#2 New KriYansh SS!!! update on pg 140!!! - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago
@annie- thanx dear

@konpal- u r late 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anniemathias



hey wow thats great
like ur answer



hey yogini bye
catch u later
see u soon
actually for heavy rain my net is not working
and might light will go so see u later
bye
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
@annie- bye dear . . . . Kaash mere yahan bhi rain ho jaye 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya rite im late ab kya karein?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Here's chapter 16

Enjoy!!!


Chapter 16

KR boys were still laughing abt hw loosers lousians were

Rey enters the court in anger😡

Guy1 ' dekho ek aur aaya hai

Guy2 ' wo sab ek saath hamara kuch nahi bigad paye toh tu kya karega huh ja ja abhi bache ho tum sab

Rey turns n walks away

Guy2 ' Dekh yehi awkad hai tum logo ki

Rey closes the basketball gate n locks it n goes it front of them n shows them the key n puts it in his pocket

Guy3- yeh key pocket mein kyu dali hai

Rey ' taki tum log bahar na jaa sako

All guys start laughing at his foolishness

(fight sequence frm 00:00 2 11:40 just I have some changes with it)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LWKGi4TaGIY&feature=plcp

The fight starts n rain also starts here Kria goes behind Rey n sees him fighting alone calls him but no use she runs back inside n tell them tht Rey is fighting with them all alone all rush outside. They try 2 open the gate but it was locked so jumped from the fence. Swayam was trying 2 stop everybody. Then Shivam also came there running seeing Shivam there Swayam got angry n starting beating him. Sharon was shocked 2 see such an hyper Swayam.

Suddenly a man stepped out of a car n entered the basketball court

Man ' I said stop it wat hell r u guys doing😡

Vishakha ' who the hell r u man😡

Man ' mein is college ka naya vice principal hu n u all I want u in my cabin rite now

Nxt scene shift 2 VP's cabin

Vp ' do u realize tum sab ne kya kiya hai ye ek reputed college hai n tum sab is tarah tum log seniors ho sirf isliye tumhe tolerate kiya jar aha ha understand

Rey ' lekin sir yeh ladai sabse phele Shivam ke group ne

Vp ' I m not yet finished Mr. singhania tumhe toh sharam aane chahiye college ke GS ho tum

Rey ' but sir Shivam ne jo hamare college ke saath kiya wo thik tha sir

Vp - Mr. singhania mujhe pata hai Shivam ne kya kiya hai aur uske liye wo accept bhi kar chukka hai Sirf Shivam ki wajah se he team dazzlers footloose mein wapis register hue hai I hope u all understand u may go now

Outside

Swayam ' Dekh rey I knw tujhe kya hum sab ko bohot gussa aa raha hai ise Shivam par yar tu Vp sir se itna rudely baat mat kar tu apne reputation ke bare mein soch tu is college ka GS hai

Rey ' I dnt care man

Swayam ' but college does plz

Rey ' alright

Nxt scene 2 medical room Rey n Swayam were trying 2 dress their wounds but cnt

KriSha enter

Sharon goes 2 Swayam n dresses his wounds

Swayam ' tum yaha

Sharon ' ha kyu mein nahi aa sakte kya

Swayam ' nahi tum yaha mere saath

Sharon ' ha toh tumse mujhe baat karni thi

Swayam ' bolo

Sharon ' wo tum basketball court mein itne hyper Shivam ke saath

Swayam ' ha kyuki mujhe wo sab yaad aa gaya tha jo usne tumhare saath kiya n mein apne aap ko control nahi kar paya toh

Sharon ' toh tum marne lage use ha agar tumhe jyada chot lag jati toh

Swayam ' Kyu tumhe ise farak padhta hai

SwaRon LLHH n bg tune phela nasha

Sharon ' ha nahi thoda parta hai but ab tum aisa nahi karoge

Swayam ' wo toh use Shivam pe depend karta hai n by the way thnx 4 dressing

Sharon - ur welcome n goes

Precap ' KriYansh talks n charity event


Nxt update on page 85 with 40 likes!!!

I knw thts a long demand but i need time 2 write!!!

Edited by kritzzz_ArSha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res

unres

Awsm update kritz!

Swaron convo was nice!

Ye vp maar daalo koi ise pls! 😡

And no prblem for big demand! likes ka readers par hai but pages hum kar denge no worry! 😆

Kriyaansh in next update cant wait for it!

Thanx for pm and update soon 😃
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Don't underestimate the shirtless wonder . . . U idiots 😆
he's a true fighter . . . . Wen it cums to his frnd's stake . . . 😈
swaron's part was really gud . . . . Their convo . . . . . 👏
kritzzi . . . Now badi demand ke sath badi update 😉
Edited by yogini64 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
chptr14 n 15
both d update was suprlyk,,,,kriyansh moment was awsummm,,,,wish v cud c dis in d3,,,,,bt update was amazing luv it😃😃😃,,,,,,,,,,,n i m so sry 4 late cmt😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
chptr 16

res😃
unres😃

it was awsumm update,,,,,,,,,luv it😊😊
Edited by poojadworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
Thnx 4 da pm

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