My first FF:- The Beautiful journy of love.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends, i m going to wright my First ff ever. Hope u all like it and tell me that i should continue it or not? SUMMARY :- PART 1- On page 1 PART 2- on page 2.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful ! Anurna... 😃
will be waiting eagerly for ur FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Introduction:- agam- loyal ,clean hearted middle class boy, having good look and naughtyness too. Nimrit- A beautiful ,inoccent, honest ,rich family girl. But no attitude and no ego.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Archu..hey thats a great idea...😊

Intro is already catchy..will wait for full update..
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Part 1:- " Hey guys look at there. it seems there is big party of any college" one of the agam's friend said to him. Agam said ," so boys for what u r waiting , lets go!" Then all of them entered in the party without any permission. When they entered they saw colorfull lights all around ,decoration with flowers of roses and white lilies, a large dance floar and rocking music was on. and every body was dipped into that beautiful music. All were busy in dancing. Agam and his friends joind to the crowed on dance floar. After some time agam felt like thrusty so that he moved towards the counter for took cold drink for him. Suddenly he heared a sound " Nimrit"... "why are u sit here alone? Lets go on dance floar" , a girl asked to nimrit which was sat just neighbouring to agam. "No, I m not interested", said nimrit. The girl went towards dance floar after said to nimrit ," ok, allright." when nimrit turned she saw agam who was continuously stared towards her. He was very handsome and looked innocent on his face. At same time one boy came towards nimrit with full of bad attitude (he was overconfident and thought he is smartest one) and stood in front of her. Agam wanted to talk to nimrit but he stopped as this boy was came there. Agam only watched them quitely. Nimrit said to boy ," u can sit here as i m alone" indicating towards chair beside her. That boy became happy and sat on the chair. Nimrit said to boy :- " u should go to dance floar i will join u in one min." when the boy started to walked towards dance floar agam saw something which was stucked to the backside of the boy. Agam understood that it was nothing but the "chewingum". After the boy went nimrit started to laughed loudly, and after watching her agam also started to laughed with her. Agam was tried to controlled laugh of self & asked to nimrit ," that means u were already knew that there was a chewingum on the chair." nimrit said ," yes. Because he was thought that he is sharper and smart . He was just a overconfident boy" . Nimrit said to agam "plz have a seat." agam asked her after sitting beside her "i m new here , can u tell me about the party?" nimrit understood already that he was not the student of her college. Nimrit :- "this is annual party of our college." At the time other students noticed that there were some strangers present in their college party which was not the student of their college. They complained to principal about it. Until that time all friends of agam were already escaped from the party. But agam was trapped there alone. Nimrit :-" lets go from here." Agam :- "but where?" Nimrit :-"don't ask any question just leave from here with me right now" Nimrit came out with agam from party through other gate. Nimrit :- " thank god .u r safe now." Agam :- "thank god and thanks to u . I m saved because of u. If u were not there for my help then ... Anyways thanks a lot. But why u saved me?" Nimrit :- "because i think u r good boy from nature and heart. And u r not harmfull." Agam :-"will i drop u as it is night now & and ur alone . How will u self go to ur home? Nimrit :-"i m not alone .my driver is with me there in my car" agam remain shocked. " ok then" Nimrit:-"will u come with me to my home as we r now friends " agam was shocked but said yes. After they reached to her house he saw her big beautiful house . Nimrit :- " my parents are not in home. Agam said" ur house is so big. U r so rich. U r very lucky." Nimrit :- "no. I m not." u r very lucky . At least ur not alone .u have ur family which is always with u ,everytime, in ur support in every problem." " but my mom and dad does not take care of mine at all. They only love their buissnes and work. They remained always engagged in their projects. They have no time for me. . I m always remain alone" Today is my birthday and i didn't want to be alone on my birthday. I have no any good friend with which i can celebrate my birthday. I thought that now ur my friend so that i were invited u to my home. After heared this agam became emotional but soon he controlled himself and said to nimrit for cheer up to her, " Hey don't feel alone i m here with u , ur new friend to celebrate ur birthday. Wish u a very happy birthday nimrit" Nimrit became more emotional and tears started to came down from her beautiful eyes on her fair and soft cheeks. But her heart was filled with the happiness that time. Hope u like it. agar nahi to plz tell me. Agar sab chahte hai to mai ise continue karungi. Thanks for reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome begining anurna... 😊
both agam n nimrit, college students meeting for the first time in a party...
she seems to be quiet naughty and very cutely handled the situation with that extra smart guy...
my heart went out for Nimrit ...for being alone on her birthday... but she has got the best gift... the gift of meeting AgamšŸ˜‰šŸ˜›
pls do continue to write... will be waiting for the next update...šŸ˜
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cjs369


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awesome begining anurna... 😊
both agam n nimrit, college students meeting for the first time in a party...
she seems to be quiet naughty and very cutelyhandled the situation withthat extra smart guy...
my heart went out for Nimrit ...for being alone on her birthday... but she has got the best gift... the gift of meeting AgamšŸ˜‰šŸ˜›
pls do continue to write... will be waiting for the next update...šŸ˜

thanks a lot charu. my name is archu. Maine sirf ek chotisi koshish ki hai. Achha laga ki tumhe pasand aaya. Mai jarur continue karungi. U will get to see always more positivness in my ff but some turns and twist .so keep reading.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Archu fantastic start of the story..šŸ‘šŸ¼

Their first meet is too beautiful..aww Agam could not take his eyes off nimrit..

Whereas nimrit a little naughtiness in her and taught that boy a good lesson..

Nimrit so caring saved Agam and already knew he is not a bad person..😊

Felt bad for nimrit all she wants is love from her parents and got a precious gift on her birthday .friendship of Agam..😊

Do continue soon and will wait how their story unfolds..

you did a great job Archu for your first FF..šŸ‘


Edited by saveeta24 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saveeta24

Archu fantastic start of the story..šŸ‘šŸ¼


Their first meet is too beautiful..aww Agam could not take his eyes off nimrit..

Whereas nimrit a little naughtiness in her and taught that boy a good lesson..

Nimrit so caring saved Agam and already knew he is not a bad person..😊

Felt bad for nimrit all she wants is love from her parents and got a precious gift on her birthday .friendship of Agam..😊

Do continue soon and will wait how their story unfolds..

you did a great job Archu for your first FF..šŸ‘



thank u very very much savee. I always wanted to write ff but due to lack of time i were unable to did it before.but now i have some free time so here is my ff for all of u. I will be back soon with updates.thanks once again. I were worried before writting it but now i m happy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saveeta24

Archu fantastic start of the story..šŸ‘šŸ¼


Their first meet is too beautiful..aww Agam could not take his eyes off nimrit..

Whereas nimrit a little naughtiness in her and taught that boy a good lesson..

Nimrit so caring saved Agam and already knew he is not a bad person..😊

Felt bad for nimrit all she wants is love from her parents and got a precious gift on her birthday .friendship of Agam..😊

Do continue soon and will wait how their story unfolds..

you did a great job Archu for your first FF..šŸ‘



agni give me inspiration of writing it.
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