My first FF:- The Beautiful journy of love. - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 :- It was a very beautiful morning after a sweet night for nimrit. The rays of Sun fell down on her beautiful face like they came to woke up her. She woke up and sat on bed.her eyes were still closed.she tried to open them. At the same time the door bell rang. She gate up slowly and opened the door. She was shocked that there were nobody present out side. Nimrit , " is anyone there ?" No answer came. Then she went to closed the door but at the same time she noticed one small but beautiful bunch of white roses with a lovely greeting card. She picked up it and started to read " Dear friend Nimrit , this is me, ur new friend AGAM , remember" "how can i forget u agam?" nimrit said. She continued to read further, " yesterday was ur birthday but no any gift i gifted u till. I think i have to give a gift to u. But after thinking even more than 1000 times i coulden't decided the perfect gift for u as u already have everything.,The money, expenssive cloths and lots more. What can i give u? Therefore i am decided that ... The letter was incomplete. Nimrit thought what would he decided. Agam :- " i decide that , only u who can tell me this , so, i m here in front of u, now tell me what gift u want from me?" Nimrit was stood shocked .she couldn't belived on her eyes that he was actualy present infront of her. Nimrit :- " U and here at this time , for what , how.? She bombarded lots of que on him. Agam :- "plz calm down and ask que one by one." " yes, i m here actualy, so tell me , what u want? After few minutes she told " i want bike ride on ur bike with u because i never did it before ." Agam :-" only , ok, as u said birthday girl" Then after nimrit became ready they were start their journy of bike riding. Nimrit :-"i want to do some shopping." Agam :-" ok." he moved bike towards popular mall but she said-"no ,no , i want to do shopping from streatside shop." Agam :-" what? But..." Nimrit :-" yes because i want to do that which i never did before." Agam :-" ok as u said madam." They stoped on a accesory shop. Nimrit started to searching something good for her.but after a long search she said to agam with confused tune " i m so confused agam, plz help me what should i select" Agam :- "i think PAYAL. It will look more beautiful after u wear it." Nimrit looked in his eyes and smiled " ok , i like to buy this payal for me but u have to choose it for me." Agam :- " ok. " After that nimrit said," agam u know , i love seashore, beaches, the waves of sea, the sound when wave stroke to the rocks" Agam :- " then lets go " Nimrit :- " are u serious?" Agam :-" yes of course even i also love the same which u like." After reaching to beach nimrit saw a large unboundable water of sea. It was dark blue due to reflection of sky in it. Nimrit :-" how pure this water is! That the sky can clearly look its mirror image in sea water." Agam said looking towards her beautiful face :-" just like ur heart which is so pure and beautiful like this water. Nimrit looked towards him and just lots in his eyes.. " coconut water " they came to theis consiousness and looked towards coconut water sellar. Agam :-" do u want to drink it?" Nimrit said happily " yes" during drinking it A small wave touches the feet of both . Nimrit felt the coldness of it deep inside her soul. She closed her eyes and both enjoyed the love of nature . After some time she oppened her eyes and stared to agam as she now wanted to saw him as long as possible at that time. Agam oppend his eyes and in a naughty style Nimrit said " i m feel hungry now" Agam said ," ok. Lets go to any five star restruarent . Nimrit :-" no i don't want to go to five star hotel." Agam :-" then, ok, lets go , i want to show u one place where u will get delicious food under the sky with full of blinking stars. Nimrit looked at him surprisingly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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agam nimrit friendship has started its journey... so innocent and happy time they are spending with each other... Nimrit's simplicity will make agam fall for her...
love the track its taken... nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue part 2.- They then came to the place and it was beautiful " MANPREET - da- dhaba" Agam :-" this is the place where u can get all types of delicious food with desi traditional values. " welcome to our dhaba plz come and sit .what u want to order? " said dhaba owner. Agam :-" nimrit plz tell" Nimrit :-" today i m going to order what u like." Agam :-" but its ur birthday not my " Nimrit :- " absolutely ,then do what i tell u ." After taken their dinner suddenly some boys came there in thier jeep . They looked like drunk. Agam quickly noticed it he got up and stood in front of nimrit . And bent down little. He totaly covered her from one side and now he was very close to her. He actually wanted to hide her from eyes of these bad boys. When she understood why he was did that she gave a smile towards him. Agam continued to talk about diff things to felt comfortable to nimrit as he was very closed to her. But she felt comfortable already with him. She again lost in his eyes and his loving behavior. Then before he droped her to her home. He gave her a small gift. She was surprised. She eagarly oppened it. It was a small beautiful doll who looking towards sky. Agam said , " This is the girl with full of dreams in her eyes which is innocent .pure hearted , want to touch height of the sky , want to hear music of nature. just like u . Yes , this girl is "u" NIMRIT. Once again the eyes of her became wet and small drop of the tears slide down on her cheeks. She hugged him tightly . He was shocked. She cried continuously and remained hugged him for long time... TO BE CONTINUED... hey guys plz read it and give ur comments on it. Hope u all like it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Archu..awesome update..👏

l love how you unfolding their friendship and how its becoming a strong bond..

The innocence of nimrit ..so down to earth though being rich is definitely amazing Agam..

Love how he protects her from the drunk guys sight and later offering the gift..so heart touching moment and could feel why nimrit got so emotional..she is someone who lacks love from her parents and Agam is filling that void in her life..she is living a life she has always dream of in the company of Agam..

Good flow of the story..keep it up and do continue soon..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi anurna
nice story & UDtc😊

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