My first Os on MG!!! Name undecided

Prologue

Geet Handa
22years old
College student in business in Delhi

Maan Singh khurana
28years old
Business tycoon
Moved to Delhi frm London

Savitri khurana
Maan's grand mother(didima) & mom to maan & his brother Dev

Mrs. & Mr.khurana are dead

Mr.handa business man in Delhi

Prem Handa
Geet's brother
Married to Heer (now pregnant)

Mrs. Handa(Rano) & mrs. Khurana( priya) were best friends since their childhood. None the less like sisters. Priya got married first & Ranowould half the time hangout wit priya's in-laws. Rano was loved by everybody. Later in the years after Maan was born the Khurana moved to London & Rano got busy in her life. Few years later she got the news of priya's dead after her second son( Dev) birth. Both maan & Dev were brought up by their dadima
And their father was busy in his business. When maan was 20 his dad pass away too & at that young age he had to take over the khurana business. Since his childhood he never received love from any of his family as they were all busy, & cause of that he hates the word "LOVE". Even though he loves his brother and dadima but that's something else for him. In 8 years his only aim was to make his business touch skies which he did and today he was the richest n the top youngest business man. Now The khurana's were moving back to India due to dadima's health and for dev's marriage. Dadima and dev went before maan to make arrangements for the wedding and maan was caught up wit all the work he had to do before transferring the whole business to Delhi. Maan promised his dadima to be Delhi on the wedding day. As he promised he was there. He was only there for his brother n his dadima & was not at all interested in all these rituals just like the girl who was sitting on the other side of the hall. As she lifted her head,she was caught by maan's eye. Who was this ajnabi that caught Maan Singh Khurana's attention??

Hope u all like my First Os...
Pls I want to knw if I should continue or not...

And I need suggestion for the title too I was thinking mayb ajnabi Jo apne he thi? Reply if u like it.!!!!!

pls proceed... very nice start..😉

VERY NICE CONCEPT P HEY CONT. SOON

Thanks for the likes everyone. I had posted 2 threads by accident. I will b continuing in the other one. Heres the link