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Posted: 14 years ago

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...Doctor...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Eeps!! I'm first. Yay!! 🥳

I'm so happy, it's really tough to be first on your OS or FF since they are so popular that everybody practically fights for commenting first. 😆

Okay this one was really hot!! ☺️

These two are really "The Wild ones" 😳

Btw what is the relation b/w arnav & khushi & why had khushi gone out with NK. 😕 Did I miss something?

Overall it was awesome. Great work by you & Mariam.

Keep writing. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Eeek! Yay you posted it :D

I love it

Your idea I just helped along :D

I love this OS you know it's awesome!

Our first collaboration 🥳

Love the ideaa and I lurrrveee youu lotss like a fat kid loves chocolate :D <3

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay SS! Where have you been hiding all the gutter until now!?

Love it! It's hot! Seriously hot!

I am afraid I am gonna have a sun-stroke actually, it's that hot!

Whew! I thought it was Arnav she was uncomfortable with at the beginning, but thank god I'm wrong!

Arnav, my boy, Kya style main pataya ray! I love the scenes where they kiss in between arguing, love them!

And the last part made me go 😳 ☺️

HAHA! Loved it, and u say I'm the cheeky one!

PS: I wish i had your bf's email or something, this is the one he should be reading! LMAO!🤣

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.Euphoria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Love the OS...Very hot! =)

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome.. hot and passionate..
i always loved Mariam's writing... she writes mature and passionate stuff so beautifully...
loved this os..

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved the os very hot and sexy loved it arnav and khushi having a lovers tift and the the make sex so cute thanks for the pm

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Aarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

HAYYEEE that was hot!!

Loved it! And the song is perfect with it! :)

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arisai

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Posted: 14 years ago

Well that was definitely not what I should've read in my revision break as now my head is spinning 😆

You both write so well that it blended together completely and didn't feel disjointed at all (which is something I've seen happen before on Collabs). It flowed really well and it fitted the mood of the song pretty brilliantly also.

Now that the technical compliment is out of the way...

That was so hot you guys: If I wasn't brown, I'd be blushing.

Excellent stuff! Seriously.

Have you two teamed up to write anything else before?

Edited by arisai - 14 years ago