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PART 121
Sam-But what I am trying to say is that he wasn't in correct state of mind just then to think about it...and he probably even regretted leaving you like that.. I bet he stayed up till you came back
Geet-What's the use of staying up?
Sam-He worries but he doesn't say it coz he won't admit it. He really does love you and he is trying not to make same mistakes again. Please bhabhi don't fight over this incident..please.. just for this once forgive him without a fight consider it as a wedding gift you can give me..
Itne mein Maan phir wapas aa jata hai
Maan- Tell him I wanna talk to him after you are done.
Maan says to Geet
She glances at him once then back on phone
Geet-Nahi, ab paani sar se upar jaa chuka hai. I tried m best that night. He has to say 'sorry' or he can stay with his ego forever
Sam-Bhabhi please... please don't be so angry he'll say it.. but please give him time.. he...it's not ego bhabhi he...have you ever been caged inside a cell and put on display? Can you imagine what that feeling is?
Geet-I told you, my problem isn't that. It's his attitude towards me. Fine, he has time. till the time, he doesn't say it...we are not talking
Sam-He loves you. He has never loved anyone or anything in his life before. He doesn't even love himself, I am pretty sure. So how can he know how to behave with a person he loves when its new to him. You came from a good family and nice parents, you know all the rules...he doesn't...he is still learning...would you grudge a 3 yr old child for leaving off to play and not telling his mother..?
Geet-A man who doesn't care about his wife's tears, what do you expect the wife to do?
Sam-I am sorry bhabhi he made you cry. It was all my fault
Geet-It's not. Don't blame yourself
Sam-I never should have said that he did it all by choice. I judged him when I should have been grateful..
Geet-It's not about you, he was like this before I met you too
Sam-Was he like this the first time too? Is there no change in him since then? Has he never cared about your tears? Is he still the same man you married? Coz he is not the same man who I knew
Geet-Sam congrats for your wedding...have a nice life ahead...I don't wanna talk about this...your friend wants to speak to you
Sam-Bhabhi please am sorry I'll apologize for him
Geet Maan ko phone thamaake goes to her room
Sam-Please bhabhi I am sorry
Maan just hears the I am sorry part
Maan- What the heck are you sorry about?!! What did you say to that her she is upset!!!I tell you I'll come and murder you if you said something stupid to her this time again. What are you apologizing to her for?
Maan chilla raha hai phone par
Sam-Pagal hai kya tu? Bawda ho gaya hai kya pyaar mein?
Maan- Pagal main?!!
Sam- Why would I say something stupid? You are stupid
Maan- You are the one upsetting her and now put the blame on me. She is not your anyone, saale@$$$%
Sam-You are the one who got her upset
Maan-So what? I know that and I am working on it. Who told you to add to her misery
Sam-And that working, is not working. Tune bade gull khila liye hain
Maan-Tereko kal samjhaya tha na raat mein. You leave her alone
Sam- Naraaz ho gai naa wo
Maan-Chup reh! I know what am doing
Sam-Ek 'sorry' nahi bola gaya naa tujhse
Maan- Sorry??
Sam-Yeah, and what is that? [he says sarcastically]
Maan-What should I apologize for? She walked away!
Sam-For breaking her heart, for making her upset
Maan-oh, I say a wrong word and her heart is broken...I don't want this anymore
Sam-Even if it wasn't your fault, you should say sorry. Because simply, you shouldn't like to see her being upset and if your saying sorry helps that, then do it
Maan- Like hell! I will let a woman have me wrapped around her little finger ever again in my enter life!!
Maan shouts in the phone and then disconnects
Geet ko kuch sunayi nahi diya isme se.. par shouting ka suna...sidiyon pe paas aa gayi thi wo
She narrowed her eyes and gave a hard stare then turned to her room
Geet jaake room mein let gayi
Maan comes thodi der baat
He goes and changes his clothe to fresh ones
Maan- I am going to office, I have some work to do.
Geet looks at the clock...its 4 in the evening but she doesn't say anything
Maan-I may be back late.. so... don't wait up...
Ab bhi chup Geet
Maan waits like for 5 seconds for her response then goes away
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PART 122
The architecture of the house Maanl's is like -there is hall with huge bar, kitchen in the side, stairs, dinning area under stairs neeche ek mama ka room, upar Maan ka, Maan ka small home office upar aur Maan ka home gym upar, phir upar terrace, saamne garden aur in back of the house swimming ppol with a bar again
Normally those malicious men come in the night to hog free drinks...just acquaintances...whoever mama would bring to hog free drinks...till now he never had problem as mama and him only lived in the house...but Maan was strictly against bringing women along...Maan ke ghar mein kaamwali bai bhi aurat nahi hai...Maanl is there with those men.. usually...par Maan hamesha chup chap kone mein baithke piita rehte hai and then also works as observation for him to so see what people like and what they don't.. market research bhi sath ke sath ho jati hai as he is in liquor business
But Some days of the year he doesn't allow anyone with him, he locks himself in his room and nobody is allowed to disturb...the two days- his birthday and his mom's death anniversary...he locks himself and gets himself severely drunk...he allows himself to lose control because those dates and days were those that witnessed the incidents those were not in his control
And, one of those days is near...it's tomorrow
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After he went at 4 in the evening after informing Geet
He comes back late in the night and follows his usual routine although he doesn't felt like doing it much..he is missing sitting in front of tv and being with Geet and her nagging him about his mistress
Geet as normal previous routine, khana dhak ke rakh deti hai, and locks herself in the room
Maan waits around till all drunks leave...rather makes them leave
In around another hour or so and then he goes up to his room
Geet is in the room, pretending to be sleeping as she couldn't sleep till Maan came
He comes inside silently...somehow he can guess that she is pretending but not really sleeping.. but he lets her keep up her pretence
He goes and keeps her laptop that he bought for her on her dressing table
Rakhte rakhte kuch cheezein gir bhi jati hain...he fumbles and swears under his breath...khoob awaaz karke...all undeliberate and unintentional
Geet has shut her eyes tight
He manages to restore all her bottles and stuff and the laptop on her dressing table
He turns and goes to bathroom to change
He even takes a bath.. all the smoke and alcohol smell is clinging to him and he just doesn't like it around her
As he goes to bathroom...Geet jhat se opens her eyes...takes a look at the laptop..it's swoon worthy...it's gorgeous
She opens the flap to take a look...it's the best and latest model
Geet is happily grinning like a teenager...she already loves the laptop
She notices a note on the laptop
It says-'Achieve all your dreams'
She smiles looking at it
As Maan comes out from washroom, Geet is still on her bed...eyes shut but there is another note on the laptop
It says-'Thank you'
Maan looks at the nod and feels good inside...like some weight had been lifted from his heart
He goes and settles down on his side of the bed...chup chap
Geet feels his presence beside her
He can't sleep...he can't go to sleep while she is awake...he is too tensed...especially with that thought of her leaving and tomorrow officially being the day his mom left.. it's like day of loss...he is too tensed o fall asleep... atleast not before Geet
Geet glances at him and he was staring back
He is lying on his back, eyes open
Geet-Eaten?
He nods
Maan-You?
She nods
Maan closes his eyes briefly but opens them again quickly, unable to keep them closed
She turns and closes her eyes and drifts in sleep
Kuch der baad Maan bhi so jaata hai his hand somehow creeping into her hair
But her hairs are tied today
So he clutches onto a bit of cloth of her nightie and slowly his hand is on her waist
But it's not only over her waist it's also holding onto her nightie in a tight fist
%%%%%%%%
Its morning-
She wakes up and opens her eyes
She feels her nightie tugging and a heavy hand on her waist and looks at her side at him
And he looks a.d.o.r.a.b.l.e...all disheveled hair and relaxed calm face
She looks and cant' help but smile
She feels like pulling his cheek
She tries to open his clenched fist that's clenching her nightie..but it's quite tight
She rubs her hand on his to wake him up , even taps it lightly
He doesn't wake up but he mutters something in his sleep which sounds like 'stay'...
She feels a bit mischievous...khisak ke Maanl ke kareeb jaati hai
Automatically Maan's arm curls arround her...pulling her closer in his arms
She comes closer to his face...blowing air lightly onto his ear
Maan ducks his face and nestles against her shoulder...letting out a little sigh
She glides her finger slowly from right to left of his forehead from his cheek to chin
He pulls her even mre closer.. somehow it isn't any more comfortable closeness..now it's more like he is clutching onto her as if she is his life saver boat and he is drowning
Geet-Maan
She whispers into his ear
Maan-Mom..
He whispers holding her tightly