SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 71

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu1909

just read all missed update it was awesome.waiting for mystery to unfold

thanks dear...😊
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thanks dear...😊
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hahaha only Veer and Chandni know eh? 😆 really lukin fwd to the next ud 😍
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Thanks to all those beautiful people who appreciated Shikar...i have received pm's requesting me to update Shikar today... so here is the next update... enjoy

Lov

Dhanvi 🤗


Part 27



"But what are those people asking Kaka??" Veer asked him very casually...



Kaka didn't wanted to tell Veer...but he knew that Veer should know about his industry and business and what's going on with it...



Kaka informed Veer about the workers in one of his companies is sitting on strike... "there are few violent people among the workers who are manipulating all the workers and asking them to stop work"



Veer infuriated... "why didn't you tell me before..." but then he himself was never interested in his business or the big empire that his Father and his forefathers had been running...then how could he expect Kaka to inform him...



He suddenly get so worried...there was an urge...he couldn't somehow see anybody spoiling what his Father had established, be it just a part of the big empire...he must go himself and sort this problem...



"Kaka I am going to Mumbai...i know how to solve this problem..." angrily he walked towards his room...



Kaka was surprised to see Veer's reaction...his old eyes couldn't believe what they had seen...for the first time in his life Veer took the responsibility on his shoulders...



Kaka knew those men were dangerous and sometimes even carry some sharp weapons with them...he thought of informing the police and getting their help if the things get worse...





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Next Day...



"But Chandni how can we send you to an unknown place and why do you want to go now???" Meenakshi queried



Chandni knew her family would never allow her to go alone...she quickly thought over "well I am going with Maneka...actually its a project...we...we got it from the college..."



"Maneka!!!!... that's even shocking...how can her Father let her go alone...he's so over protected..." Kamini snapped annoyingly... "and girls don't go alone..."



Chandni was unable to convince them... she had to find another suitable way of going to Rajasthan...



"i am getting late for me college..." she picked up her bag and left...

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All the workers were surprised to see him... this was the first time when all the staff saw him in his senses...most of the time he was drunk when they saw him...



Veer asked them again... "so what are your demands???" his voice was loud and commanding... the workers could feel the authority and dignity in his voice that impressed them...



Rahgu and his men saw him from the distance... "he is becoming our hurdle...if the workers keep on listening to him then our plans will fail." they were not a part of the company... "we have to throw him out of our way..."



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"But Chandni...why only Rajasthan?? I mean the college trip can go somewhere else..." Professor Smita replied...



Maneka took out her huge pack of chips "forget it Chandni...i am telling you no one would go to Rajasthan..."



Chandni thought something and replied "but maam '..we already live in the hills and most of us haven't seen the desert and specially the beauty that Rajasthan has..."



Professor Smita was astonished as Chandni was never interested to go in any of the college trips but this time she was suggesting a place and trying to convince... "Chandni I am happy that you are participating in the college activities and events...but we have to take everyone's opinion..."




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After a long meeting with the directors '.Veer was driving towards home...but he was happy, for the first time in his life he realized how big his empire was...how many companies came under him but he was never interested to even look at his business...



now he realized why his Father couldn't give him much time... he saw his phone ringing "yes Kaka...don't worry everything's sorted...i will come tomorrow..."



as he kept the phone...he saw his bottle of whiskey... "how can I forget you" he stopped the car...opened the bottle and slugged ... it was difficult for him to live without drinking...



As he was driving when he saw few men coming in front of his car...Veer stopped the car...



Raghu looked at his men "lets get him out and kill him once and for all" they looked at Veer who was still sitting in the car...



after few seconds he stepped out with his bottle... they saw him drinking... Raghu smiled "he's drunk...its even more easier now"...they started approaching Veer who stood leaning against him car and drinking...



"wait" he shouted '.. "let me finish drinking..."



Raghu laughed at Veer "yes yes...let him finish...we can wait..." they all laughed...



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"It seems destiny has written your name on my every breath..." Chandni thought while moving her spoon in the empty plate...



"Chandni...what happened?? you aren't eating anything?" Meenakshi passed some salad to her...



Chandni's thoughts came to halt when she heard her mother's voice... "yes mom...thanks" she took the bowl...



she didn't thought anything and started her dinner...



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Veer threw the bottle away and walked towards Raghu who was smiling... but Veer punched him on his face... It was so hard that Raghu couldn't get up again... his men saw Veer full of anger...



They approached Veer who smashed, punched and kicked them all over making them difficult to get up... "can't believe...he's drunk and he can beat" one of them said while looking at Veer who casually walked towards the car...



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Maneka took out her books and searched Chandni's books to copy the assignment when she saw a watch in Chandni's bag...



she remembered she had bought this watch for Veer...Maneka remembered she didn't ask her again about Veer...and if there's only one watch it means Chandni must have given another watch to Veer...



Maneka looked at the watch "what is so special about this??" unknowingly she pressed the black button...

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Veer parked the car when he heard the beep... he saw the red light flashing in the dark... "So you are missing me??"



he pressed the button on his watch...

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Maneka looked a the flashing light... "what was that??..."

she again pressed the black button...


----

Veer smiled... and dialed her no...

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Chandni was trying to sleep from past two hours...she heard her phone...as soon as she looked at the no...she angrily picked it up "you don't leave a single day to let me sleep in peace" livid at Veer's behavior.



Veer wasn't sure what she was after... "why do you pretend??"



"now you are getting on my nerves Veer...just...just stop your nonsense" outraged at his attempt



Veer was silent for few seconds "enough Chandni...now you wait and see the result of this" he disconnected the phone making her think deeply about the consequences of her rudeness... she would definitely not be able to face the devil...what if he does anything this time...

.

She was angry at him but helpless at the same time...

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After few minutes...

"Maneka...is this the time to call??" Chandni was still furious over the previous caller who had completely snatched the sleep from her eyes...



"Chandni I know...but I wanted to inform you, that I have your watch with me...it was in your bag, and I pressed the black button on it...you know what it started glowing red..." Maneka told excitingly as if she found something new...



"oh no...Maneka...what???? why???" Chandni wanted to pull her own hair... "Maneka...who told you to press that button???...you are not less then him..." she canceled the phone leaving Maneka think what she had said...

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Chandni knew Veer must be thinking that she was giving him those signals... "oh God...please save me from the monster you have created in your wonderful world..."



It seemed sleep was vanished from her beautiful eyes...she switched on the lamp by the side of her bed...then turned it off... she repeated several times during night...



she thought of calling Veer and letting him know that she wasn't giving him any signals and it was...but she knew he would not believe...



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Next Day...


She was lost in what Veer had said the previous night



"enough Chandni...now you wait and see the result of this"



"Chandni...Chandni...where are you lost???" Kamini asked while offering her the sweets...



"no...nothing Grandma..." she took the sweets and drove for her college...



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"fine...give me the watch..." Chandni asked angrily...



Maneka gave her the bag "all your books are in this bag...and your watch as well..."



Chandni felt bad for getting angry at Maneka...incensed by her fate and the things happening with her again and again that make her paths crossing his path every time...as if her life cannot move ahead without him...



"Maneka...did you feel bad...i know I hurt you" Chandni said politely...



Maneka smiled at her "Chandni...i know something is disturbing you but if you don't want to tell its alright... I will always be there to help you"



"thanks Maneka..." Chandni smiled back and assured her she won't shout at her again...



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Kaka was furious with Manohar "if you don't believe anything...then I can't help it...but I have seen with my two eyes..."



Manohar laughed "i know these old eyes must have seen something very interesting...Kaka I already told you before that nothing is going to happen to Veer...and you created so many stories..."



Kaka knew it was a waste of time to talk to him...he carried on with his work...



Manohar laughed "if Veer heard your story...he will laugh as well"



"i don't want to argue with you anymore..." Kaka angrily walked away...



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Late evening...



Chandni had her dinner...she went for a warm bath as she usually does before sleeping... she filled her tub with warm water and her bubble bath...

she enjoyed, as it relaxed her from her thought... she was blowing the foam on her hand when she heard a sound...


confusedly she glanced around...she was shocked to see Veer looking at her from the window...

It was a huge window, and how come she forgot to lock it... "Veer..." she couldn't speak loudly as her family was downstairs and they could hear '...



he slowly entered the bathroom...and stood at a distance from her...



Chandni was angry and at the same time she wanted to cry... her fate was so bad that every time it created weird situations for her...

she couldn't come out of the tub as she wasn't wearing anything...she was miserably helpless and clueless...



"So Chandni...enjoying your bath" he smiled at her worried face...



Chandni knew the door of her bedroom wasn't bolted from inside and if anyone comes in... "no..." she said '.



Veer gazed at her worried and beautiful features "no!!!..." he took few steps from one side of the bathroom to another "well...i thought you were enjoying..."



She looked at the bathroom door that was bolted...she was relieved at least no one could enter the bathroom... "what are you doing here???" she sounded rude and angry...



Veer came closer to her "i have come to..."



Chandni frowned "come to what???"



Veer mischievously answered "have bath with you"



Chandni couldn't control her anger...if she would get one chance, she would definitely kill him and happily go to jail...

but anger won't help to let him stay away...she took a deep breath "Veer...please...just leave from here..." she must send him away before anyone sees him...

she looked at her bathrobe that was at a distance...her hand would not get there and she won't come out of the tub in front of him...

She again looked a him while his eyes fixed on her "Veer please leave..."



Veer started taking off his shirt...



"What are you doing Veer???" Chandni worriedly stared at him...



Chandni was now worried...she was sweating...her family was outside and here this devil was ready to enter her bath tub...she couldn't think of any way out...



As she saw him coming closer...she shut her eyes tightly...



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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏me 1st today too..
wil edit within five hrs...

😛 ~~EDITED~~
god god god,
such a crazy prt dis ws,

romance, fight, dhisum dhisum...thrill, suspense...evrythng
it ws a blast by god,
really loved its ech n evry part...

i thnk i wont be able to write evrythng, cover evrything in just one comment, but io will try ma best...

so, our veer hs become responsible, he cud not see anyone runing the hardwrk of his dad...
he is changing, he is now a man... hoye oye veer tussi chaa gye..
tussi gr88 ho yaar...

chandini, u shud take tuitions frm me for convining teachers...
u noe i m sooper good in convincing,...believe me,
u noe i cn convince teachers for possible n evn impossible reasons...

ma class lovs me for dis, n some times dey evn bribe me for dis,.. :P
u noe, i had a business on dis too...
they use to give me treat or do ma practical notes...

i wll miss those days...

but yeh teacher itne nakhre kyun dekha rhi h??
rajasthan hi tho jana h, kabrastan(graveyard) thode na le jaa rhi h.. :P

kya reason dhondha h humari cahndini ne...

👏"but maam '..we already live in the hills and most of us haven't seen the desert and specially the beauty that Rajasthan has..."🤣...

beauty of rajastan... disis d place wer our prithviraj chuahan h sanyogita's lov stry took place,...

so, veer has sorted our evrythng, he realized hw big his empire is...HAPPY REALIZATION.

"wait" he shouted '.. "let me finish drinking..."
wat ws dis...so crazy...amazing, lov dis scene...really hilarious...
rilli screwed me up by dis dialogue...
by god, hw killer hios attitude is😎

amzing...sooper cool.

yeh!..yipiee...
ver d sooper hero..

(1) he cn drive wen drunk too.
(2) he cn fight wen drunk... dis is better...

its different...no no no...its unique...

"It seems destiny has written your name on my every breath..." Chandni thought while moving her spoon in the empty plate...
wow, bechari ...abhi bhi uske baare main soch rhi h...
haye, jindagi ban gya h voh chand ki...

wow...
maneka se galtiyaan hoti h, i like her...
but achi galtiyaan hoti h...
good gal...
dis time she ws d reason for veer n chand encouter...

jug jug jiy0 maneka..tumhara pati tumhe bhott pyaar kare..
dil se dua...suabagya wati bhav...

god der is one more story apart frm veer -chand here, which i lov d most...
lo9vestory of-...KAKA -MANHOHAR🤣

god, they way dey romance...wat cn i say

Manohar laughed "i know these old eyes must have seen something very interesting...Kaka I already told you before that nothing is going to happen to Veer...and you created so many stories..."

😆🤣

how romantic...☺️..iss baat pr blush tho banta h☺️ n yeh bhi 🤣
sahi main, i lov kaka manohar...chemsitry...


god, wat a scene dat last one ws...

yeh!...so excited i m ...
bechari ko dhang se nanhane bhi nhi deta...
sacchi, kya jindagi h chandini ki by god...

veer, u r mindblasting...
so explosive...
ek dum volcanis eruption ho yaar...
bechai ki jaan nikal di h tumhe uske bathroon main aakr...

ab tho band bajh rhi h uski...

watt h by god...

such a sizzler scene na- chandini in bath tub...
veer will surely not able to control.

but evn if he some how resist..
i will give him gallantry award, he deserve it for being so courageous..and performing world's toughest task...

Veer came closer to her "i have come to..."



Chandni frowned "come to what???"🤣



Veer mischievously answered 🤣"have bath with you"🤣


🤣
rilli lovd dis reading..😍.by god, how crazy he is, n making me too.

i feel like dancing here
...
so he is removing his shirt..

possibilities
(1) either he is goin to enter the bath tub as he said- 0.00000000001% chances...(coz he is changed now)

(2) he is giving her his shirt to come out of bath tub...99.9999999999999% chances...

second option hav two advantages...
veer will look hot shirtless n chandini will look hot in his shirt, more then her bath robe...
both r looking hot... den plz give us a hot kiss here for sure plz...

frm many days we dinn had a kiss here...

plz, a kiss here...emotional n passionate...

lovely ud di,
wait did i forget smthing..
kaka, manohr ,menaka, ver n chand...evrything covered up...

okay, i m done..
thnx for the amazing ud..


lov u di..🤗

ud sooper soon.






Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think he is going to give her his shirt. Loved this part
And thanks for tr pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good ud dhanvi...enjoyed it thoroughly...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update dii \\
i loved it😛

hmm...so veer became responsible towards his company n business😃thats like a gud boy...

n chandni want to go rajasthan😲...veer se dur😕

well i always love manohar scene..he is so funny guy😆...
kaka happy for veer😃mee tooo😛...koi chandni ko bhi samjhao yar that he is not so bad...

agar mera bas chalta na to mein us raghu ki dono taang tod ker uske hath mein de deti bada aya veer ko maarne wala idiot😡

n last scene😳

di jaldi update karo...can't wait for next

plsss update sooon
love u😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!!
Veer started taking interest in his DAD's business!!!!
Loved the last Part!!!!
WAiting for the next update eagerly!!!!!😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
HI ... Excellent update, enjoyed reading it...continue soon :)) Love

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