MY First SS on MG!!! Ajnabi Jo apne he thi - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb
bt if rano is his maasi, so geet is his cousin?
waiting 4 more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ nats0101
Rano was maan's moms best friend or like sisters so that's why he calls her maasi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone liking my story and I have decided to make it into a SS..

Part 3:

Rano asked him if he have found a girl for him yet? He was again lost in that ajnabi. He shook his head telling her to enjoy, walked out. She yelled back telling him to come to her house and he jst said hmm.

One week passed

It was night time, and after dinner dadima, dev, & maan were sitting in the living room. Dev's wedding pictures came in, dadima & Dev were looking through the pictures. Maan was sitting there reading the newspaper. Dadima was bugging maan to look at the pictures and then started scolding him for not being in even one picture. Maan got irritated and got up to go, as he walked he knock down some of the pictures frm the table. Dadima gave him a look so angrily he picked the pics of the floor, and putted on the table. He then walk a little to go but stop and turned. His eyes caught something in the pic. Did he see a girl in light pink sari?? Could it b that ajnabi he thought?? The girl who he was continuously thinking abt after the wedding. The girl who was getting in his heart just by her beauty of side view and her eyes. He walked back to look at the photo and before he could take it, dadima took it and was discussing something wit dev. Seeing maan coming back this time dev asked him to come look at the pictures wit them.
Maan acted as if he is listening to dev and sat next to him. He looked through some other pics while dadima looked through the pile wit "that" pic in it. He pretended like he was looking at the pics. When dadima was done wit the pile she passed it down to dev. Seeing that he put his pile down and snatched the pile frm dev's hand. Dadima and dev looked at him in shock, and he ignored them & looked through the pictures. There was one last pic left in the pile and when he looked it. His eyes widen, he had a faint smile and his heart missed a beat seeing her beauty frm front. This was it!! This was "His" ajnabi. Seeing him lost in a picture dadima took it frm his had and he came back to reality. He wondered why the ajnabi was in the pic wit his maasi?? Rite then he heard dadima say "oh Rano & Geet'spicture" he repeated after her "GEET" but how does dadima knw her name. He got his answer when dadima continued saying " such a beautiful girl she is just like her mother". He was shocked!! This ajnabi girl he was thinking abt is his maasi's daughter. He couldn't believe it. The girl who was taking over his heart was no ajnabi, "Wo apne he thi".

He went to the outhouse. He was going crazy!! First he saw how gorgeous she was the thing he wanted to see all this while and at the same time he already came to how she is too. He knew that his maasi has 2 kids one girl and prem who he alread met. He nevered even bothered to ask abt them when he talked to Rano and didnt even know their names. Now that he knw who she is, his heart can't wait to see her. He remembered that Rano has asked him to come to her house. Immediately he took his phone and was abt to call to tell he was coming for lunch the next day, he saw the time. It was 11 0'clock, he wasn't sure if he should call at this time.
He thought any time would b fine when calling his massi so he called. Rano picked the phone & was surprised to hear his voice. She asked " so wat made u remember me today?" He said " why?? Can't I call u??" and went on wit there causal talk. He was waiting for her to invite him so that he doesn't have to say it, but she didn't. She knew it would b waste,as if he's free & wanted to come he would do it without her asking.
They talked for few more mins and before saying bye he said "I have a meeting tomorrow near your house, & was thinking for dropping by for lunch, he completed saying only if your home and not busy." Rano replied " I have time for you at any time." He smiled and said " see you tomorrow then", and ended the call. He was really exited to see the ajnabi, oh not ajnabi Geet. But will she be there when he goes to her house was the question??

Precap:
Can't see Geet anywhere

Hope you all like it!!! :)
Edited by sadiya12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it !!!!!!!!!
Waiting for maan to meet geet !!!!!
Update soon !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update..
Tnq 4 da pm nd plz continue soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi dear..congrats on ur new SS! js read all parts ! update soon n do pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww maan wants to meet geet but doesnt want anyone to guess why he wants to come over aint he just cute
will his wait be over or not well i guess we will only know with your next update huh
see you soon i hope
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry guys for not updating it's actually because of my IPad. It's been not working properly and the part I was writing got deleted. Hopefully I'll update by tomorrow. And thank u all for the likes and comments :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful story pls add me to ur pm list

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