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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Love Geet! Maan smiled! Superbly written!
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Posted: 13 years ago
POOR GEET
MAAN STARVED HER THE WHOLE DAYBUT FINALLY FED HER
AND NOW MUMBAI DARSHAN
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update dear...
Love ir...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 20
nice part...
Maan is such a Robot...
poor Geet subah is bhookhi thi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is workaholic as he didnt get hungry till night

loved it

thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful updates ana di
loved them
i hope maan takes her to see mumbai
waise um sure geet will definnitely take him out of his sorrows

dint understand the precap though
continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
hw can nyone skip his breakfast lunch n sometime dinner also due to only works...ok he is workaholic n he works he forgets everything bt hunger always reminds me its coming...with a hungry state noone can work properly cant concentrate in his work cant get proper energy n thats y his brain will also stop its working...maan is so mch addicted wth his work n over addiction to somthing is nt gd...
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Posted: 13 years ago





Geet: Maan sir now that we are not leaving today and can we go and see Mumbai City…….. I have heard that Mumbai never sleeps…….

Maan: What???

Geet: Sir aap ko sunne me problem hai kya……….

Maan: Geettt……..

Geet: sorry sir I was just joking…… Let us go to see Mumbai………

Maan: I am tired….. If you want to go you go alone………

Geet: How mean sir………. You are telling a girl to go alone……… Please sir chailye na….. pata nahi phir kabhi chance mile ya na mile……….

Maan looks at her and then says: theek hai chalo………

Geet gets super excited and hugs him tightly and unknowingly kiss on his cheeks………..

Maan was shocked…….. Geet realized it what she has done and she backs out from the hugs……

Geet (looks down): sorry…… who……

Maan did not wanted her to be more embarrassed so he just says: Chale……..

Geet just nods her head……..

Geet (self talk): Kya ho jata hai Geet tujhe……… what did you do now??? If he would get angry……. Forget him been angry….. how can you do that……..

Geet was just talking to herself and Maan sees her with amusement…….. Geet was still lost in the world of talking to herself…… Maan finally shook her…..

Maan: Geet if your talking is over with yourself can we go or otherwise your Mumbai will sleep and we have to go back to hotel………

Geet: ji……. I am telling you since last god only how many minutes……

Maan just shakes his head and both goes to the tour see Mumbai……..

They go to all the places of Mumbai……

Maan shows her Gateway of India, Nariman Point, Taj Mahal hotel, Malabhar hill, Haji Ali Dargha, Siddivinayak temple and many more places……..

Geet was enjoying seeing the places…………. And kept on asking him different type of question and Maan kept on giving different answers………

Geet: You did not show me the place who kya bolte hai jaha shooting hoti hai ya Bollywood and Tellywood………. I know that the shooting happens at Film city………..

Maan: Geet what is there to see in the film industry or any television industry and anyways it is too late to go there……… It is little far from the place we are here……….

Geet: theek hai…….. I am happy that atleast you showed me so many places…

Maan (self talk): Thank god she agreed……. Acha now can we go back to hotel…….

Geet: No No we have to see the most beautiful place still……..

Maan: and what is that………..

Geet: The Oueen's necklace……………

Maan: Queen's necklace???

Geet: ha Marine Drive……….. It is known as Queen's necklace na……..

Maan: Very good…… You know everything………

Geet just laughs and says: Lets go and see the beach…………

They head towards the Marine Drive………. Geet stands there and screams loudly her name……………… She was very happy to see Marine Drive…….. It was just beautiful………..

She takes him to the beach…….. She removes her sandals and start running on the beach………. Maan just keep on looking at her……..

Maan (self Talk): She is completely mad……………

Geet: Sir let us go in the water…………

Maan: No……………

Geet: Kya sir…… you don't know how to live your life……… Har din aise jina chaiye jaise ki akhri ho………….. Chaliye na sir……….

Maan: I said I don't want to come………

Geet start folding her salwar upwards so that she can go in the water….. Maan sees her……

Maan: Geet kya kar rahi ho tum yeh???

Geet: Sir apna salwar fold kar rahi hu….. so that I can go in the water……

Maan: You can stand here and see the water………

Geet: You stand here and see I am going………….

Geet start walking in the water…… Maan was doing something on his phone…….

Here Geet was enjoying in the water and throwing water………. She was herself getting wet but she was enjoying it…….. Maan just shook her head in amusement………… thinking that she is totally mad…………

At one corner some guys were sitting and having their drinks……… They were looking at Geet……….. She had become completely wet………. Her dress was sticking to her body………..

The whole gang was coming towards her…….. Maan noticed them but thought they were going somewhere else………

Here Geet was enjoying and calling Maan but Maan just kept on refusing…….

One guy: Hey Babes…….. We are there……….. Why are you calling him……

Geet was shocked and scared to see them…….

Second guy: Why are you scared………. Baby……….. Come let us play in water……

Maan came there and said: Come I will play with you all………..

Third guy: Hey you stay away from us……….

Maan: Why you want to play in water na…… I will play with you all…….

One guy comes to hit Maan but before that Maan kicks him…….. The others come to hit them but Maan start hitting everyone………

Geet gets scared and looks at them……. The previous incident comes in front of her……..

Maan just start hitting the whole gang and he also gets hit………. But after much of fighting the gangs just run away from there………..

Geet was so scared that she was just not in a position to move there……. Maan gets very angry and goes near Geet……..

Maan(angrily): Do you still want to play in the water………… Or should we go back…… It is already 1.00 at night………..

Geet was numb remembering the previous incident and again today's…….. She was just standing without any reaction……. The tears were flowing continuously………. Maan was so angry that he just shook her…….. The tears just could not stop as soon as She saw Maan she just hugged him and started crying………

Maan got worried and started consoling her……. She started shivering………. He removed his jacket and made her wear it………..

Maan took her to the hotel…….. He took her to her room…… She was still scared……….

Geet: You don't go anywhere……….. They will come again……… I will not go anywhere……….

Maan: I am not going anywhere……. Geet tum change karlo……… You will get fever………

Geet was so scared that she did not reacted at all…….. and She fall unconscious………….

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Posted: 13 years ago

Superb Update Ana 😛

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