Fanfic - A COMPLETELY DIFFERENT CONCEPT

Hi.

My concept of kyph is totally different from what the other people at IF have been writing on. And its nothing similar to ekta..( mayb at sum places but the whole stuff is different.)…hope u guys like it…😛

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Angad and Kripa were the sweetest pair in the city😉…all though they were children of poor parents, Naina and Dilip and Suryaban and kripa's mum, both of them were inseperable. ( rite now they are about 10 yrs old)…kripa and angad would do things together like homework, go to school, listening to music, playing with the kids in the neighborhood and watching movies.😃 Such was their relationship that if any one of them dint turn up, it would be very difficult for the day to pass.. both lived on the opposite sides of the gully in the poor village. So it was possible for them to be upto any kind of mischief. Gradually this keep on going till they were in their late teens, when both started having feelings for each other.. Both, angad's parents and Kripa's parents favoured their relationship. 😳So both fell in love😳…and that's how their prem katha started. Angad would bring small cute stuff for kripa ( as he couldn't afford to take kripa to five-star's) and kripa would make his favorite food for him..that is lovely non-veg briyani. ( they are non-veg..hehhee sorry!) finally the couple's parents decided to talk about marriage. So in kripa's house the next day –😊

Kripa's mom – hi naina…I m soo happy that today, my daughter's life is going to be settled and she is going to have a family just like us – all loving and caring..😳

Naina – ohh yess….i m very happy too😃…kripa is such a lovely girl…and I really wanted her to come in to my house the very day I had seen her become frendz wid angad.

Kripa's dad – hahahaha….thanx naina…so wen do we fix the wedding date??😕

Dilip – yea…how about after 2 months..as we would need sufficient time for preparing and stuff….you knw how hard it is to plan out the wedding and how much of kharcha😭…we cant even keep the wedding soo grand nah…but yes, it will be the most memorable wedding of the neighborhood.

So then kripa comes in with the chai and snacks..and gosh👏…she luks soo pretty…even though she hasn't worn any make-up, but the sound of her bangles and her payals keep ringing in angad's ears and he looks at her as if he never looked at her for about 10 whole years😳.. ( now they are about 24 [ angad] and 23 [ kripa].) so then , the whole family gets up as they start hugging each other proudly as the parents of the sweetest couple –angad and kripa.

The wedding 😆

Angad is dressing up with the help of his dad and his relatives and kripa is dressing with the help of her mum and other women. Both luk extremely "wow"!.. the most ravishing pair that ever existed on earth.👍🏼( even though they don't have such grand dresses and expensive jwellery)….now angad is already ready as usual sitting on the mandap. After sumtime kripa comes downstairs and when he sees her luking so pretty he gets up from the mandap. Everyone is surprised…people think he's gonna break the wedding..but tadaaaaaaa!!!!...he goes upto kripa who is coming downstairs…and carries her in his arms and brings her down to the mandap to people's astonishment.😉 Every1 are surprised with this deewanapan….kripa meanwhile asks him why he had to do this in front of everyone….angad replies that he wants to make this wedding the most memorable day of his life and he will only get to do it today…so he would have only TODAY, to try out all weird stuff..!!! hehehehe…!!! The photographer ( one of their relatives only ) doesn't take much time to realize that this is the most perfect picture and quickly clicks a snap. !!😛

Shaadi ki raat 😳

Like duh, kripa is sitting on the bed full of rose-petals and then angad comes in. kripa shyes away…then angad takes her head and holds it wid his hands ( like most premis do)..and he tells her…😳

Angad – kripa, I will never ever leave you…u r my life, my soul and my own very self. Never ever let me take my self away from you..never leave me alone…all these years I have spent with you have been the best memories ever….even though we aren't very rich, these memories are the tresures of my life…and U ARE THE DIAMOND IN IT.😉😳

Kripa- no angad….u mean the same to me…never leave me alone..i will die..

Then both hug each other and den, have the most memorable nite together…(I will leave it upto you guys to imagine the nite )

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hi again...

i will continue my next part...only if u guys like it...or else it will b foolish of me to keep writing!!!

so do reply!

hi....

ok here goes the next part....please take time and reply!!

will post more wen i get time...this is it for today...

thanx for readin!

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So the next day kripa gets up early and quickly makes breakfast for everybody in the house. Angad is still lying on the bed and he is dreaming…he is dreaming dat he's huggin kripa and he's like...

Angad – kripa, ur so soft…I love ur skin….ooohhhhhh kripaa….without u where would I go???....hahahah like duh to another sweeet woman….kripa, wats happening??? Why aren't u answering??

Wen angad gets up…he gets the shock of his life!....he sees that all this time he was huggin and kissing a PILLOW?????? WAT????????

YYUUMMMM YUMMMM YUMMMY….dats what you can hear at the dining table where angad's parents are havin breakfast…angad comes..Goodmorning ma..good morning papa… HE IGNORES KRIPA.. kripa is soo angry…. BOILING WID ANGER THAT HE DINT WISH HER!!...den he jus sits on the table wid out even lookin at her…!! N he keeps eating and doesn't even bother complimatin her!!...she jus leaves the dining table and goes to the room…giving his parents an excuse. Angad follows her..he finds her lukin out of the window…he comes from bhind and hugs her and tells her…

Angad- YES!! I HAVE DONE IT!!....FINALLY I GOT U TO THIS BEDROOM…hahahahaaa!!...

Kripa – ( shez wondering wat angad is upto…)

Angad – how cud I do all this in front of my parents??....what wud they think of me???...dats why I dint wish u nor I said nythin of the wonderful breakfast u made!....i just wanted to kiss u…and now I did it…!! Hahaah…and he runs out of the bedroom

Kripa – u badmaash!...she runs bhind him only till the door and den stops, only to think how foolish she was!

Sum weeks passed…and den kripa's worst nightmare came true…this is how it happened.

Angad – kripa, I feel very sad to tell u all this..but I have to go..

Kripa – [ shocked]….what???? where??

Angad – I have to make money kripa…we cant move on like this..i have to feed my family and u and live a comfortable life…so for that I wud have to go to sheher.. to make more money.

Kripa – oh no angad…we r happy like this only…y??......

Angad – I knw kripa ..but I have to go…atleast for my family's sake..so plsss don't stop me…I will always contact u…either by phone calls or letters…ok? Be careful always…specially near the gas wen cooking and stuff..i dun want to see my jaan getting harmed..ok?

Kripa – yes angad..please take care..call..and wen u find a job..tell me!

Angad leaves after telling his parents…and takin aashirwaad and stuff…

next we see prithvi...a rich guy..owning a rich firm...same like his role in kyph. he is bc attending the new employees for an office clerk...angad comes dere and sits for a while.. prithvi calls him in....

prithvi - may i see ur qualifications..??

angad - sir, i dun have ny qualifications..but yes, i m a gud worker and work wid all my heart..there is no sign of betreyal in me..plss...i m in gr8888 need of this job..

prithvi- [ slightly taken aback]...ok...from now on.. ur the clerk...my secretery will show ur work.. pls do it..ur salary will be RS. 1500 evry month..

Angad - [thinking - wat???? rs 1500???...gosh...i m lucky..i have got a nice boss]..but sir...dun u think 1500 is too much for a mamooli clerk?

Prithvi - no...evry1 in my office is unique..no one is mamooli...so evry1 deserves sumtin special..even u...ur salary will increase on ur efficiency.

Angad- thanx sir..i will start my work from today..

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as soon as he gets out of the office, he calls kripa...he tells her the gud news and also that after a few months he will bring kripa to this lovely sheher..mumbai..and its people are not bad after all....kripa on the other end is very happy....

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like this, she would recieve fone calls every now and den...but then..suddenly after 4 months...there was no pata of angad...nothing..no phonecalls, no letters..nothing....kripa ka tho jiii ghabra raha tha...

kripa - ooh god..plss..angad ko kuch hone na do...usse hone se pehle, woh sab mujhe do. dont let any thing harm him..

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like this, time passed, days passed, months passed...no khabar of angad...EVERY ONe was wondering....

WHERE THE HELL IS ANGAD???

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plz cont

loved ur story

i think naina wud look cute washing clothes😆

waiting for next part

esha

hi.
m very happy that u all loved my story..hahaha...thanx a lot!...so this part of my fan-fic is dedicated to all those who replied..!

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kripa is crying her heads off in her house...everyone including her parents are consoling her....everyone is worried...kripa's mum suggests that lets go and complain to the police.

Kripa's mom - naina..i think its been long enough..we must go and complain to the police. we should not wait any longer..who knws what mite have happened.??

Naina - no...we cant do that...first of all we r poor..and u knw how india's police are..?? they dont move their butt unless they r given money..and not SUM money..they need LOADS of money. and we cant afford..otherwise they will not even do nything...

kripa - [ stopped crying]..u knw wat maaji??...the only solution to the problem is that I WILL GO TO MUMBAI SHEHER AND SEE WATS HAPPENING. WHY ISNT HE ANSWERING THE FONE...I will contact his boss and ask him for evrything...i will need ur aashirwaad..

kripa's mum - but beta...mumbai is a big city..u will get lost..beta..and u r a girl..sorry we cant allow u to go alone like that...

kripa - no mama...i m a big girl now..nothing will happen unless mere bado ke aashwirwaad mere saath hai.. ....bye mama...mein mumbai ko jaa rahi huun or angad ko dhoonde ke hi wapas aayoongi....

kripa's mom - ok beta....our blessings are with u..

naina- yes beta..i will always remember u....how u used to clean my house and wash my clothes ( esha oberoi..that goes for u!!!)....

kripa - ooooo maa-ji......m soo sorrry...!!

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kripa reaches mumbai...shez totally lost..and confused..doesnt knw wat to do..where to go...how the people are...den she catches a taxi...she asks the taxi how much money wud he take to go to the BOSE office. the taxi driver tells her abt 95 rupees. kripa gets a jhatka...sez like..where is it?..den he's like " u want the taxi or not...??"...kripa tells him to go as she does not want to spend so much money only on travelling..she decides to walk....wen shez walking, she keeps thinking abt angad..his absence, mumbai sheher..and she faints....suddenly our gud hearted prithvi comes...😳 in his big mercedes...he sees kripa and immedietely feels dat she's the ideal girl for him..he takes her to his home...and orders the maid in his house to take care of kripa..

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kripa wakes up....only to find herself in a huge mansion....she does not knw wat to do...she starts crying...suddenly she sees a maid..she asks the maid..

kripa- who r u?...why m i here??..

maid - madam, i m ur maid..my saheb has tol me to take care of u n not to let u go until he comes back from work... he's the one who got u here coz u were ill...

kripa - ohh....who is he??..ohh ccan i ask u sumtin??..do u knw mumbai sheher very welll??

maid - umm madam...yes..i knw very welll..wats the matter??

kripa- thank goodness..can u help me out...? [she hands her the address of prithvi unknowingly]...can u tell me how will i reach to this address??

maid - chuckles...madam..u r here..only...u have reached the right address!!

kripa - wat?????????? thank goodness..the taxi driver wasnt tellin me only..and he charged me 95 rupees only to get here..

maid- no madam...he mayb came 2 knw dat u dun knw nything and fooled u..it hardly is 25 rupees.

kripa - ohhhh.....thanks a lot..wen will ur boss come?? i mean, ur saheb?

maid - oh....he'll come in about 45 min..till then u take care and rest...

kripa - ok..as soon as he comes, please tell me...ok?

maid - ok...

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after 45 min....

prithvi comes in...very tired...and sits on the sofa..suddenly he remebers that he had a pari in his house..( to all kripa-prithvi fans...that goes for u!!) he goes in the bedroom and luks at kripa...shez fast asleep...he feels that this has been the first time any girl has ever had an impact on him..he talks to the maid...the maid tells him evrything...prithvi's thinking " wow she came searchin for me??"...he decides to later on take kripa for dinner..and tell her to stay in his house as long as she wants...he also decides at that very moment dat whatever it mayb...shez only going to be hisssss...F-O-R-E-V-E-R.......

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hope u guys like it!

where is angad😭

by the way is prithvi gud at heart that he will allow a-k to b toghether???????

naina meri kripa se kapde dhulati thi???????? from a newly married girl😡

last thing how can kripa speak eng??? is she educated?? may b in night school with angad😳

plz cont & cont in eng as hindi is too difficult to read atleast for me

waiting for next part

esha