007
Good job.👏liked the way you gave us some intro about the new Sunny and Sandy. It helped my connect to the story better.Touching.🤗

thanks dear..gud to know u cud relate to them...as i wanted d readers to...and thanks again ... 😊🤗

Originally posted by: farhana874
If you call this torture...I wouldn't mind getting more...Keep them coming!
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Beautifully written Poorvi 😊

thanks farhana...will surely continue my torture...😆...and u keep comin these lovely comments😉

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: June_Anne_Mary
I will throw tomatoes... I will throw a million tomatoes... What did u write poorvi? What is this? What torture is this? U should think Im still single & have no Suraj to wipe away the warm drops slipped out of my eyes. And about the tomatoes... I will throw tomatoes & celebrate "la tomatina" here itself... That much wonderful, story. Its so lovely. If this is torture, Im ready to die.. Truly saying, this is one among those a few threads which I wana read again & again... So lovely poorvi and so emotional. Though u presented a little different Suraj, I think that made me more emotional... But what surprised me is your creativity and at a time when it is unexpected. And I dont know why, I m so proud of having u as my friend!!!

My most favourite lines are "He knew she wasn't doubting his love,she was just upset in fear of losing him and their dream,she just needed reassurance of his presence." awesome!!!

Wonderful,dinderful,janderful,awesome,drastic,blastic,fantastic,elastic... Ha ha ha ha ha.. YOU MADE MY DAY. Thanks a lot..🤗🤗🤗

whoa...thts soo sweet of u JB🤗...thanks for these lovely comments😊..

i was kinda nervours abt this...coz it totally changes surya's perception of everone...but just had to try and share dis wid u guys.😉😛 and i love emotional stuff😆

and those lines are my fav too😊...we r like minds billies after all😆

m glad u liked it so much...and m proud to call u my frnd too my wild billie...luv u🤗🤗🤗

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ami_dabh
Poo-Beta my Jumbo Bandriya.🤗. It's a super-duper, mind-blasting, mind-boggling OS. Mujhe toh pataa hi nahi tha Tu inni romantic story bhi write kar sakti hain..Lagat hain job par yahi sab karti ho.🤣 I'm also gonna throw tomatoes + eggs on you to celebrate the success.🥳

A tons of lovey-dovey hugs🤗.. Chal ab apne aur bhi versions pour out.😉

I second with JAMi about favorite line:- "He knew she wasn't doubting his love,she was just upset in fear of losing him and their dream,she just needed reassurance of his presence."-- Beautiful, Wonderful.❤️

hey fatso🤗...thanks a lott for such wonderfull words sweety😉

m a born romantic dear...tabhi to apna diya dhundh rahi hun...ki jaldi se mai bhi romance karun🤣🤣

and ye office me nahi...ghar pe likha hai samjhi fatso😆

and tons of hugs for u too sweetheart🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

will surely come up wid some more versions sson...u people hv inspired me now..😆

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: b2011
👏 Beautiful and very touching OS. Please make it a FF and continue next.

thanks dear😊...ok will try to make it a FF...if i cud😉

Originally posted by: BidaaiLover-x
Yes, I agree.. Please continue

ok dear...will surely try for it😊

Originally posted by: Haych.Are
This is really good! 👏, i really enjoyed reading this :D, i loved how it was a different Suraj and Sandhya, I too love this line "He knew she wasn't doubting his love,she was just upset in fear of losing him and their dream,she just needed reassurance of his presence."
And also i love how Suraj says "Sandhya Baby" ;) 😍
Please do continue :D

thanks for liking it dear😊..will surely try to continue😉

yup even i love to see him calling her baby...its sweet isnt it😉

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Brahmaputra

@Brahmaputra

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Poorvi, dont suspend it. Ur words truly have sparkling magic. Pen whenever u r free. Take own time & write a FF too as continuation...😊

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.Ami.

@.Ami.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

@Poo-Beta: You're always heartily openly-closely-top-bottom-rear(in short from every angles) welcome G.🤗

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: June_Anne_Mary
Poorvi, dont suspend it. Ur words truly have sparkling magic. Pen whenever u r free. Take own time & write a FF too as continuation...😊

thankooo😳😳😳 JB...as soon as i find my brain to work...i ll continue it😉

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